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Ella barely got screen time though, so I'm looking forward to get to know her better.
Yeah definitely looking forward to get to know here better too. It's nice to have someone who knew MC back from college days.
Yeah, and she seems as nice as others. Didn't blow him off now he's not a star and was quite friendly.
For sure, I'm also interested to see what kind of interaction would be with Lena considering the shared modeling job, even if it isn't her main job.
 

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I got to try this game and I have to say that it's much better than I thought.

All the girls are interesting for different reasons. It's really hard to choose a favorite. Madison stayed witch MC even after the injury. Jennie was the sane one from work. Lena is HOT. Mina is one to protect. How do I even choose? I hope I'd know at what point I need to choose a specific girl.

Story is pretty good too with Luca being somewhat flexible where he's definitely a "bad guy" but also still has some "good" in him. The horndog music producer is somewhat obvious, but it suits the theme so it works well. I'm in two minds about the dad, but I hope he'd get better.

Good luck and all the best, dev!
that's exactly why i hate play no harem game...choosing is so damn pain
 
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Yeah definitely looking forward to get to know here better too. It's nice to have someone who knew MC back from college days.

For sure, I'm also interested to see what kind of interaction would be with Lena considering the shared modeling job, even if it isn't her main job.
I suspect she'll be ok (as long as she doesn't hate you). I've managed to keep her friendly on all my paths. (Obviously a LOT friendlier on my Lena Path :ROFLMAO: )

If you play Maddie & Lena, Lena is not to upset to find Maddie in your bed.
If you just play Maddie (and Lena doesn't hate you), then it's a different conversation, but she's still not upset about it.
She seems like she'll be a good friend even if not on her path.
 
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I like Lena, man, what a confident and open minded this girl is, she is made of steel - not sure there is anything that can make her squirm.
There is also Maddison and this whole booty-call arrangement with MC - when one feels down another one comes and makes feel better and vice versa, but at the same time she likes MC a lot and cares about him and obviously wants smth more than just FWB but for some reason can't open up to MC.
Jennie - what a sweet girl and very attractive. Mina - this girl is just waiting for a white knight to come and save her.
Ella - based on my tastes is the most attractive girl here, but I need some more time with her to make a decision.

If I had to choose now who is my main girl - I'd pick Lena probably.
But Ella will definitely take her place later in a game.

Antagonists are also well written, also not sure I consider Luca as a bad guy, he is somewhere in a middle.
As of right now Maddie would be my canon LI, I just like her backstory with MC too much, but just like in your and Milton's cases the odds are high that Ella will take over later in a story :), or maybe not))
Anyways some things will surely change one way or another when we get further in a game.
Right now it's Maddison=>Lena=>Ella for me.

Antagonists are also well written, also not sure I consider Luca as a bad guy, he is somewhere in a middle.
I think we just got used that mostly antagonists are plain written in those games, I think Luca is just a person, alive person with his own skeletons.

Yeah definitely looking forward to get to know here better too. It's nice to have someone who knew MC back from college days.
You also have Maddison, they started "seeing" each other in college too, and so far she was always by his side (whether as a friend or lover) even after his injury.

If you play Maddie & Lena, Lena is not to upset to find Maddie in your bed.
If you just play Maddie (and Lena doesn't hate you), then it's a different conversation, but she's still not upset about it.
She seems like she'll be a good friend even if not on her path.
It felt like Lena didn't actually mind joining in :)
I'm sure though Maddie definitely would have been upset)
 
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Haven't tried the game yet, just jumped through some comments and I just want to put it out there. PDA(handholding, hugs, kissing) and some simple text is enough to establish a LI moving on with their life, showing fully rendered and animated scenes with them and their new partner, or reading in autistic details their new sex life is done for one reason only, trying to appeal to a certain crowd.

Even the ones that don't mind that type of scenes still considering them a major waste of dev time and effort that should have went in the route the player actually picked. And for the rest are just a major turn off, that instead of making them cannot wait to restart the game and get on that girl's, now they probably have no interest in her anymore. What anticipation is there left on their route when you already seen them naked and sweaty with someone else, probably without all the effort the player has to put into 'seducing' the girl.

IMO, monogamy romance devs should focus on making the LIs as desirable as possible, not with what they can get away becasue the tags do not currently include some scenario, even though it has the same narrative reason to exist in the game and is designed to evoke the same type of emotions as that said tag. :coffee:
 

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You also have Maddison, they started "seeing" each other in college too, and so far she was always by his side (whether as a friend or lover) even after his injury.
Yeah, I meant more that Ella was actually in the college with MC since she was a cheerleader. I might've missed it if mentioned, but I don't think Maddison was in the same college? Somehow I thought they just started hooking up when MC was popular and then kept their friendship/fuck buddy status.

IMO, monogamy romance devs should
IMO, devs should make whatever they want. Players are free to not play what they don't like. It's such a waste of time to try to listen to everyone with their different preferences.
 

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Yeah, I meant more that Ella was actually in the college with MC since she was a cheerleader. I might've missed it if mentioned, but I don't think Maddison was in the same college? Somehow I thought they just started hooking up when MC was popular and then kept their friendship/fuck buddy status.
That's how I read it too. Ella was a cheerleader for him in college (even though it appears they probably never spoke or hung out together very often).

I didn't get the impression that Maddison was part of his college life, but AlexMpog might have spotted some text that we missed.
 
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IMO, devs should make whatever they want. Players are free to not play what they don't like. It's such a waste of time to try to listen to everyone with their different preferences.
Platitudes are nice, but in a oversaturated market, why not give yourself the best chance of success with the main audience? How many have to fail in the same manner for people to understand that blindly 'follow your vision' means shoot yourself in the foot more often than not?
 

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Very interesting to read the comments. I think I must have missed Ella, I don't think I had any scene with her in my playthrough. Time for a replay (plus I kind of ended up on the "death path" by trying to get all opportunities, which didn't even work case in point Ella ;)).

So far, my personal favorite is Maddison. I love the chemistry between MC and her. Nebula Dreams did a fantastic job at conveying this in her facial expressions and gestures. Story-wise she has a long connection with MC and she stayed with him after his injury, that makes her very endearing. It is also very cute how she kisses MC slowly pushing the boundaries of their 'friends with benefits' relationship. As the cherry on top I also love her model, she is very attractive and has a beautiful face.

Visually my second top tier girl is Serena. Her model is also stunningly attractive, and the sex scenes were insanely hot... plus it was cute how she made sure MC was sober enough to agree to hook up. I would not mind seeing her again!

Lena is pretty but in my first blind playthrough my MC did not click with her as well. I will try to focus on her more on my next playthrough but it will probably be a friends-with-benefits relationship at most.

Jennie will need her own playthrough for sure. I felt a bit bad in my initial game double timing it and I can feel this may backfire with her greatly. Visually she is IMO not in the same league as Maddison or Serena though.

Mina seems to promise a lot of interesting story content and ethical dilemmas. From an immersion perspective it is a bit strange for MC to overcome the barriers of professionalism especially since his livelihood (including debt to the mob!) depend upon his income at least for the next couple of months. She is pretty although not at the Maddison/Serena level.

And Ella, well I cannot remember this character from my first playthrough. I will be sure to take a closer look in the next one!
 
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No harem my dreams are shattered?
God bless the ren'py console commands! :ROFLMAO:

Although, since the dev wrote about a threesome, I hope there will be room for a throuple as well...

Right now, I think I'd shun Maddison or keep her only as a friend with benefits, play with Lena or invite her over for a threesome, pursue Jennie and Mina... Maybe the last two could end up... mixing work and private life ;)

Oh, and Ella... Wow! :love: I'm not sure she'll be a LI, though... maybe just someone "cheering" for the MC! :LOL:

This project looks promising... Right now I've budget to subscribe to a couple of new VNs for a few months, just to help the authors boot their projects... This one is now high on my list of potential candidates. ;)
 
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don't know why a dev would go through the trouble of making a single li structured game and simultaneously kill replayability with a LI
 
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First of all, thank you all for your messages, it truly means a lot to me :)
that's exactly why i hate play no harem game...choosing is so damn pain
I could take the easy route and make my game a harem game, but I have absolutely no interest in doing that.
I want my story to be as close to "reality" as possible, and ending up in a harem with five girls is really, really not common at all—unless you're a pimp or some weird billionaire but most importantly, my LIs—the characters they are, with their personalities, desires, jealousy, etc.—would never accept being part of a harem.

Haven't tried the game yet, just jumped through some comments and I just want to put it out there. PDA(handholding, hugs, kissing) and some simple text is enough to establish a LI moving on with their life, showing fully rendered and animated scenes with them and their new partner, or reading in autistic details their new sex life is done for one reason only, trying to appeal to a certain crowd.
How can you know that :"it is done for one reason only, trying to appeal to a certain crowd" when you yourself admit you haven’t played the game, and especially when you haven't even seen the scene in question that was being debated in the thread—which, by the way, concerned one sex scene involving an EX LI?

Even the ones that don't mind that type of scenes still considering them a major waste of dev time and effort that should have went in the route the player actually picked. And for the rest are just a major turn off, that instead of making them cannot wait to restart the game and get on that girl's, now they probably have no interest in her anymore. What anticipation is there left on their route when you already seen them naked and sweaty with someone else, probably without all the effort the player has to put into 'seducing' the girl.
Out of the many sex scenes that will be in the game, you’re telling me that one scene—which is entirely avoidable and that most players won’t even see in their first playthrough because they likely won’t meet the conditions to trigger it—will suddenly make everyone hate the LI in question?

And like I said, the player chooses to see that scene. At that moment, they will be fully aware of what’s happening, and they decide whether they want to watch it or not.

If you want a more "concrete" example, imagine coming home, hearing that your former crush/roommate is having sex with someone else, and having the option to take a peek.
If you do, that’s on you, but don’t come complaining about what you saw when no one forced you to watch it.

IMO, monogamy romance devs should focus on making the LIs as desirable as possible, not with what they can get away becasue the tags do not currently include some scenario, even though it has the same narrative reason to exist in the game and is designed to evoke the same type of emotions as that said tag. :coffee:
I don't get it, "do not currently include some scenario"? You mean the harem scenario ??

Platitudes are nice, but in a oversaturated market, why not give yourself the best chance of success with the main audience? How many have to fail in the same manner for people to understand that blindly 'follow your vision' means shoot yourself in the foot more often than not?
If I had to listen to everything said here and completely abandon my vision, I would have made a harem game, with MILFs, all living together, with a stepdad/stepbrother fucking a stepsister/stepmother everyday.

Or better yet, I’d just create polls every time, asking people here what my story should be, since apparently, I should only try to cater to the main audience, right?

Your reasoning is exactly why we get bland TV series, movies, and games every year—projects that try to appeal to the masses, conform to the mold, and never dare to be different, all to avoid taking any risks that might "offend" the "main audience".

But let’s take your reasoning and apply it to one of the most beloved and award-winning series of all time—Breaking Bad.
Normally, in a TV show, people want a hero they can relate to—someone with a savior complex who defeats the bad guys and eventually gets a happy ending with his family and kids.

And yet, when Breaking Bad was released, audiences witnessed something completely different—a protagonist who spirals out of control, transforming from an ordinary, mild-mannered middle-aged man into a ruthless drug lord, willing to kill a child just to keep his empire and remain Heisenberg.
This approach was shocking and completely off-track compared to other mainstream movies and TV shows at the time. And that’s exactly what made the series so successful—they took risks and didn’t just try to fit into the mold.
That's how great stories are born—by taking risks, not by checking boxes dictated by a marketing team that says there shouldn’t be too much violence, that no one should die, etc...

It’s the same for VNs—how many games look exactly the same and follow the same formula?
A handsome MC (or not) who don't have any problem in life, for whom every girl they meet wants to fuck him within 30 minutes of meeting him.

A lot. And I’m not criticizing those who make such games. They’re absolutely right to do so—there’s a huge audience for them.
But I would be even crazier to create a game that looks like 80% of the other games here instead of sticking to my vision and seeing it through to the end.

And if I crash? So be it. I won’t die from it, and I’ll always find a way to bounce back.

don't know why a dev would go through the trouble of making a single li structured game and simultaneously kill replayability with a LI
Look at what I wrote above, especially from the third quote.
 

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Out of the many sex scenes that will be in the game, you’re telling me that one scene—which is entirely avoidable and that most players won’t even see in their first playthrough because they likely won’t meet the conditions to trigger it—will suddenly make everyone hate the LI in question?

Your reasoning is exactly why we get bland TV series, movies, and games every year—projects that try to appeal to the masses, conform to the mold, and never dare to be different, all to avoid taking any risks that might "offend" the "main audience".

Look at what I wrote above, especially from the third quote.
doesn't apply to everyone, but it wont make people hate said li, but they will lose interest completely and will have no desire to go back and play her path, as for that tv/movies/games comment, they are failing left right and centre precisely because they been appealing to the minority, to put it simply if it came out of America over the last few years its mostly failure after failure
 
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How can you know that :"it is done for one reason only, trying to appeal to a certain crowd" when you yourself admit you haven’t played the game
Because I already told you all you need to achieve 'girl is moving on with her life', PDA and text is enough for a realistic portrayal of a relationship, you don't need to see the LI have her organs rearranged. Therefore her moving on is not the goal of those scenes, they are done so cucks voyeurs can watch them and the others get it rubbed in their faces that very important plot information.
If you want a more "concrete" example, imagine coming home, hearing that your former crush/roommate is having sex with someone else, and having the option to take a peek.
If you do, that’s on you, but don’t come complaining about what you saw when no one forced you to watch it.
You accidently gave me the perfect example with that scenario. What do you think the emotion would be for a person coming home and hearing their crush moaning in the other room?:WaitWhat:

A scenario like that is not currently included in the F95 zone NTR tag, although there are NTR stories with childhood crush, or family members in a non incest novels out there, but that is besides my point, while it technically isn't NTR it literally achieves the same thing. It evokes the same type of emotions, its a turn of for many vanilla/romance fans and is appealing to the same people that like seeing LIs fuck other characters than the MC.

Its a technicality, a loophole if you will, hence my advising you focus in making people want to restart the game and play that girls route, instead of pushing the envelope with what you can get away under some arbitrary and highly debated tag rules
And like I said, the player chooses to see that scene. At that moment, they will be fully aware of what’s happening, and they decide whether they want to watch it or not.
Optional, or not doesn't changes anything, there is such thing as optional *insert kink* and it still gets tagged for that kink, so that point is moot. Like I said, it takes away any anticipation from actually going for that girl in her own route if you already seen her fucked by other NPC(s) without the effort the player puts into conquering her.

And even for people that don't mind her fucking around its a waste of dev time that can and SHOULD be used in the route that you actually picked you are interested in.


But, its clear its an ego thing for you, you don't want to listen(or be seen as listening) to why its a turn off for people and why such scenes are ill advised if you are not making a beta fetishes focused game, so you do you.
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Because I already told you all you need to achieve 'girl is moving on with her life', PDA and text is enough for a realistic portrayal of a relationship, you don't need to see the LI have her organs rearranged. Therefore her moving on is not the goal of those scenes, they are done so cucks voyeurs can watch them and the others get it rubbed in their faces that very important plot information.
Once again, you haven't seen the scene, you don’t know how it’s structured, yet you’re already claiming that it’s designed for cucks and that everyone else will just be mad knowing such a scene exists.

How do you even know that?
For you, your approach to relationships is "If I find out that Woman A, whom I flirted with months/years ago, is sleeping with her new girlfriend/boyfriend, I’ll be extremely angry at her and refuse to have anything to do with her in the future." ?

Things don’t always go as planned, and if you want to play a game where you never take any risks, where your choices only have positive consequences and never affect you negatively in any way, then this is not the game for you.

You accidently gave me the perfect example with that scenario. What do you think the emotion would be for a person coming home and hearing their crush moaning in the other room?:WaitWhat:
I mostly exaggerated the example; I should have said 'former crush' instead of "crush".

A scenario like that is not currently included in the F95 zone NTR tag, although there are NTR stories with childhood crush, or family members in a non incest novels out there, but that is besides my point, while it technically isn't NTR it literally achieves the same thing. It evokes the same type of emotions, its a turn of for many vanilla/romance fans and is appealing to the same people that like seeing LIs fuck other characters than the MC.

Its a technicality, a loophole if you will, hence my advising you focus in making people want to restart the game and play that girls route, instead of pushing the envelope with what you can get away under some arbitrary and highly debated tag rules

Optional, or not doesn't changes anything, there is such thing as optional *insert kink* and it still gets tagged for that kink, so that point is moot. Like I said, it takes away any anticipation from actually going for that girl in her own route if you already seen her fucked by other NPC(s) without the effort the player puts into conquering her.

And even for people that don't mind her fucking around its a waste of dev time that can and SHOULD be used in the route that you actually picked you are interested in.
If you feel the same emotions when you see your girlfriend/wife having sex with another man/woman right in front of you (which is the definition of NTR) and when you learn that your crush/former crush has a new boyfriend/girlfriend (which logically means they will have... wow, sex), then I think you have a serious issue with jealousy/possessiveness.

The infamous turn-off—which, once again, you've never actually seen and are just speculating about—is pretty funny, honestly.

But once again, you’re not obligated to "seen her fucked by other NPC(s)", that’s exactly why it’s optional.
Otherwise, I might as well remove all kinks from the game and create a perfectly boring smooth story just to make sure I don’t upset anyone who disagrees with seeing a "vanilla" kink in the game.
(I’m never going to add hardcore kinks like 'rape, sleep sex, etc...", and most importantly, this isn’t NTR (which I already explained above). If you consider it as such, then you’re the one massively stretching the definition of NTR)

I’ve already addressed the whole "waste of time" argument before, so I won’t repeat myself, but if I really wanted to avoid wasting time, I would have made a linear story, with no choices and only one LI.
Maybe when you play the game, you’ll prefer Mina or Jennie, while others might prefer Lena or Maddison. And yet, no matter what, people will always complain that they want more content for their favorite LI or for the kink they prefer.

But, its clear its an ego thing for you, you don't want to listen(or be seen as listening) to why its a turn off for people and why such scenes are ill advised if you are not making a beta fetishes focused game, so you do you.
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I’m human. This is my story. Of course, it affects my ego, and that’s NORMAL.
But that doesn’t mean I’m not listening or that I’m just pretending to listen.

I know this will be a sensitive topic for some people, which is why you’ll be fully aware of what you’re about to see (just like when I ask about the foot fetish kink—it’s the same approach). These are scenes to take with caution.

What I don’t like, however, is the way you criticize when you haven’t even played the game, and the scene doesn’t even exist yet.

But no matter what, I have a vision for my game, and I don’t want to stray from it. I understand critics about character writing, dialogues, the interface, the structure of certain scenes, etc... but criticisms that try to make me abandon my vision are incomprehensible to me.

Because if I lose my vision, I’ll lose the joy of creating and writing this story.
 

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You'll be able to reject her if things get 'romantic' with another LI or when you reach a certain point in the story (around version 0.5/0.6, normally).
I don't have any problem with how you want to make the story, but if that's the case it would be good if you said it from the beginning so we know what to expect. In the Op it says that after version 0.1 all scenes are optional and you've said that on more than one occasion.
 

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I don't have any problem with how you want to make the story, but if that's the case it would be good if you said it from the beginning so we know what to expect. In the Op it says that after version 0.1 all scenes are optional and you've said that on more than one occasion.
Yes, and that’s exactly the case—all sex scenes (apart for Maddison's first two) are optional.
I don’t really understand your message.
 
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