I like it! I can see the budding potential of a great Mind Control game. I am getting similar vibes to Snow Daze in the sense that the heroines slowly change, and I really love that game! One thing that I am a bit on the fence about, and I seem to see a lot of people say the same, is the MC's attitude.
It's just not like-able sometimes. Like, in one of the earlier scenes
. Like... what? That sounds a bit forced on the MC's part. Also his reaction to
is downright embarassing. A bit shellshocked I would believe, and distrusting sure, but outright antagonistic and mean just feels off. I don't know exactly what it is, but just sometimes I dislike being the MC. Maybe in the future with some character growth things chage.
Regardless, I enjoyed the experience for the most part, and am looking forward to more! Best of luck to the developer.