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The art was great. I am not sure how the story is doing to go - a game rape is not a good start for character development. I also really didn't like the forth wall breaking. I realise it is a spoof of Deadpool but Deadpool is actually funny. This wasn't.
- Oct 14, 2019
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I was waiting for comments on my patreon page, but it seems that all the comments are here. Thanks to everyone for the feedback.
XOXO
- Jun 21, 2017
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- Apr 22, 2018
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No doubt, the art is outstanding, but its also something new in its style. Kind of reminds me of modern disney.
Beginning this story with a forced gangbanging experience is... unusual and problematic.
Its gonna be interesting how the dev will work around it. I hope he has a plan
Beginning this story with a forced gangbanging experience is... unusual and problematic.
Its gonna be interesting how the dev will work around it. I hope he has a plan
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- Nov 12, 2018
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Nympho here hoping there will be options for her to be willing to cooperate in the gangbang/ future sex scenes
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I wonder if you would say that if EVERY scene in a movie had Wolverine use his claws. Going to bathroom, Claws. Walking down the hall, Claws. Masturbating, Claws. Sleeping, Claws. Combing his hair, Claws. Watching TV, Claws. Trying to blend into a crowd, CLAWS!... you're complaining about fourth wall breaking in a parody (or rather alternate universe story) of Deadpool? C'mon, that's like reading a book about Wolverine and complaining that he has metal claws.
Isn't there a point where you use something so much that it dilutes it's impact? Personally I like the 4th wall breaking... to a point, but then I get annoyed by it. Even in Deadpool they limited the 4th wall breaking.
TLDR: Some 4th wall breaking is good in context, to much is bad.
You and I like different things LOL. Why would a cop want to fuck criminals??? My brain would freak that it would make no sense.
- Jun 14, 2018
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I honestly like this a lot, it's sharp in humor and the art's pretty good. Obviously downside is that it's short but that will hopefully change soon.
- Jun 10, 2018
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Pretty good teaser.
The tongue in cheek style works well (so far) and the art is fantastic. My main worry here is the heroine looks gorgeous but may lose that as quickly as the next image?... Such a shame.
Will definitely follow to see where this goes. Good start.
The tongue in cheek style works well (so far) and the art is fantastic. My main worry here is the heroine looks gorgeous but may lose that as quickly as the next image?... Such a shame.
Will definitely follow to see where this goes. Good start.
- Apr 10, 2018
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those game ratings speak for themselves. i stand by my statement until given a reason not to. it's also not slander when it's true. what you have here is a few minute tech demo with a patreon set up to make bank off of it. as someone who has tossed down thousands on adult indie game devs, i'll say it exactly how i see it if a dev is making their game look like a cash grab. they are more than welcome to prove me wrong.
This is so annoying. The Deadpool movies do it cleverly. The beginning of this game is non-stop breaking the 4th wall. Undermines the really great art.
It's like you're trying to talk to someone IRL and they keep referring to themselves in the 3rd person.
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