Typos: When Fionne starts fondling the archer, it says "it doesn't take long it doesn't take long". Later, Fionne says "we should be to get out of here".
Also, I meant to point this out earlier (when you talked about "making the game funnier"), but "funnier" actually means something completely different than "more fun". "Funnier" means "more funny", as in something that makes you laugh, and "funner" isn't a word, which is probably why you keep accidentally saying the closest real word. So unless Lilith is trying to say that Chloe makes her laugh, she should be saying Chloe is "more fun" when she's horny.
Hmm... Is that really all there is in this update? Just the beginning dialogue of Chapter 13, some brief dialogue between the new characters on the second turn, and then the end of content with no scene after finishing the chapter? I just want to make sure I didn't miss out on a scene from catching the new characters in the beginning of the chapter, or something. It's impossible to catch them, but only because Chloe can't move on her first turn, and I'm not sure if that's intentional or not.