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That'll be the sequel. It's called shattered arse.
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In that case there would have to be a gay tag kkk, but what happened to mc's mom? they killed her again because of Patreon kkk
- Dec 4, 2017
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She left them long ago iirc...there is an uncle which got him the current job, i don't think any other family mentioned.
That title would be ironic if this was his 2nd AVN after an abandoned one like often happens.
No lolis or even incest either. The disappointment is piling up fast. Though I see a Patreon link, so at the same time not surprised.
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- Oct 26, 2017
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After playing:
I liked it. There is a good amount of content for a first showing. The animations are good, and the girls are beautiful.
The story is interesting and comes at you from many directions.
Two points of criticism:
Some scenes are too dark, and the grammar/syntax is a bit off... only a bit.
I look forward to more.
I liked it. There is a good amount of content for a first showing. The animations are good, and the girls are beautiful.
The story is interesting and comes at you from many directions.
Two points of criticism:
Some scenes are too dark, and the grammar/syntax is a bit off... only a bit.
I look forward to more.
- Jan 21, 2021
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Shame about no harem but still seems interesting, I'll wait for it to have a bit more meat before jumping in but congrats on the release dev.
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So, when I did the normal checking if the Universal Mods work with this game, at first all I was seeing for choices was "Faster" "Slower" "Continue" that sort of thing. I thought, great, another what I call Glorified Kinetic Novel, where only choices they have is stuff that doesn't make any difference anyways. But figured, I would give this game the benefit of the doubt, and sure enough, eventually reached choices that does make a difference, and the Universal Mods worked with it too, so that was when I decided to add to my list to play tonight. Just got caught up with the Dev, and glad I decided to add it. Not only did it surprise me with having actual choices, but an interesting storyline as well. Really curious where this is going in so many aspects of this game. Thank you so very much for this, and looking forward for more!!!
So this game looks interesting, however if it force us to choose a girl its going to be rough, too many likeable girls make it hard to chose. Two things I found to be non-sense however, first is the whole thing with Mina being set up by her agent as if they'd expect her to serve as an escort to one of their big investors, that sort of thing might happen to a newbie or a low profile celebrity, but doing that to a high profile celebrity is insane.
If the story was written as if she was a low profile celebrity that was dependent on MEA to still earn her bread it would make sense, but saying that she is one of the top celebrity completely makes the story non-sense on that angle, if she was made out to be a low profile celebrity that would have to take a risk to act in defiance of her agent and possibly try to pull the carpet from under him by I assume changing to the MC as her agent it would make sense, serve to make this plotline more appealing, but right now she can just say "MC is my new agent" and realistically the company is going to just say "okay yea anything you wish", sure her agent would be complaining, but at this point between her and her agent MEA would value her far more than him. A major celebrity is worth FAR more than any of the staff at that company, short of the CEO their is not much they wouldn't throw under a bus for a top rank celebrity.
Next issue frankly, the MC was a basketball player? Really? He is way too short to be a top of the line basketball player, I mean he should be a head above anyone else in the game that isn't involved in basketball, ever played WVM? That MC makes sense to be a top of the line college player, he is so damn tall he is standing right next to the girls and you can't see his head so tall he is, but this MC is barely taller than the girls around him, I could see him as a football quarterback or runner, a baseball player, a soccer player, but basketball? Nope. I know that not all basketball players are giants, but... that being said, most are and those that are the most well known tend to be in vast majority giants, not just an average guy height.
If the story was written as if she was a low profile celebrity that was dependent on MEA to still earn her bread it would make sense, but saying that she is one of the top celebrity completely makes the story non-sense on that angle, if she was made out to be a low profile celebrity that would have to take a risk to act in defiance of her agent and possibly try to pull the carpet from under him by I assume changing to the MC as her agent it would make sense, serve to make this plotline more appealing, but right now she can just say "MC is my new agent" and realistically the company is going to just say "okay yea anything you wish", sure her agent would be complaining, but at this point between her and her agent MEA would value her far more than him. A major celebrity is worth FAR more than any of the staff at that company, short of the CEO their is not much they wouldn't throw under a bus for a top rank celebrity.
Next issue frankly, the MC was a basketball player? Really? He is way too short to be a top of the line basketball player, I mean he should be a head above anyone else in the game that isn't involved in basketball, ever played WVM? That MC makes sense to be a top of the line college player, he is so damn tall he is standing right next to the girls and you can't see his head so tall he is, but this MC is barely taller than the girls around him, I could see him as a football quarterback or runner, a baseball player, a soccer player, but basketball? Nope. I know that not all basketball players are giants, but... that being said, most are and those that are the most well known tend to be in vast majority giants, not just an average guy height.
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Thank you all for your responses!
Regarding "MILF", I currently don’t have any planned, but who knows—maybe it could happen in the future.
If you pay attention to the limited interactions between Mina and Finlay, you’ll notice they’re quite unique, and that Finlay seems to have a certain hold over her.
I don’t want to reveal too much, but as the story progresses, the reasons behind Mina’s and Finlay’s behavior will become clearer.
I hope you’ll eventually understand in the future why Mina didn’t immediately stand up to Finlay from the start, but we’re still too early in the story for that to be fully explained.
Regarding the MC’s height, I agree.
When I initially made several renders, I tried increasing his height to make him almost a head taller than everyone else, but it caused clipping issues with some clothes (his body would poke through the outfits), and I just didn’t have the energy to redo everything. That said, Alex is still slightly taller than the default models.
Aside from Lena, the model, I believe he’s already taller than all the girls, and as for the other guys, they’re about the same height.
Regarding "MILF", I currently don’t have any planned, but who knows—maybe it could happen in the future.
Let me quickly address your first point regarding Mina’s actions, even though she is one of, if not the, biggest celebrity at MEA.
If you pay attention to the limited interactions between Mina and Finlay, you’ll notice they’re quite unique, and that Finlay seems to have a certain hold over her.
I don’t want to reveal too much, but as the story progresses, the reasons behind Mina’s and Finlay’s behavior will become clearer.
I hope you’ll eventually understand in the future why Mina didn’t immediately stand up to Finlay from the start, but we’re still too early in the story for that to be fully explained.
Regarding the MC’s height, I agree.
When I initially made several renders, I tried increasing his height to make him almost a head taller than everyone else, but it caused clipping issues with some clothes (his body would poke through the outfits), and I just didn’t have the energy to redo everything. That said, Alex is still slightly taller than the default models.
Aside from Lena, the model, I believe he’s already taller than all the girls, and as for the other guys, they’re about the same height.
Thank you for clarifying it, and please don't ever change your opinion on this topic. The story's perfect as it is, there's no need for any cuck content.
So, I assume the LIs are Maddison (she too perfect to be a side piece), Lena, Mina and Jennie, and the 5th one will probably be introduced in the next update. Sounds great, they're all gorgeous. Can't wait to romance and impregnate them all.
My only 'complaint' is there's no blondes and black women (except Serena). C'mon, man. No love for drop-dead gorgeous blue-eyed blondes and thicc black women ??
That's not a good idea, if you ask me and most users in this thread interested in the game. I think it'd best to keep any lesbian interaction between the girls strictly reserved for the potential 3somes, 4somes, reverse gangbangs, or whatever else is planned between them and the MC as foreplay for the good stuff that follows afterward. This way, I don't think anyone will have a problem with some of the girls playing with each other, but there's no point in making optional lesbian scenes like that most players don't care about. It'll only cost you time and resources you could've spent on the story and MC's sex scenes.
Lol, it's those free-spirited lil bihs who like bragging about their tastes, preferences and boundaries in dating or hooking up only to hear them start bitching about men's own tastes, preferences and boundaries.Lena 2nd best for looks, but she clearly didn't like my answers to her questions
Apparently, a guy not being ok with his girl showing her (naked) ass on IG for desperate lil dicked simps and rich assholes makes him hypocritical OR, their favorite one, insecure. How the fuck does that make any sense, when it's their own logic used against them lol ?? Would still smash Lena tho.
Lolis NEED to be permabanned by the (un)holy porn game law, only thicc and supermodel tier women allowed. How 'bout that for a much-needed change ??
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Damn, don’t spoil my story…So, I assume the LIs are Maddison (she too perfect to be a side piece), Lena, Mina and Jennie, and the 5th one will probably be introduced in the next update. Sounds great, they're all gorgeous. Can't wait to romance and impregnate them all.
My only 'complaint' is there's no blondes and black women (except Serena). C'mon, man. No love for drop-dead gorgeous blue-eyed blondes and thicc black women ??
More seriously, you’ll see in the future. The last LI will appear, but it won’t be obvious right away that she’s the fifth one.
Don’t worry, if I wrote this from the start, it was to clarify things, and I’m not going to change the essence of my story over a few critiques here.Thank you for clarifying it, and please don't ever change your opinion on this topic. The story's perfect as it is, there's no need for any cuck content.
I don’t see it that way—there’s no time or resources wasted on things like this. The scene isn’t written yet, but I already have a "framework," and I know where I want to incorporate it.
To me, it has value for the story, so it will be included.
Maybe only 20% of players will choose to see that scene, and that’s fine—they made the choice, and it will be their decision.
But that way of thinking as a creator doesn’t work for me. If I start trying to optimize my work in that way, I’d have to cut a lot of scenes.
If I telling myself I need to remove this lesbian scene, or another scene with footjob, or some other "specific" kink, then I’d be betraying myself because I wouldn’t have stayed true to my way and desire to create.
It also adds variety and uniqueness for me. Otherwise I would only do 3somes scenes with girls with big tits, big asses and 3 ejaculations in a row and while that might appeal to a broader audience, it’s not what I want to do.
We're not talking about porn, or OF models, but take someone like Emily Ratajkowski— I think a lot of men fantasize about her and would love to have her or a girl sexy like her as a girlfriend.Lol, it's those free-spirited lil bihs who like bragging about their tastes, preferences and boundaries in dating or hooking up only to hear them start bitching about men's own tastes, preferences and boundaries.
Apparently, a guy not being ok with his girl showing her (naked) ass on IG for desperate lil dicked simps and rich assholes makes him hypocritical OR, their favorite one, insecure. How the fuck does that make any sense, when it's their own logic used against them lol ?? Would still smash Lena tho.
Yet, if it happens, wouldn’t it be hypocritical to try to forbid her from doing what she does and what made you fantasize about her so much in the first place? Don’t you think?
I’m not saying that no matter who your girlfriend is, you should allow her to do these kinds of things, but you can’t forbid her from doing something you enjoyed watching her do before you were together.
Lena is the same; if you want her as a girlfriend or want to develop your relationship with her, you have to accept the trade-offs that come with who she is.
I’m not sure if I expressed myself well, but it was a little off-topic—just my way of seeing things, for me. Everyone is free to think what they want.
- Feb 4, 2024
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so it's done more in a "told you so" kinda way? sounds still shit, for one nobody likes to hear shit like that when he is allready down one LI and its worse because you are the one responsible for the loss in the first place.
that could save the game for me not gonna lie.
- Dec 6, 2024
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? I never said it was going to be a “I told you to stay with me” moral delusion with the LI taunting you.
But in any case, as I've already said, you'll see when the time comes and in any case all of them will be avoidable if you make the choice not to see him.
- Sep 18, 2018
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Yeah, again these mysterious OPTIONAL scenes that are NECESSARY for the story. For me personally, these are mutually exclusive paragraphs, but the dev knows better.