VN Ren'Py Shut Up and Dance [Ep.1-10 Ch.1 v1.0 SE] [Boring Games]

[Ciaran8023]

Renders looked great, animations were great, but I had to just peace out after playing it for a little while.
The premise and the writing were just.. very lacking compared to the rest of the game. When you have renders like these and solid animations, it almost feels like a crime that the writing feels like it got ripped from a discontinued WattPad novel written by a 15 year old.

Of course, to each their own but man, I was just not a fan at all.

 

[Deleted member 3428287]

Renders looked great, animations were great, but I had to just peace out after playing it for a little while.
The premise and the writing were just.. very lacking compared to the rest of the game. When you have renders like these and solid animations, it almost feels like a crime that the writing feels like it got ripped from a discontinued WattPad novel written by a 15 year old.

Of course, to each their own but man, I was just not a fan at all.

what's wrong with the story?

i get it, it's basic, but it's not cringe.

 

[Ciaran8023]

what's wrong with the story?

i get it, it's basic, but it's not cringe.

It's mainly just the whole MC acting like a creepy fucker, magically gains mind control powers and becomes even more of a creep.
It would just come off as more authentic to me if he realized "oh shit, this actually has some fucked consequences and what actually happens to people I do this shit do?" and maybe give a choice before brainwashing the doctor etc.

Basically, if the characters actually behaved like people instead of, as said, something out of a WattPad novel then it would've worked WAY better for me.

 

[Pervy Sensei]

It's mainly just the whole MC acting like a creepy fucker, magically gains mind control powers and becomes even more of a creep.
It would just come off as more authentic to me if he realized "oh shit, this actually has some fucked consequences and what actually happens to people I do this shit do?" and maybe give a choice before brainwashing the doctor etc.

Basically, if the characters actually behaved like people instead of, as said, something out of a WattPad novel then it would've worked WAY better for me.

Since one of the VN's tags is Mind Control, I'm guessing you knew that you were at least heading into a story that has that.

It's unclear to me whether you are just against mind control, or if you think it can be done well and have an example of that to point to? If you're against it, I don't know why you played after seeing the tag.

 

[Ciaran8023]

Since one of the VN's tags is Mind Control, I'm guessing you knew that you were at least heading into a story that has that.

It's unclear to me whether you are just against mind control, or if you think it can be done well and have an example of that to point to? If you're against it, I don't know why you played after seeing the tag.

It's the latter rather than the former, mind control can be done VERY well and have a lot of intriguing twists and turns, with psychological aspects interwoven.

It just ain't that, that's for sure, and while I'm not opposed to an "okay" story it just didn't reach that for me either. I suppose I could've worded it better.

 

[Pervy Sensei]

Boring Games Have you ever thought of making a short movie with a scene from the game or standalone (similar to Jackerman with a mother's warmth)? An animation with voices of Megan's scene would be unreal. Could be incredible marketing for your game too. If it goes viral on PH and other websites, it could bring thousands of people to your patreon or buy game on steam cause they would most definitely want more! I'm a big fan of your work, would love to see you get the recognition you deserve with a wider audience. Just thought it might be a good idea for your project so throwing this out there lol.

That takes A LOT of work to put together a movie like that. If he did it, he would have to drop the VN and put all his time and at least a few months into it. This would of course piss off everyone supporting him who wants to see the VN done, which is already, what, five years in production as it is, and only now finally finished the remakes?

I like the idea of sex sfx (skin slapping, moans) being added to the VN and maybe voiced dialogue as well (mixed feelings on that), but a whole standalone movie is just a ridiculous ask. No offense meant.

 

[J0K3RXXX]

After this recent update, is the remake content already fully realized or is there something else missing?

 

[Pervy Sensei]

After this recent update, is the remake content already fully realized or is there something else missing?

Remake is done. Everything from here on out will be new.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Renders looked great, animations were great, but I had to just peace out after playing it for a little while.
The premise and the writing were just.. very lacking compared to the rest of the game. When you have renders like these and solid animations, it almost feels like a crime that the writing feels like it got ripped from a discontinued WattPad novel written by a 15 year old.

Of course, to each their own but man, I was just not a fan at all.

It's mainly just the whole MC acting like a creepy fucker, magically gains mind control powers and becomes even more of a creep.
It would just come off as more authentic to me if he realized "oh shit, this actually has some fucked consequences and what actually happens to people I do this shit do?" and maybe give a choice before brainwashing the doctor etc.

Basically, if the characters actually behaved like people instead of, as said, something out of a WattPad novel then it would've worked WAY better for me.

Dunno why you're mouthing off like this. Pretty sure the game told you to

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[azz111]

Renders looked great, animations were great, but I had to just peace out after playing it for a little while.
The premise and the writing were just.. very lacking compared to the rest of the game. When you have renders like these and solid animations, it almost feels like a crime that the writing feels like it got ripped from a discontinued WattPad novel written by a 15 year old.

Of course, to each their own but man, I was just not a fan at all.

I disagree with you, but as you said, to each their own.

 

[Bossjohn]

hoho! Time to replay this GEM again from the START

 

[elandoor]

I believe that the 3some will happen also in the love route, just later. Notice that one of the tag is harem, I believe that at some point all the girls will decide to share the MC.

me to brother hope threesome in love path so no more corupt path

 

[fishbrain]

I believe that the 3some will happen also in the love route, just later. Notice that one of the tag is harem, I believe that at some point all the girls will decide to share the MC.

Initially I would've agreed but being this close to the end I don't think there's adequate time to progress mom and sis to that point. With all the other characters it just feels like the threesome will be exclusive to the corruption route. Let's face it though, the corruption path here isn't what most would think of when hearing that word, mom is just a little dirtier.

 

[DKft]

Anyone knows when the incest patch is going to be updated?

 

[fishbrain]

Anyone knows when the incest patch is going to be updated?

Don't think it needs updated, it's just a variable trigger. Worked fine for me.

 

[TorgoNudho]

hey there! I got to the ep6 warning about the next chapters and stuff, but when I hit Yes, there are errors of "image not found". Is it because i'm using the mod?

 

[FerdoPomikovic]

Anybody knows why this version is called Episode 6 when there are scenes from Episode 7, 8 and 9?

 

[MAGO-DAG]

Anybody knows why this version is called Episode 6 when there are scenes from Episode 7, 8 and 9?

Probably because it's a remake of episodes 1 to 6?

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Anybody knows why this version is called Episode 6 when there are scenes from Episode 7, 8 and 9?

They remade Episodes 1–6, finally finishing the remake with this update. They did continue making episodes at the same time, so 7, 8 and 9 were made while the earlier ones were getting remade. After you download the current version and play it, you'll continue on with the last 3 episodes. You don't need to do anything special; just download the latest from the OP and then play all the way through Episode 9.

 

[Savor]

This is the last "Remake before Ep. 10.

So after release of episode 10 come more remakes?
would like to start this game over when all remakes are done.