VN Ren'Py Shadows of Deceit [Chapter 1] [First Sin]

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Here4Food

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My dude we need to discuss what chapters are and what introductions are. This is an INTRODUCTION.
Its so flipping short calling it a chapter is an insult. Even college essays have more than this.

I'm not gonna write a review tho cause its kinda cold when you can easily tweak or merge it with later work.

Black Orchid said:
this is like 10 minutes long and barely anything happens. grammar is meh. i also think it's worth to bring this up:
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Black Orchid said:
I did a little digging cause I was curious. the dev of this game has actually made a grand total of 3 different games under a different username "JustAnotherDegenerate". They date back to 2020 and he made a big effort to completely wipe any mention of them from both his patreon and subscribestar, expect for a single comment under his earliest post on patreon that is still up. All 3 of those game are abandoned. I am very surprised no one has mentioned this before. Now when it comes to this dev being the same dev as the one from "The Falling", that is also very likely. Aside from the renders itself and the general writing, both "TheFalling" and "FirstSin" patreon accounts went under review. "TheFalling" patreon account got unlocked on 15th of December 2023 and that is also the same day when "FirstSin" account also got unlocked. I might be looking too much into this but I wouldn't be surprised if the dev has even more games under different names.
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Nevermind I'm checked out now after reading this.
 
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it all looked interesting until last picture...wtf is this horse size dick? there is realistic, then there is the usual oversized dicks and then there is this ridiculus horse sized. lost interest when i saw this... no matter how good a story is giving the guy an ridiculus size dick just mess up everything
 
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♍VoidTraveler said:
Haha, oh man, this looks like the kind of shit that blows up fast lol. :sneaky::coffee:
I wonder if we get 100 pages in a week.
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This won't happen and there are many reasons for this, one of them is the trap with screenshots and how the dev himselves spoiled the content of the second and third parts. Lol
I understand that this is to attract attention, but what is the point of such spoilers if they briefly told you the plot of the future two parts?
The fact that the dev managed to transfer Lilith from Gen 3 to Gen 8 or 9 is cool, but the teeth of almost all the female characters need some work.
And the fact that the dev has already abandoned projects, coupled with the spoiler itself, doesn't inspire much hope - although it part one looks nice.
 
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raider_manhc said:
it all looked interesting until last picture...wtf is this horse size dick? there is realistic, then there is the usual oversized dicks and then there is this ridiculus horse sized. lost interest when i saw this... no matter how good a story is giving the guy an ridiculus size dick just mess up everything
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It's also a horse dick with an STD peral necklace around his dickhead!
 
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mrbigchungus

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From the description I think the fantasy tag should be added. Screenshots are nice...but yeah, if those are sneak previews that aren't in the existing first chapter, that's a little confusing. Good luck with the game dude. I love fantasy stuff.
 
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