VN Ren'Py Abandoned Shards of the Past [v0.3.1] [Garou24]

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FunkyMunky60

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Just completed my first PT of this AVN. A really nice game with a lot of effort invested in character development. The storylines are also intriguing, the in-game choices matter, the cast of characters is diverse, the visuals are very good, and the soundtrack is a great accompaniment. A promising game, and one I believe is worthy of my support.
 

Molly_O

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Please, please Garou24, do not burn the girls into sex addicted monsters. Stay in your development. The earlier the wankers come to their goal, the faster the erotic and the expectation of the game fades. There are enough games with dirty sex at the beginning, but after that, the games are only boring. Your game have the potential to maintain the tension for a very, very long time,
 

MagicMan753

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Garou24 Really love Qinara and the slow build for all the characters the story is interesting. I am excited to see where it goes. My one minor gripe is the hair, I wish he would get a haircut soon, but thats my own little personal gripe, cause I don't like the long hair. It is unfortunately probably not in your plans.

Either way I am really excited to see more and to give Qinara the love she deserves. Keep up the great work on this game.
 
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Garou24

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Please, please Garou24, do not burn the girls into sex addicted monsters. Stay in your development. The earlier the wankers come to their goal, the faster the erotic and the expectation of the game fades. There are enough games with dirty sex at the beginning, but after that, the games are only boring. Your game have the potential to maintain the tension for a very, very long time,
The romance is a slow burn so my goal is to put the story first and give readers time to get invested in that as well as develop a meaningful relationship with the main characters. Lewd scenes with the main girls will happen later where makes sense for the story and your relationship. There is a chance for some content with side characters sooner that would be along the lines of a one night stand type of interaction. Or just go the full story and don't sleep with anyone :)
 

Garou24

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Garou24 Really love Qinara and the slow build for all the characters the story is interesting. I am excited to see where it goes. My one minor gripe is the hair, I wish he would get a haircut soon, but thats my own little personal gripe, cause I don't like the long hair. It is unfortunately probably not in your plans.

Either way I am really excited to see more and to give Qinara the love she deserves.
The MC's hair is a product of lack of assets when I started creating the characters. It is an older asset and a pain to work with and I have thought about giving him a bit of an upgrade now that there are even more fitting hair assets. The biggest hurdle is finding a spot in the story where it makes sense. I probably wouldn't go with something too short to create a drastic change but I have thought about changing his hair at some point in the story.
 

RewindWorld

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Anyone else thinks that Qinara is a little too much of a pacifist and might be difficult to deal with because of it?

The MC's hair is a product of lack of assets when I started creating the characters. It is an older asset and a pain to work with and I have thought about giving him a bit of an upgrade now that there are even more fitting hair assets. The biggest hurdle is finding a spot in the story where it makes sense. I probably wouldn't go with something too short to create a drastic change but I have thought about changing his hair at some point in the story.
Just leave the girls alone, please. I like them with longer hair. :D
 

Molly_O

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The MC's hair is a product of lack of assets when I started creating the characters. It is an older asset and a pain to work with and I have thought about giving him a bit of an upgrade now that there are even more fitting hair assets. The biggest hurdle is finding a spot in the story where it makes sense. I probably wouldn't go with something too short to create a drastic change but I have thought about changing his hair at some point in the story.
When visiting Damerek's family, Odiree, as I call Damerek's wife, suggests a new hairstyle for the main character after he comes out of the bathtub with wet hair. She immediately grabs her scissors and “snip snip the hair is off”, or someone else if you have a better idea
 
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Molly_O

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Anyone else thinks that Qinara is a little too much of a pacifist and might be difficult to deal with because of it?

Just leave the girls alone, please. I like them with longer hair. :D
You're right.

I hope Qinara is hard to take. Let the main character grind his teeth on her coolness. He charms her, and she rejoices in it. She lets the main character squirm a little, only throwing crumbs at his feet. Many crumbs make a cake. She enjoys this moment in which he tries to seduce her and fails. She sets the pace for the desire. But in her deepest dreams, she already wants him.

I'm looking forward to the sequel...
 
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