VN Ren'Py Shattered [v0.22] [Yeda Games]

[RajniCD sis]

Waiting for final update

 

[PickerLewd]

Ok, I decided to put on the eye patch and play for at least 40 minutes as a sort of "demo" .

I found two typos and I can't say anything about the game yet.



Edit: I've just been told that the word "civilisation" is spelt correctly in London, I swear I've always seen it spelt with the letter Z and it was so weird I thought it was a typo .

 

[YedaGames]

Edit: I've just been told that the word "civilisation" is spelt correctly in London, I swear I've always seen it spelt with the letter Z and it was so weird I thought it was a typo .

Yes, I use British spelling for everything. So, «tyres», «honour», «realise» etc. are not typos. But I will fix the second one, thank you.

 

[FookU2]

Ok, I decided to put on the eye patch and play for at least 40 minutes as a sort of "demo" .

I found two typos and I can't say anything about the game yet.

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Edit: I've just been told that the word "civilisation" is spelt correctly in London, I swear I've always seen it spelt with the letter Z and it was so weird I thought it was a typo .

"Spelt" is also a wheat, in American English. But, apparently, it is used in Britain in place of "spelled."

 

[dluser]

i wanna try this but there is no way i am stepping up one chunk at a time from 16 to 22

 

[jackdanniels]

i wanna try this but there is no way i am stepping up one chunk at a time from 16 to 22

Go for the

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, it's already on 0.22 and has only 3.8 GB.

 

[dluser]

Go for the

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, it's already on 0.22 and has only 3.8 GB.

isn't it lower quality renders ?

 

[jackdanniels]

isn't it lower quality renders ?

It makes very little difference unless you use a 50" monitor, mine is 21" and I didn't notice any difference in quality.

compressed: 1280 x 720
full: 3840 x 2160

 

[jackdanniels]

I considerer Shattered having 3 episodes - Ep1: Mansion Ep2: Old City/Villa/Slums Ep3: Deliverance
My topic is the True Route with Iris.
Ep 1 - Is a stage where you build, and give your first steps in the relationship with Iris
Ep 2 - Their relationship gets passionate, going to the slums with her gives another level to the passionate relationship.
Ep 3 - Their relationship turns cold and distant.

My question is why? And things will change on the last update or will they still be the same?

All the other LIs have some flaws but are not as broken as the true Iris route in my humble opinion, because I couldn't find a reason for the relationship to sink so much.

 

[YedaGames]

I think you misinterpret the relationship between Iris and Blake. They’re just as passionate about each other as they always were, even more so, in fact. However, Iris had to accept one thing about Blake: our girl is not an adventurer. If comfortable enough, Blake would be very happy to spend days and weeks just sitting on the sofa with the phone in hands. Living in the slums was too stressful, so now Blake only wants to chill. Iris is the opposite of that in almost every way, and which is why she’s willing to take from Blake just enough without asking for too much. Their journey to the slums played a big role in this, even if your Blake refused to go there. It’s either “Blake will not do anything I ask, which is fine” or “Blake followed me and had to spend weeks living in a cage with a thug psycho, which is abhorrent”. Both outcomes lead to the same conclusion: Iris doesn’t want to push Blake anywhere anymore. And Blake is perfectly okay with that.

 

[jackdanniels]

Yeah, this makes sense, Blake always says he is lazy and Iris is a workaholic. But don't explain why their relationship turns so cold on the true route... not to mention the sharing route that is only a bunch of NTR scenes... Dream with the old fart having sex with Iris, video call with Iris kissing the old fart and calling him Papi, buying lingerie with Iris for her to wear to the old fart's delight. - and she totally ignores the sexual life with Blake on the sharing route (on the true route she semi-ignore it) -Strange, and kind of cruel.

-You should implement a "fuck off" in Deliravance, Blake simply dumb her stupid ass, if things do not change.

But anyway, there are a bunch of good routes aside from Iris, even the crazy Bree relationship is better.

 

[YedaGames]

Iris does not have a shared route, she very explicitly says that she will go for Stewart, and it’s up to Blake to keep up with them or not. From that point on Blake’s role in this subroute is more of an overly invested friend, that’s it.

And again, I disagree that their relationship is cold on the true route. I think they share enough very intimate moments.

 

[jackdanniels]

Iris does not have a shared route, she very explicitly says that she will go for Stewart, and it’s up to Blake to keep up with them or not. From that point on Blake’s role in this subroute is more of an overly invested friend, that’s it.

And again, I disagree that their relationship is cold on the true route. I think they share enough very intimate moments.

an overly invested cuk

 

[Charroumane]

How to ruin a game purely and simply: permanently close a route with IRIS. It's absolutely stupid! How can we do that! while Blake can accompany her in the depths, gets kidnapped, raped, put in a cage, all this because of and to try to save Iris. Iris finds herself an old guy and goes on her way with him?? after all this while Blake and she are soul mates? this is clearly said in the story including by Iris! Honestly there is a big big problem.
Obviously they are different but still, even if there are themes in this AVN, at one point it doesn't fit anymore! what should we admit? Seeing Iris getting fucked by an old man and on top of that imposing on us that Blake has the fantasy of imagining them fucking together? Sorry it's at this level of degradation that it becomes unbearable! might as well present a dog in LI also at this time!
So what to think? Either Blake is immensely stupid or even an idiot (which I believe because how can you prefer to look at your feet rather than your best friend) or we are in a stupid perversity! Blake does not even think about reading her Boss's books when everyone tells her to do so.... You clearly say in an option that you like women but you clearly make no direct attempt to make love to a woman (just endured). You try to help everyone, everyone adores you but everyone lets you down and you NEVER have the possibility to get out of this!
So forgive me but once again: either Blake is the biggest idiot in the world who should finally shoot herself in the head or everyone around her are real assholes and so what are we waiting for at the end of this story (although immersive) to shoot us in the head???
Same for Blake's mother, same for other LIs, same for his boss and his daughter: there is no gratification just a semblance of appearance of taking charge of his destination but it falls very and always to the disadvantage of the MC and including in the choice of his sissifaction or passage to Bimbo!
What a waste with yet a rather good story, long, beautiful renderings of LI with whom we get attached but here it is .....moral of the story: you like to get fucked and well my friend you will get fucked all your life and watch the others be happy because you will not be and you will remain alone even if you do not realize it yet. BRAVO beautiful shitty mentality!
DEVs thank you for allowing happy endings because honestly your AVN at this moment will undoubtedly cause some suicides in some readers and the few insufficient adult scenes do not justify this sad feeling of permanent latent perversion which is very disturbing!
Only hope, Jasmine's dream: she is Blake's maid and Iris is there too: so hope that Blake and Iris get married and keep Jasmine with them! Sincerely hope that this vision comes true!

 

[zav_pirat]

Hello, I really like your work! I think the characters and the world came out nicely. But one thing always bothers me: Rebecca had a huge presence from the start that made me think she would be one of the potential love interests, but she never actually became one.

 

[YedaGames]

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It seems to me that you've been making wrong choices along the way, and ended up on the subroute that you didn't want. Also, don't forget that Blake's dominance plays a big role in the story progression.

Hello, I really like your work! I think the characters and the world came out nicely. But one thing always bothers me: Rebecca had a huge presence from the start that made me think she would be one of the potential love interests, but she never actually became one.

Rebecca was supposed to be a love interest initially but I substituted her with Vanessa for various reasons. Rebecca's path is less about your relationship with her and more about her personality. To put it shortly, Rebecca is the kind of person to wanna sleep with you regardless if you're in a relationship or not. So, it was much easier for me to just turn her into a constant factor in Blake's life rather than a love interest.

 

[jackdanniels]

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Forget about the shitty routes (sub-routes and retard LI's) Samuel and Vanessa's true routes are the best. Melinda even on the true route still uses Blake as a fucktoy, so, I even prefer to go on Dominique slave route than Melinda. Suya and Bree is comedy. Iris, both routes (for me at least) are trash. Did I forget anyone? Ah Lian, from the start I disliked his route and never finished.

So, Vanessa's true route starts a little awkward, as she is a pure lesbian, and when she finds out that Blake is not exactly a woman you even feel that things will not work, but then a beautiful romance starts and their sexual life is similar with Samuel, intense in all parts of the AVN.

Vanessa is also the only woman (aside from Rebecca on her friend-with-benefit route) who doesn't neglect Blake's bigger penis.

I truly hope to see Vanessa pregnant from Blake, and as for Samuel, it's a mystery what will happen, because he is starting a rebellion against Dominique in this update.

And as YedaGames said, if you pick the wrong choices, Blake will end up in a shitty permanent position.

 

[Charroumane]

Thank you for all your answers but, despite the enormous interest I have in this quality AVN, I remain convinced that it would be appropriate to make a supplement to distinguish the different routes. Of course I saw that you had an official walktrough but it is really not a pleasant ergonomics. Moreover, like many people I like to do a first free test but even by being extremely attentive I find myself two thirds of the way through the AVN with an extremely unpleasant route and far from my choices.

Some characters interest me a lot: Vanessa, Melinda, the doc's wife, Julia, and IRIS who is truly Blake's soul mate. I really paid close attention to the texts and as I said before Jasmine's dream confirmed me in this choice. I sincerely hope that YEDA will allow such an outcome in the story in which case the adventure in the underworld would turn out to be an almost useless adventure.

So I'm going to start over from the beginning to try an adventure with IRIS but honestly it's a feeling of frustration that prevails, for the moment.

However to conclude: sorry to YEDA because the work for this story is enormous and in that I thank him, just like the realization of many LI which are great!

 

[Charroumane]

Iris does not have a shared route, she very explicitly says that she will go for Stewart, and it’s up to Blake to keep up with them or not. From that point on Blake’s role in this subroute is more of an overly invested friend, that’s it.

And again, I disagree that their relationship is cold on the true route. I think they share enough very intimate moments.

sorry but that's exactly where it doesn't fit but then doesn't fit at all! It's not because IRIS says she's in a relationship with Stewart that it has to be definitive either especially since she sends many signs again and again towards Blake! On this you are not at all clear and impose a disgusting NTR relationship! You do the same thing with Rebecca by making a romantic relationship impossible between Blake. For you it's logical since you write but the narrative transcription is not clear. In addition you do not allow a second chance in a relationship. It's your AVN obviously but honestly imposing choices like that is more than disturbing given the length of the story and the number of characters.

Frankly apart from shitty and toxic relationships it's starting to be a bit much and ruins your big development work. The principle of domination or submission is not necessarily toxic I'm not telling you anything. For example, IRIS clearly says she is looking for a normal and balanced relationship: how does being trans, for example, prevent a balanced relationship? It allows for intimate connections but not a balanced life?

But if I follow your narrative idea, the only conclusion is that IRIS is just a big manipulative bitch who destroys everyone she approaches: her escape from the underworld causes Blake problems, her return to the zone causes Blake to be raped, not to mention what he has to do to try to defend Iris; Iris forms an intimate relationship with an old fart... Same with girls like Pepper and Jasmin... So why not allow several moments to simply break the friendly relationship rather than for example seeing Blake continue to listen to her venomous words: basically, look at you Blake and your superficiality while I am now someone educated and useful!

What relationship becomes intelligent and healthy? allows a common progression of the MC and an LI? none for the moment! It seems that Blake never manages to progress psychologically if we analyze the speeches of the LI around him! Iris evolves, Suya evolves, Lucia evolves, Melinda evolves... but here Blake is confined to a role of caricatured Submissive or caricatured Dominant! How can we come to believe that a person like Blake cannot choose a more settled life. but Sorry at one point I can no longer follow your story, logical or else it's the NTR that is not going at all. For you it is clear but for us readers no. It's as if you were directing Batman Begins and then at one point you change the color of the costume to pink with green polka dots! I can assure you that despite a real quality of background you will see the film very differently!

Understand well I will do a complete story with your Walktrough but I am used to making stories freely at the beginning to take advantage of the immersion and judge the quality. I love that this story is long but if I learn along the way that the IRIS path is blocked and is only allowed with a fake relationship with an old fart, then I will stop before the end because it becomes mental torture.
to answer to you: because his old teacher is an adventurer maybe?
I even asked myself: If Blake commits suicide (let's imagine that she realizes that her life is meaningless) how many people would come to see her on her grave? Well since I am currently in the chapter in Deliverance, I will say: 0. Well after 4 days of play I must say that it is more than disturbing and saying: you have chosen your path badly ..... is not a sufficient answer unfortunately.

 

[jackdanniels]

sorry but that's exactly where it doesn't fit but then doesn't fit at all! It's not because IRIS says she's in a relationship with Stewart that it has to be definitive either especially since she sends many signs again and again towards Blake! On this you are not at all clear and impose a disgusting NTR relationship! You do the same thing with Rebecca by making a romantic relationship impossible between Blake. For you it's logical since you write but the narrative transcription is not clear. In addition you do not allow a second chance in a relationship. It's your AVN obviously but honestly imposing choices like that is more than disturbing given the length of the story and the number of characters.

Frankly apart from shitty and toxic relationships it's starting to be a bit much and ruins your big development work. The principle of domination or submission is not necessarily toxic I'm not telling you anything. For example, IRIS clearly says she is looking for a normal and balanced relationship: how does being trans, for example, prevent a balanced relationship? It allows for intimate connections but not a balanced life?

But if I follow your narrative idea, the only conclusion is that IRIS is just a big manipulative bitch who destroys everyone she approaches: her escape from the underworld causes Blake problems, her return to the zone causes Blake to be raped, not to mention what he has to do to try to defend Iris; Iris forms an intimate relationship with an old fart... Same with girls like Pepper and Jasmin... So why not allow several moments to simply break the friendly relationship rather than for example seeing Blake continue to listen to her venomous words: basically, look at you Blake and your superficiality while I am now someone educated and useful!

What relationship becomes intelligent and healthy? allows a common progression of the MC and an LI? none for the moment! It seems that Blake never manages to progress psychologically if we analyze the speeches of the LI around him! Iris evolves, Suya evolves, Lucia evolves, Melinda evolves... but here Blake is confined to a role of caricatured Submissive or caricatured Dominant! How can we come to believe that a person like Blake cannot choose a more settled life. but Sorry at one point I can no longer follow your story, logical or else it's the NTR that is not going at all. For you it is clear but for us readers no. It's as if you were directing Batman Begins and then at one point you change the color of the costume to pink with green polka dots! I can assure you that despite a real quality of background you will see the film very differently!

Understand well I will do a complete story with your Walktrough but I am used to making stories freely at the beginning to take advantage of the immersion and judge the quality. I love that this story is long but if I learn along the way that the IRIS path is blocked and is only allowed with a fake relationship with an old fart, then I will stop before the end because it becomes mental torture.
to answer to you: because his old teacher is an adventurer maybe?
I even asked myself: If Blake commits suicide (let's imagine that she realizes that her life is meaningless) how many people would come to see her on her grave? Well since I am currently in the chapter in Deliverance, I will say: 0. Well after 4 days of play I must say that it is more than disturbing and saying: you have chosen your path badly ..... is not a sufficient answer unfortunately.

You have to ignore Iris, especially if you hate NTR like me. But some people love NTR and humiliation, unfortunately, that's what Iris is good for, an evil unfaithful brat.

Ignore the Steward evil bitch, the AVN is a masterpiece. If you follow Vanessa's route, she will complain a lot about Iris, the way she describes her sister is similar to what you're saying about her.


edit: By the way, the best route is a dominant experimental bimbo Blake single.