- Dec 2, 2020
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I am still in love with this story and nothing will change that. But I am a bit disappointed. First of all, in a few frames I had the impression Erik was about to teabagging me
On a serious note. Personally I have a huge problem with cliffhangers. This stylistic device is so overused everywhere that it only makes me irritated. This one here is obviously not DPC level - cheap and fake drama for drama's sake - but it doesn't fit me as a final chord to close the first chapter.
Anyway, stay on your path. A glass of fine red and the love between these two, and soon to be three, really makes my day everytime.
On a serious note. Personally I have a huge problem with cliffhangers. This stylistic device is so overused everywhere that it only makes me irritated. This one here is obviously not DPC level - cheap and fake drama for drama's sake - but it doesn't fit me as a final chord to close the first chapter.
Anyway, stay on your path. A glass of fine red and the love between these two, and soon to be three, really makes my day everytime.