VN - Ren'Py - Shattered [v0.21] [Yeda Games]

good CG and very well written, the characters are quite complex and there is a lot of options depending on your fetishes. It also have high replay value as you have to go down multiple paths to see all the scenes. would like a gallery to track what scenes I haven´t seen though.

Best sissyfication game here. Realistic, although with no body alt option still, a beacon on how games like this should be made imo. The plot plateaued at a point in the mid, but it never lost coherence for me. But I still like the option for boobs

A good non-linear emotional story makes every new game unique. You can see Blake changing and progressing from the "Blake from slums" to something new and unique based on choices you made.
Definitely my personal favorite.

I would rate this around 7.5/10 and not higher because of 2 things: first, in many moments, mc's inner monologue can become tiring after he keeps on ranting and 2nd most of the 18+ scenes have just 2-3-4 renders which may take away from the atmosphere and feeling.

This is a must for sissy-trap-trans-gay-bimbo lovers, and what is even better is that you can choose your own path of what you become. Complex relations, many chars and a good number of choices with consequences, meaning you get lost easily without the walktrough.

Amazing Game,
I loved it even when I didn't get a ton of porn scenes.
Can't wait to see more.

There honestly needs to be more trap / sissy games on here bc they're great <3

I really want to see a gallery or a path shower of some sort showing how what choice's got you to where you character is currently at and see how it could be different with just 1-2 choices. (Like a real map you could see where each road takes you [ maybe lock it until you actually choose it])
(this 200 character limit is stupid)

OK, I this game is gigantic! And I am just talking about v0.10!!!

There is such a long story at this point and so many options, that I can not even try to explain all of it!
This game has a trans-MC and there for it wont be for every one. But if you can get over it, this will give you some hours of content! The MC is well written and even though there are many side chars, most of them have a well written personality.
The sex is sometimes very good and sometimes just skippable, depending on the story and the characters.

But the best part of this game are the choices! There are so many with quite the impact on the story!
I mean you can decide if you want to be gay, straight or bi. Are you dominant or submissive and even more...

But... of course there are some problems and mine was the overwhelming content.
I mean it has some stronger and some weaker moments, but all together was just to much for me. Like 3 to 5 stories pressed into one. One stronger "red line" would have helped, or some more (longer) split paths. Although that would probably take the great choices away...

But that is quite picky of me, so....
All in all it is a very good game, even though I probably won´t ever see the end of it. It is just to much for me!

I really liked this game when it started. But I am just really getting bored since the last several versions. The Wordcount is at ~800k now. The Witcher 3 has ~450k. It is just too much gibberish thats makes the game boring. If you want to do the game any good, cut down the words by 80-90%. Or consider letting the player choose between the short and the full version of the story.

3/5 stars. theres a lot to like here and not a lot to dislike
Really interesting main character i think, more believable than most protagonists. the world itself is likewise, a depressing pre-or-post apocalyptic society that's gradually declining, and everyone is just fiddling while rome burns.


Shattered is mostly about story and atmosphere. The fetish content is kind of...moderate. Not lightweight, but theres plenty of more extreme games. the lewd scenes in general are stills and text, its about average in that department.

I can't seem to get this game out of my head, so i suppose it's doing something right. but when i think about it, my thoughts are at least half memories of frustration at its pacing and branching narrative


There are some big problems though. This is a visual novel, but its tried to be more immersive by having a lot of choices. This is generally a good thing, but the problem is the exact implementation of it. Your Choices Have Consequences. Far too many consequences.

There's a ton of scenes here and you won't see half of it in one run, because its so easy to lock yourself out of scenes, characters, and entire storylines by accident. You're often asked to make seemingly mundane choices that permanantly decide how someone treats you. And if you try to roleplay your way through it, like i did my first time, you're not going to like the result.

To get blake to be the character you want, and to do the things you want to do, its utterly essential to use the walkthrough, which exposes what a labyrinthine mess all these branches and choices have created. One example that really stuck out to me, there's a scene with one of my favourite characters mentioned in the walkthrough that in order to unlock, you have to:
-Have sex with her on two possible previous encounters
-Not be dating either of two other specific characters (Who she never meets and afaik has no interaction with ???) Also your choice to date these is made extremely early in the game and afaik can't be changed
-Not wear an outfit during one specific scene (you probably did it because there seemed no reason not to)
-Score a certain middling margin on a personality test. Not the best score but not a fail either. An unrelated test given by an unrelated character she's also never met.
-Half ass a lewd scene with an antagonist nurse. Submit but only halfway. (why would you do this)
-Screw up a friend's homework by giving bad advice (you might do this by accident)
-And finally, refuse this character at the third of her lewd scenes, despite doing the first two.

If you magically fulfil all of the above conditions, none of which you could have known about in advance, most which concern interactions with unrelated people she's never met. Then and only then can you get the fourth and currently final scene with kushari, right at the end of the current content.
Many of these aren't consistently doing the best or the worst at certain activities, you have to accomplish certain things, fuck up others, and fuck up only a certain degree of a few.

Why would the developer do this? I don't know. Shattered isn't just a game you need the walkthrough for, its something you need to plan, from the start. You can't just relax and roleplay

Choices are unintuitive, there's the first problem.

Then there's suya. At a certain point in the game, you move in with her, and she becomes your bestest buddy. She constantly flirts with you, you constantly reciprocate. And yet you can't actually get close to her unless you're not dating anyone else.
This is bizarre because she clearly doesn't care much about monogamy, nor do most of the people you date, and nor for that matter does blake herself.

What's wierder is that the game never explains this to you. Regardless of your choices, suya is there no matter what. She's always with you and readily available. The game will never explain WHY two people who live together and clearly want each other aren't doing anything, blake will just mysteriously brush it off when things get too intimate. And then more options for flirting appear tomorrow. It was only after i checked the walkthrough that i found there were many lewd scenes with suya that are just being quietly skipped because i picked someone else

Suya is the most egregious example, but there are a bunch of other storylines that expect monogamy, bizarre in a world full of open relationships and casual hookups. When you get involved with any of these people, blake falls in love and refuses to get close to anyone else in this wierd monogamy club. But THEY don't mostly care, most of these people would be happy for you to sleep around.

The monogamy and locked "routes" system is irritating. it feels like an odd way to gate the content and force multiple playthroughs, its incongruous with the mentality of those people, and of the world they live in. It's never explained when you're making a significant choice that will lock you out of other options. And its rarely explained that you're even missing out on any. encounters with the others who have routes are bizarre exercises in sexual tension that suddenly gets defused without explanation

for all my complaints, there is a rich world here. Theres a lot of things and people to love. But i struggle to get over the frustration of being forever locked out of things due to choices that weren't explained. And of characters from locked routes still visiting, flirting, dangling the promise of more, without the game explaining that you're locked out

In short:
Pros:
-Rich, if depressing world
-Likeable MC, and a lot of interesting side characters
-Wonderful atmosphere and visuals
-Pretty good writing

Cons:
-Branching narrative structure is an unintuitive mess, and its impossible to really enjoy without having the walkthrough open.
-The difference between side characters you can court freely, and main ones who are all part of some exclusive monogamy club, is unclear. Very easy to get locked out of routes
-Unreasonable consequences for mundane choices
-Unreasonably long and complex requirements for some scenes
-Game does not tell you when you've been locked out of things, locked characters continue to dangle hope before you

Game version: [v0.9]

The Good

Shattered is a weird game. So much so that it manages to stand out in a sea of mediocre sissification games. It's a game with real character and some rough edges. Sometimes this works in the game's favor, at other times the rough edges poke you in the eye and annoy the shit out of you.

The game has some semblance of world-building and a more interesting setting than the usual fare. It never gets explored all too deeply, but it adds some welcome flavor to the stale formula.

There are actual choices and plenty of them. While most sissification games heavily lean into M/M content, here you actually get two very distinct routes and if you want to avoid dudes you can just opt for scenes with only women instead. Or you can mix and match. As someone who plays this more for the femdom content, this is highly appreciated.

The Bad

This game needs an editor. Badly. The writing is not quite Engrish, even though there are some typos and grammar errors. The real problem is that the dev likes to use "big words" but oftentimes doesn't fully grasp what they mean or how they are used and it leads to dialogue that comes off as either comical or incomprehensible.

The writing overall is too self-indulgent and prattles on and on, especially during the way too frequent segments of the MC's inner monologue where he has to regurgitate the last five minutes of plot all over again, without adding much. Part of making a script good is how much you cut out of it. This script feels like a first draft where not a single line was cut.

I don't like any of the characters you're supposed to like and I do like the characters you're supposed to dislike. Generally, I can barely stand any of the people in this game, including the MC, who is the most annoying, whiny, sarcastic, flip-flopping bundle of nothing I have ever seen.

The game drops off a steep cliff after the mansion burns down. It turns into a different game at that point, the setting changes, the dynamics change, character relationships get jumbled for reasons that are never adequately explained. Like, you hate Melissa but then you have one Skype session with her where she's nice and suddenly you're in love and she's your new "mommy."

Rebecca never actually did anything that bad, but the MC and almost every other character in the game have a burning, irrational hatred for her, to the point that they even have to shit on her after she just tried to commit suicide. I already hated the MC's sarcastic monologues in the first part of the game, where he constantly had to shit on every person even if they didn't do anything to him, but it gets so much worse here that it was hard for me to keep playing without skipping his dialogue entirely.

Melissa is the one who literally owns you as a slave, the one who disciplined you harshly and made you do a bunch of degrading shit in the first part of the game, but I guess all is forgiven because she somehow had a personality transplant and now you're lovers? While Rebecca is somehow Hitler because she made you buy lingerie and gave you drugs once in a club and tried to make you suck a dick... okaaay.

I also came to resent how Suya was forced on you, you didn't have to fuck her, but the MC and her basically talked to each other like they were lovers and at points she was even worse than the MC with the Rebecca hate. I just wanted out of that relationship.

But that's where all the choices and point systems and whatever break down. There is no "Rebecca Path," no option to reject the game's narrative because for some reason Rebecca has been chosen as the antagonist of the game you should hate. Which would be fine, if you had built that up in any way, but you didn't.

If you want players to dislike a character you have to show them doing something bad. You can't just rely on some throwaway lines from side characters who go "oh yeah, Rebecca is bad/evil/dumb." That doesn't mean anything.

Should you play it?

I'd suggest at least playing it to the point where the mansion burns down if you have any interest in sissification or femdom. And possibly beyond that if you care less about the writing.

The game is a mess. But it's an interesting mess at least.

Im really surprised how good this game is.
Firstly, huge kudos for the author for being able to represent feminine male characters in such an authentic but very cute way.
The story is very interesting and long, although i would love the first part when the main character is being feminized to be much longer.
It would be good to add more chastity, more interracial (maybe even an interracial only path) themes and maybe a hormones path which.
Also sex scenes quickly get repetitive.
But dont get me wrong, it *is* one of the best RenPy erotic games out there.

The Gay Tag review

This game has a significant amount of gay content (I wouldn't say 50/50, but it's not too far from that, maybe 60/40 in favour of straight) BUT with the rather big caveat that the MC is really feminine to start with and things are heavily pushed in that direction in the course of the game. After a certain point it's very difficult to perceive him as a biological male even if he has a penis. So if you're not into very feminine characters in a sub position (you're literally an indentured servant) and get more girly with the progress of the story, that's not the game for you.

Apart from that, the game is really good. Graphically it's very well done, including the sex scenes, and the story -very well written- is kind of gripping, not to mention the intriguing vaguely dystopian setting of a future society on the edge of crumbling under its tension. The characters are also quite three-dimensional and not just the usual caricatures. I am annoyed that I can't enjoy this game as I would like, because I don't like the personality of the MC and very feminine characters and sissification are quite a turn-off to me -at least at this level-, but I'll probably have a run once it's completed or near completion because of its many virtues.

I love games that have a good story, are well written, build anticipation and have depth.
Shattered is one of them, and one of the best at it.
Dialogues and inner thoughts are clever. Sexual content is good and varied enough. Character developement is interesting and well paced.
So far, so good. This is one of my favourite games at the moment.

Really good game.

You play as Blake a poor boy from the slums of a city in a post apocaliptic setting who is forced to crossdress because of his strange bosses (Rebecca, Melinda and Samuel).
You will have the choice to become more of a domme or a sub, keep your mind or turn into a bimbo whore.

From there the story will branch out for a great number of romance paths. Become a sub or a bimbo for Milanda, Rebecca or Samuel.
Try your hand at a romance with women like Vanessa and Iris, transwomen like Kushari or even Suya or try the femboy Liam and a few others. Possibilities abound!

Music is generic but the renders are good and the sex scenes are hot. Plus there are some nice elements in the backstory of this world, even if they are never the focus of the story.


Recommended!

Good story overall that isn't too oversexed. Got more than I expected so far and if they can add depth etc... then it can be one of the better trans etc... games. All the characters have a bit of a variety to them that they are decent although it does fall into a few tropes that I didn't find turned me off playing it.

This game is like a good book. And that's only a second time I can say that about f95's game. Truly excellent.

I had so much fun with this story, it's addictive, enjoyable...there are no words to describe how much I like it.

- There's a lot (A LOT!) of text, so it took me 14 hours to finish version 0.6 content! And there's still some content I missed (different love interests, different paths...). And it's not even finished product.

- Good writing quality.

- Interesting, mostly unforgettable characters , MC is just lovely (you gonna love him like John Wick loves his dog)

- There's a lot of comedy in there. And it's not irritating but a good kind of comedy, like a good Bill Murray movie.

- A lot of meaningful choices (but be prepared, it's still a feminization game). You need to play it couple of times to finish all the content.

It's unique! You won't find anything like this on f95 (well...there's a few of abandoned games that tried this. Non of them were as good as this one)

It's not a product for horny teens. If you looking for a quick fap - that's not a game for you. You gonna fall asleep while playing.
But if you looking for a good story....If you are a open minded person...This is a game for you!

First off, this game is primarily about a reluctant young man who is coerced into crossdressing. The extent to which he is reluctant and the amount of coercion depends on the choices you make.

So if submissive crossdressing MCs are your thing, here you go!

That said, I found the writing and the use of inner dialogue refreshing. Also, there is a lot of content, and a lot of characters here. Plus, there are really good set-ups and situations. For all of that, the MC exits a lot of promising situations prematurely. As this is v.0.4, I am hoping that some characters, like Vanessa, Iris, and Miranda all have more and lengthier interactions with the MC.

This game is very well-developed already, and I look forward to see how it evolves.

Don't be fooled by the difficult start of the game, nor by its global aspect, this game is better than its cover tell about it.

Alright, the game is too verbose, too much being told that could have been shown in the CG. But it quickly fall in place. Mostly because the narrative part, expressed as MC's thoughts, fit the character's personality.
Forced to run away from the shallows, forced in disguised slavery and turned into a sissy against his will, the MC have all the reason to be paranoid. And his thoughts being expressed this way, they feel like overthinking way more than the narration they are.

Same can be said for the story, too loose at start, it become way better after some times. Probably once the author finally let the story lead him, instead of trying to force it where he wanted it to go. The writing become more mature with time, while the feelings carried by the story become stronger.
Whatever you identify to the MC or look at the story as simple witness, you end caring for him. To the point that you'll probably want to stab the author when hell will strike again. Honestly at this point I hesitated to stop, not wanting to witness MC being crushed. Too many game did this out of boredom, and the actual global lockdown isn't a time when you want sadness to occupy your day.
I didn't and I'm glad, because things weren't what they looked and the story became even more interesting after this. In fact, it's the moment where the game's name stop to be accurate ; the MC isn't shattered anymore, he's now try to find his place in the world.

The only real negative point is the lack of CG. It's supposed to be a visual novel, and it really lack on the visual part. Yet, the story is hooking enough for you to pass through this relatively easily.

i officially declare this is the most boring "game" i ever play
-terrible horrible boring story
-ugly cheap models
-literally fell asleep while playing
-most of the time gives you 2 choices would you like to kill by getting stabbed or shot down

just press skip for most of the "game" you wont miss anything or if you play games to have fun skip this entirely

Really interesting game. Not to many femboy/sissification games that allow the femboy to top. Very cool. Game seems to have lots of multiple routes and ways to only get the content you want.

You can be a sissy and only get play with females or a sissy who only plays with males. You can be rebellious or willing. You can dom certain characters and you can top others. What's not to love?

+ good branching story
+ likable character's
+ unlike most sissyfication games not everything is forced upon you.
+ mc has depth, he's not a brainwashed future bimbo to be
+ good renders
+ good variety of possible kinks

- the bdsm is to sudden and rough for a "little lamb" like Blake it would be better if he would first be eased into it.
- we(I) need a BEAR kink bring out the lumberjack