VN Ren'Py Shadows of Deceit [Chapter 1] [First Sin]

[Tuor_of_Gondolin]

Okay. I'm going to be That Guy (tm.)

When it comes to working on machines, including cars, you don't get nearly that greasy, unless you're a beginner. MC and Jane looked like they lost a fight with a grease gun -- badly. Yeah, you'll get *some* grease or oil on your hands, but there's stuff like Lava Soap (pumice-based soap), shop rags, and similar stuff to keep your hands clean. Clean hands allow you to properly manipulate tools and parts.

I mean, if you're going for excessive drama by smearing grease everywhere (and Jane does look good all lubed up), then sure, but just keep in mind that real mechanics rarely get all that greasy.

This message has been brought to you by That Guy (tm.). We now return you to your regularly scheduled thread.

 

[christophe]

Any hero for Android version please

 

[halfwayghost]

these games always missing anal smh

 

[Tuperr0]

Niceeee

 

[Forgotted]

Are we able to rename the characters? (without a patch)

Thx

 

[Here4Food]

My dude we need to discuss what chapters are and what introductions are. This is an INTRODUCTION.
Its so flipping short calling it a chapter is an insult. Even college essays have more than this.

I'm not gonna write a review tho cause its kinda cold when you can easily tweak or merge it with later work.

this is like 10 minutes long and barely anything happens. grammar is meh. i also think it's worth to bring this up:

I did a little digging cause I was curious. the dev of this game has actually made a grand total of 3 different games under a different username "JustAnotherDegenerate". They date back to 2020 and he made a big effort to completely wipe any mention of them from both his patreon and subscribestar, expect for a single comment under his earliest post on patreon that is still up. All 3 of those game are abandoned. I am very surprised no one has mentioned this before. Now when it comes to this dev being the same dev as the one from "The Falling", that is also very likely. Aside from the renders itself and the general writing, both "TheFalling" and "FirstSin" patreon accounts went under review. "TheFalling" patreon account got unlocked on 15th of December 2023 and that is also the same day when "FirstSin" account also got unlocked. I might be looking too much into this but I wouldn't be surprised if the dev has even more games under different names.

Nevermind I'm checked out now after reading this.

 

[LionBear]

Thanks for sharing this.

 

[Reniere]

Dude got 2 games and barely made a dent in his first game.
What makes you think this will be any different ?
If i was a supporter i would be alarmed that he hasn't made any progress on his first game and now he has another.

 

[raider_manhc]

it all looked interesting until last picture...wtf is this horse size dick? there is realistic, then there is the usual oversized dicks and then there is this ridiculus horse sized. lost interest when i saw this... no matter how good a story is giving the guy an ridiculus size dick just mess up everything

 

[Ying Ko]

Dude got 2 games and barely made a dent in his first game.
What makes you think this will be any different ?
If i was a supporter i would be alarmed that he hasn't made any progress on his first game and now he has another.

View attachment 5634589

plus whale tier commission content.

 

[IdanSama]

SUCH A FUCKING HOT MOM WITH SUCH A FUCKING GREAT ASS LETS GO!!!! gotta dominate and spank that mom

 

[Irrfan007]

great

 

[PragmaticCynic]

Haha, oh man, this looks like the kind of shit that blows up fast lol.
I wonder if we get 100 pages in a week.

This won't happen and there are many reasons for this, one of them is the trap with screenshots and how the dev himselves spoiled the content of the second and third parts. Lol
I understand that this is to attract attention, but what is the point of such spoilers if they briefly told you the plot of the future two parts?
The fact that the dev managed to transfer Lilith from Gen 3 to Gen 8 or 9 is cool, but the teeth of almost all the female characters need some work.
And the fact that the dev has already abandoned projects, coupled with the spoiler itself, doesn't inspire much hope - although it part one looks nice.