Thanks to Saint Blackmoor, the script has been fixed, as has the Overview, but I haven't shared the fixed version yet.
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- Jul 13, 2021
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Ha, how did you guess?! I'm writing the script for Chapter 2, so judging by the end of that chapter... you'll find the answer in Chapter 3.
- Jul 2, 2021
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A fun game, although the story's a bit weak. The graphics are really good, looking forward to the next episode!
- Aug 31, 2019
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I have seen them, and I must say, if the game has even half of what I saw there, you are bound to see me in your subscribestar account sooner rather than later.
- Dec 30, 2020
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The renders, the concept, and the location are all top notch. This VN is just missing a writer/editor to assist you with the script...which at times feels narratively disjointed, or like text is just flat out missing. If you are going more porn focused it doesn't need to be Shakespeare...but I still think it would be the easiest area to improve. Also, nothing wrong with easy ladies, but can be hotter if the MC takes some control at points, otherwise waters down what I believe is intended to be mdom.
Congrats on a strong first release, and good luck moving forward!
Congrats on a strong first release, and good luck moving forward!
Thank you! I'm very glad I did it not for nothing. As for the script, I'll update the links with a corrected version (no more Engrish). I understand why the text feels empty, I tried to make Silent Hill style dialogues, but it doesn't seem to work without voices, I mean long pauses in dialogues to give them some kind of mystery.
Sharing is optional, beastality for the story reason (flashback, personal story).
- Jun 1, 2020
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Sharing means with males or females or both?
And beastality is for the MC or for the main Li's?
Sharing with a male (Trap), as for females - group sex (MC F F) is sharing?
Beastality is only for one of the main Li.
- Sep 25, 2022
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yeah i avoided most of the new releases with good art because they end up only on 0.1
Future tag: transformation? Will this be mc transforming into a woman or something different?
looks promising
looks promising