VN Ren'Py Shattered Dreams: Redemption [v0.5] [Nebula Dreams]

[AlexMpog]

There's a scene in the latest update with Maddie, where MC is sorry he doesn't use a condom, because he knows she feels nauseous with the morning after pill. It's actually a really nice moment between the pair.

Yep, that scene was very sweet, everything is in details here, - and it shows that MC actually cares - just like in a few previous updates where it was shown that Maddie cares as well.
I mean, the chemistry must have been really well done, because even I, someone who hates any forced relationships/lewds, love Maddison.

As for Ella, her design was created during the development of version 0.2 (her first appearance), and I think it's the one I pulled off the best.

Indeed, she’s absolutely gorgeous

 

[Ragnar]

Does the MC have some kind of autismo? Because he acts like a tard in the last scene with the k-pop girl.
Assuming you're pursuing her path the scene doesn't make sense the way is written right now.
She opens to him when she needs him the most and he's like Hey, hey, stop right there! I'm here for the money first lady.

 

[metamorphMP]

Stupid is making your character a child murderer (her own child) and on top of that without any story purpose or role in the story, except to show that the MC “cares that he doesn't get nauseous” after killing his own child in his womb. Had he given her flowers, or something like that if you wanted to give the idea that the MC is a caring guy!

You're supposed to want the player to be attracted to the character right? You really think that's appealing? For me, you've ruined that Li (the only one I liked, really, because she's not a bitch) and the game. And that, has nothing to do with censorship. Child murder, even if legalized because of WOKE ideology, and censorship, are different things.

And by the way, the morning after pill is not a contraceptive method. It does not prevent pregnancy. It kills the fetus, if there is one. It doesn't matter a damn if it is at 1 minute after conception, or one minute before delivery. A human fetus developing in a human womb is a human being in gestation, one of the natural phases of LIFE.

 

[Mii88]

Does the MC have some kind of autismo? Because he acts like a tard in the last scene with the k-pop girl.
Assuming you're pursuing her path the scene doesn't make sense the way is written right now.
She opens to him when she needs him the most and he's like Hey, hey, stop right there! I'm here for the money first lady.

Yep, it was disappointing but maybe as it was the cliff hanger at the end of the chapter he will redeem himself so I'm prepared to give him the benefit of the doubt.

 

[Amedore]

It’s almost comical — a simple two-word Google search would show that the morning-after pill is specifically designed to prevent pregnancy by delaying or stopping ovulation, meaning no fertilization, no embryo, no fetus.

Okay, you're right. My understanding was that this pill interrupts pregnancy, but effectively, it prevents it, it does not interrupt it if it has already occurred. I apologize, I overreacted. I'm sorry.

 

[WeAreChecking]

Does the MC have some kind of autismo? Because he acts like a tard in the last scene with the k-pop girl.
Assuming you're pursuing her path the scene doesn't make sense the way is written right now.
She opens to him when she needs him the most and he's like Hey, hey, stop right there! I'm here for the money first lady.

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[Ragnar]

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Can be a cultural thing, MC looks asian or hapa and she's a k-pop singer

In February 2013, AKB48 member Minami Minegishi shaved her head as a public apology for breaking the group's dating ban. The incident, which involved a photo of her leaving a man's apartment, garnered significant media attention both in Japan and internationally. Minegishi's apology, which included a tearful video and explanation of her decision to shave her head, was widely discussed and criticized for its perceived harshness and the cultural context of AKB48's strict rules.

 

[Nebula Dreams]

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[AlexMpog]

Does the MC have some kind of autismo? Because he acts like a tard in the last scene with the k-pop girl.
Assuming you're pursuing her path the scene doesn't make sense the way is written right now.
She opens to him when she needs him the most and he's like Hey, hey, stop right there! I'm here for the money first lady.

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What do you mean by "assuming you're pursuing her"?)) Unless I missed smth - there haven't been any choices related to Min-hee's path so far, only for other 4 main girls, sure, main story is centered around Mina's plot line, but that's it, her story is pretty kinetic.
So the idea of 'pursuing her' exists only in your heads, also rejecting all other girls doesn't automatically mean you're going after Mina, you could be going full monk mode, for all I know

 

[Ragnar]

What do you mean by "assuming you're pursuing her"? Unless I missed smth - there haven't been any choices related to Min-hee's path so far, only for other 4 main girls, sure, main story is centered around Mina's plot line, but that's it, her story is pretty kinetic.
So the idea of 'pursuing her' exists only in your heads, also rejecting all other girls doesn't automatically mean you're going after Mina, you could be going full monk mode, for all I know.

I mean avoiding the other girls and being there for her whenever she asks. I don't remember every choice the game has tbh. But even if you're not given any choice in the matter the scene comes off as strange one to me. A hot singer confides in you all teary eyed, makes a move and your reaction is Oi, my money!

 

[WeAreChecking]

Can be a cultural thing, MC looks asian or hapa and she's a k-pop singer

In February 2013, AKB48 member Minami Minegishi shaved her head as a public apology for breaking the group's dating ban. The incident, which involved a photo of her leaving a man's apartment, garnered significant media attention both in Japan and internationally. Minegishi's apology, which included a tearful video and explanation of her decision to shave her head, was widely discussed and criticized for its perceived harshness and the cultural context of AKB48's strict rules.

What the fuck, that's crazy.

 

[Avaron1974]

99% of the game is great but the MC has one super annoying flaw....

Anytime someone says or hints they shouldn't talk about a certain subject he instantly asks them about that subject.

Luca tells him not to talk about his personal life, says not 2 minutes before that he's not happy MC knows about his family ...... MC instantly asks him about his family. Like, honey, shut the fuck up.

Same with Mina, "he can I ask you about that situation you clearly don't want to talk about".....

Amusingly, the minute she asks him about money, a subject he just brought up, he clams up.

It just makes him look a bit simple in the head.

What the fuck, that's crazy.

K-pop fans are well known for being quite literally batshit insane.

Like death threats for dating insane.

The managerial staff are just as bad.

The whole Idol industry is toxic as fuck.

 

[Ciaran8023]

K-pop fans are well known for being quite literally batshit insane.

Like death threats for dating insane.

The managerial staff are just as bad.

The whole Idol industry is toxic as fuck.

Korean stan culture is insane in general. Multiple k-pop artists and actors/actresses have been driven to the point of suicide from the fans/workplace pressure.
Absolutely fucking disgusting behaviour.

 

[Perv_Old_Robot]

Great harem game. Good idea to bring the k-pop culture scenario in the plot.

 

[Rodrigo Tannuri]

The 2 brunettes are incredible S2

 

[GooseElite]

Had fun playing through it. I liked how alive it felt and how the story progressed over time instead of everything happening in the same week.

 

[MiltonPowers]

Great harem game. Good idea to bring the k-pop culture scenario in the plot.

Ummm. Not a harem game.

 

[Avaron1974]

Great harem game. Good idea to bring the k-pop culture scenario in the plot.

This isn't a harem game, flower.

There will be no NTR/NTS (etc...) or Harem

 

[Noble_Undergrounder_of_Ea]

Ummm. Not a harem game.

This isn't a harem game, flower.

I guess you could say you Shattered his dreams of it being a harem...

 

[drh64]

Is there a cut off point where you have to choose one LI.