VN Ren'Py Abandoned Sibling Primacy [v0.3] [PY Studios]

[adventurefreebie]

Oh there is a reason the MC is buff...

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Alright back to criticism now. If he was buff like idk henry cavill or something that'd been fine but he is like one of those buff/fat guys you know. Also, the penis is unrealistically big. I get he is in porn and he has to be big but that shit looks like its 3 feet or some shit. All that can be overlooked though I guess depending on how the next few updates turn out but if you did want to take some time changing the mc up a little bit and rerendering some of the scenes since you aren't too deep into the game. I don't think anyone would really mind.

 

[pystudios]

Alright back to criticism now. If he was buff like idk henry cavill or something that'd been fine but he is like one of those buff/fat guys you know. Also, the penis is unrealistically big. I get he is in porn and he has to be big but that shit looks like its 3 feet or some shit. All that can be overlooked though I guess depending on how the next few updates turn out but if you did want to take some time changing the mc up a little bit and rerendering some of the scenes since you aren't too deep into the game. I don't think anyone would really mind.

A buff/fat guy???? Really...

idk I think some of you are just making up stuff to complain about. And his dick is not 3 feet long only about 15 inches.
I am making changes but have a legitimate argument at least.

 

[Benn Swagger]

A buff/fat guy???? Really...

Not complaining, but in games the bigger the male character body, it will take the focus out of the ladies.
But if that your decision/game-theme, up to you.

But for me the good proportion would be this comparison, where I prefer A for games character. Where male char in your games feels like B.

 

[adventurefreebie]

Not complaining, but in games the bigger the male character body, it will take the focus out of the ladies.
But if that your decision/game-theme, up to you.
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But for me the good proportion would be this comparison, where I prefer A for games character. Where male char in your games feels like B.

Yeah like A is definitely a more aesthetic body, which is also perfect for someone who does TV/Film.

 

[loqex]

Can't get over the steroid MC.. Aye Yai Yai

 

[♩♪♫ ŤЦ尺尺ØЛ ♫♪♩]

Don't worry too much about the criticism man. If you really care about the game you're making, you wouldn't give a shit about what anyone else says. Just keep pushing the updates and the people here will still most likely play. Just don't quit, like most people do after the first few updates aren't well received.

won`t even reach v.01 IMO

 

[♩♪♫ ŤЦ尺尺ØЛ ♫♪♩]

damn can any developer out there provide a not so old grandpa next as an MC? ....you know to at least spicy things up a bit like that gelato spaghetti :tf:

 

[Thornhill]

I've given this a try, my impressions : Some plotholes to plug, there's sound, that's nice, but i didn't like how the XXX scenes were handled. The Dev coulda, shoulda gave these some more attention, because , duh , it's a Porn Game, right ? He could've used those scenes to score some fans, and potential patrons. I don't care about how bulky or not the MC is, at least it's not a geek with pimples in his face, his "professional career" is an easy , but somewhat digestible plot device for the MC scoring all the women around, fine, it's funny that it's the Sis who seems to be seducing the MC, got no problems there. Since it's not even a 0.1, it's 0.09, i'll sit tight, and wait to see where this is going. Seen way worse, but it doesn't stand out ,not yet at least.

 

[EvilMonkey]

If nothing else this game has made me look up a word as I had never heard "primacy" used before. Education is important.

 

[pystudios]

Yeah like A is definitely a more aesthetic body, which is also perfect for someone who does TV/Film.

Depends on the TV show.

 

[pystudios]

won`t even reach v.01 IMO

0.1 coming out soon.

 

[pystudios]

I'm definitely not going to please everyone and the child like loving MCs who like short, skinny, kids with pimps on their faces is one of them. I've already explained numerous times the important of the MC's character role in his TV show which seems to allude the minds of the, "I want skinny kids" so I'm just not going to comment on it further. There are tons of those games around and I suggest you just move over to their threads as I'm not changing this one. I will do any legitimate changes and have done so already but this I do not see as one. Thank you.

 

[Thornhill]

I'm definitely not going to please everyone and the child like loving MCs who like short, skinny, kids with pimps on their faces is one of them. I've already explained numerous times the important of the MC's character role in his TV show which seems to allude the minds of the, "I want skinny kids" so I'm just not going to comment on it further. There are tons of those games around and I suggest you just move over to their threads as I'm not changing this one. I will do any legitimate changes and have done so already but this I do not see as one. Thank you.

Would you consider adding some more renders to the xxx scenes in 0.09 ? They felt like a F1 car passing by, before you know it, they're there, and a second later, they're gone.

 

[DonutMan]

Just went through the demo. After reading through the tread, seems like you've addressed most of the concerns, so I'll just add one thought. If you are going to go the 'fapping' game route, you need to emphasize that a bit more in my opinion.

Take the scene with the teacher:

The set up is a bit too convenient (I watch your porn, so I have to fuck you) but certainly not something you have to change if you don't feel like it. The issue is that it goes from a picture of them clothed, to one of them fucking, to one of him shooting his load at her with two lines of dialog... and that's it. It's too barren to really be considered a scene. I would either toss it or add more to it. At the moment it just feels off and honestly, to me, seemed to bring the quality of the game down a bit.

The speed of the progression with the sister seems to imply that the game will be more heavily focused on sex scenes and less on story/development of relationships. Which is totally fine. But again, if you want to do that I would really advise drawing the scenes out more. With the teacher there are tons of things you could add, him teasing and groping her, maybe a pic of the sister peeking, or even just more pics of them having sex. As it stands, it's hard to imagine he even had time to cum, let alone time for her to enjoy it or feel like she was fucked by a porn star.

 

[pystudios]

Take the scene with the teacher:

That scene I do have changes being made, but it does work better if you let the game flip the pages for you and turn the sound up.

 

[zack1999]

is that the dragonqueen from GoT?

 

[zack1999]

ive been over the game 3 times and cant find the scene
does anybody know how to get to the scene with the dragon queen?

 

[pystudios]

Updated early this morning. I've introduced new characters and locations, replaced some bad renders, added a scene early on in the game that needed it, added an in-game iPhone with several apps like a camera, photo app, map app, sound controls app and some that are still in development, a day planner that handles the mini game of the female's initial seduction, school classes and studies. Code-wise a pretty big release and improvement over the VN release, however this is my first attempt at animation and I think the head movements were a bit over the top. I may redo them by the next release. I took 6 hours the animations to do on my 9 year old MacPro for each one so...
I'm just getting into the gaming portion with mostly the FC's seduction and classes not that this is turning into a two player game but it could be fun if you had your wife, girlfriend or sister join you in playing.

PY Studios

 

[EvilMonkey]

I'm going to ask something that "might" seem stupid to you but bear with me, if the game is updated why is the version still 0.1? If you've performed bug-fixes and updated some scenes, then surely you'd add a numerical suffix to denote that it's been updated? For example, "v0.1.1" or "0.1b" even? In my eyes, the whole point of version numbering is to denote which version you're using.

 

[pystudios]

I'm going to ask something that "might" seem stupid to you but bear with me, if the game is updated why is the version still 0.1? If you've performed bug-fixes and updated some scenes, then surely you'd add a numerical suffix to denote that it's been updated? For example, "v0.1.1" or "0.1b" even? In my eyes, the whole point of version numbering is to denote which version you're using.

Not a stupid question at all... The last version was 0.09 and more in the line of a VN which I'm just starting to edge into the gaming portion with a mini-game but there are stats that will effect the future gaming version.
There's a lot to go back and add to this mini-game on future updates but I had to start somewhere as ppl were commenting there were no pathways or gaming choices which I said it wasn't to be so in that release. I guess ppl don't read the release information. This was my first attempt at animation and I've noticed too much head movement so I'll have to redo those as well but they took 6 hours for each animation on my 9 year old MacPro so it'll be a while. My stats didn't show up and I realized I compiled the wrong directory so I'll have an update shortly.

Thank you for taking the time to check out my first project.