- Dec 19, 2018
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This is the lockpicking lawyer, and today I have something really unusual that was sent in by a viewer...
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There is a German translation of this game./
Für dieses Spiel gibt es eine deutsche Übersetzung.
She Is My Precious - German Translation - Deutsch-Übersetzung
@ Finest Art Production: Please add it to your page 1 as an "Extra"
Für dieses Spiel gibt es eine deutsche Übersetzung.
She Is My Precious - German Translation - Deutsch-Übersetzung
@ Finest Art Production: Please add it to your page 1 as an "Extra"
- Jan 12, 2019
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Click the Report link in the OP. A mod will add a link to your translation.
Afaik the dev doesn't even have an account here (and anyway, he cannot edit the original post), but you can contact them on itch.io.
- Mar 19, 2022
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That´s a really promising start, but please don´t turn this into an annoying sandbox.
- Feb 14, 2018
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In short, without Harem but also without ntr, cruel but fair.
Thanks for asking the hard questions, and hopefully if he "changes his mind" with the ntr it's an "extra" like some devs (not ideal, but at least it doesn't spoil the story)
I like the overall story, but its not hitting like it should. Clearly you are going for a very emotional story, but it's making feel nothing. Emily background is rushed, why is she so important? Maybe something shared they experienced from the Orphanage. When he meets his daughter, they exchange words but no emotion. If it's on purpose with Daughter, I need to see her not trusting or unable to trust or be damaged, otherwise hugging and or crying is a possbility. MC doesn't seem to be able to convey how he feels about the daughter, or the situation, at all, where the internal dialogue needs to happen.
E.g.: (No quotes) Oh my god finally a clue where Emily may be, years without anything and finally I have hope
Oh my god what am I thinking I now have a daughter and my reaction is ignore her and run off to find her mom? What's wrong with me?
Jesus she looks just like Emily all those years ago
E.g.: (No quotes) Oh my god finally a clue where Emily may be, years without anything and finally I have hope
Oh my god what am I thinking I now have a daughter and my reaction is ignore her and run off to find her mom? What's wrong with me?
Jesus she looks just like Emily all those years ago
- Aug 18, 2020
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Now why is it that in a game like this where a man suddenly finds out he's the father of a young woman.... And the thought of a paternity test never crosses his mind?
What I'd love to see and am gonna suggest here, is the possibility of doing a paternity test during the check up that's gonna follow in the next update. Because if it were me, I would instantly do a paternity test.
One more thing I need to adress is the fact that we gave her a new name and she told us her old one, but if I roll back and name her the same as her old name, I would've expected some other name or her saying this is her old name and we should use another one.
What I'd love to see and am gonna suggest here, is the possibility of doing a paternity test during the check up that's gonna follow in the next update. Because if it were me, I would instantly do a paternity test.
One more thing I need to adress is the fact that we gave her a new name and she told us her old one, but if I roll back and name her the same as her old name, I would've expected some other name or her saying this is her old name and we should use another one.
- Aug 25, 2022
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Literaly just saw the beach begining scene, so, i'm probally wrong, but, feels like these kind of novels who MC make a girl pregnant and he found a daughter later in the story
- Aug 25, 2022
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God Damn '-' these ppl was sick lol, and, i really hope u give us more chapters, this was an amazing demo, loved it
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It is, yeah. With some added intrigue about the circumstances around the mother's disappearance. Honestly pretty good so far both in concept and execution. Dev would immensely benefit himself if people could get an idea of that plot in the overview.
- Jan 4, 2019
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I think that you should rewrite the dialogue up until the girls you tutor arrives as it felt kinda awkward, but other than that I really love the game, it got me pretty emotional in the last 15 or so minutes too.
Anyways, here's some screenshots for episode one:
Anyways, here's some screenshots for episode one:
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- Aug 18, 2020
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In general, it is a good game. The introduction of Emily's daughter is very rush and uncanny. Hope for a better and compiling dialog in the future updates.
- Jun 29, 2021
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I'm not glad for sandbox, but very glad for no NTR!
- Feb 26, 2018
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definitely "She's my precious"! Beautiful renders, a bit intriguing story, looks great dev, keep it up
- Aug 6, 2020
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Well granddady was a vn lover it seems.Better thank him for a virgin daughter .
the last weekly devlog is missing, hope this isn't a sign of abandonment.
Wouldn't be the first game getting that tag on v0.1
Wouldn't be the first game getting that tag on v0.1