CREATE YOUR AI CUM SLUT ON CANDY.AI TRY FOR FREE
x

VN Ren'Py Sinful Summer: A Tale of Forbidden Love [Ch. 2.6] [Ruykiru]

4.50 star(s) 68 Votes
Discussion Reviews (68)
MacLovin'

MacLovin'

Member
Jun 12, 2018
266
454
Is the narration written with the help of an LLM? I get flashbacks from GPT 3.5 erotic role play mannerisms playing this game. “The complex tapestry of their feelings” “chaotic symphony” are expressions that came up often. Also I kinda like this game but theres literally one metaphor per sentence and I feel it might be a little too much.
I mean I don’t blame anyone for using AI to make up dialogue it’s a great tool!
Edited because the wording was too rough
 
Last edited:
  • Haha
Reactions: DanThaMan
Ruykiru

Ruykiru

Developing: Sinful Summer
Game Developer
May 2, 2017
757
4,527
MacLovin' said:
Is the narration written with the help of an LLM? I get flashbacks from GPT 3.5 erotic role play mannerisms playing this game. “The complex tapestry of their feelings” “chaotic symphony” are expressions that came up often. Also I kinda like this game but theres literally one metaphor per sentence and I feel it might be a little too much.
I mean I don’t blame anyone for using AI to make up dialogue it’s a great tool!
Edited because the wording was too rough
Click to expand...
I was way too wordy on chapter 1, yes, I didn't really grasp that I was creating a visual novel and it's better to show than to tell. I didn't trust my rendering qualities enough and I used text to enrich the overall atmosphere and hopefully make the old render quality more tolerable, but on hindsight most narrator lines were too much. And the renders except for the intro and the start of day 3 are old, from when I had barely any experience, but I warn about all this stuff at the beginning cause. This is my first project after all and improving is part of the process.

The upcoming 2.6 has many narrator lines removed from the start and replaced with either nothing or dialogue. I plan to rework some more stuff for chapter 1.
 
Last edited:
  • Like
Reactions: meme_Lordo, B444, Lilarcor01 and 3 others
MacLovin'

MacLovin'

Member
Jun 12, 2018
266
454
Ruykiru said:
I was way too wordy on chapter 1, yes, I didn't really grasp that I was creating a visual novel and it's better to show than to tell. I didn't trust my rendering qualities enough and I used text to enrich the overall atmosphere and hopefully make the old render quality more tolerable, but on hindsight most narrator lines were too much. And the renders except for the intro and the start of day 3 are old, from when I had barely any experience, but I warn about all this stuff at the beginning cause. This is my first project after all and improving is part of the process.

The upcoming 2.6 has many narrator lines removed from the start and replaced with either nothing or dialogue. I plan to rework some more stuff for chapter 1.
Click to expand...
Well like I said in my rating your game got me hooked, you’re doing two things that I love very well: slow burn and Mom-daughtercest. I even ended up subscribing.
 
  • Heart
Reactions: Ruykiru
Ruykiru

Ruykiru

Developing: Sinful Summer
Game Developer
May 2, 2017
757
4,527
Taking a break...

Sorry for the long post below but what I'm about to tell you is important stuff if you like to keep up to date with the development of Sinful Summer (In spoilers for easier reading because it's freaking long! ) :p

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

I hope you are having just as much fun as Lyna is during her summer! See ya~!
4.jpg
 
  • Like
  • Heart
Reactions: Kondr1w, MirrorMan265, Extroyer777 and 36 others
MacLovin'

MacLovin'

Member
Jun 12, 2018
266
454
Ruykiru said:
Taking a break...

Sorry for the long post below but what I'm about to tell you is important stuff if you like to keep up to date with the development of Sinful Summer (In spoilers for easier reading because it's freaking long! ) :p

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

I hope you are having just as much fun as Lyna is during her summer! See ya~!
View attachment 4252934
Click to expand...
Enjoy your vacation bro! You deserve it
 
  • Like
  • Heart
Reactions: Extroyer777, Sepilo55 and rudy007
rudy007

rudy007

Engaged Member
Mar 17, 2021
2,397
5,890
Ruykiru said:
Taking a break...

Sorry for the long post below but what I'm about to tell you is important stuff if you like to keep up to date with the development of Sinful Summer (In spoilers for easier reading because it's freaking long! ) :p

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

I hope you are having just as much fun as Lyna is during her summer! See ya~!
View attachment 4252934
Click to expand...
i remember your beginnings, first renders on Deadmoon Survival page as help for Hot Tomato. It's bean over a year ago. I'm sad that Hot Tomato left this site, but I understand the reasons very well. I would probably left too. I'm sad he doesn't answer as well.
But this is about your game. Enjoy your free month, you deserved it. It's this time of the year, holidays, so enjoy and leave the keyboard at least for 2 weeks. You don't have to rework S1 at once. I hope for many new seasons as well.

Great game Ruykiru !
 
  • Heart
Reactions: Ruykiru
P

popang888

Newbie
Feb 27, 2023
23
44
Ruykiru said:
Taking a break...

Sorry for the long post below but what I'm about to tell you is important stuff if you like to keep up to date with the development of Sinful Summer (In spoilers for easier reading because it's freaking long! ) :p

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

I hope you are having just as much fun as Lyna is during her summer! See ya~!
View attachment 4252934
Click to expand...
Thanks for all, enjoy your vacationes, we Are going to be here wainting on your return!
.
.
.
.
Cant wait for the sloppy Kisses with the mom
 
  • Like
  • Jizzed my pants
  • Heart
Reactions: Extroyer777, delain, Darreau91 and 1 other person
M

Moonis

Active Member
Mar 18, 2019
654
915
Oh Wow! This was great. I had my eyes on this since first update, but the new banner forced me to start playing this and my expectations were crushed, in a good way. This was so much better than I hoped for. Perhaps best incest game on the site.

Story was very well written. Good pacing. Not too slow and not too fast. Actually I would have expected walls to break down faster between the horny teenagers, but mother's ongoing slipping into debauchery was great.

The star of the game is Lyna. What a beauty. Face could be more beautiful, but that slender body was just perfect. Just my favourite type. Those perky teenage breasts were divine. I also liked her personality greatly.

I managed to make bit more room into my signature and added this to my favourites.
 
  • Like
  • Heart
Reactions: popang888, Ruykiru, CurryDurry and 2 others
Scotty1212

Scotty1212

Well-Known Member
Donor
Jun 2, 2017
1,247
2,594
Ruykiru said:
Just two more weeks for the free release or... you can sub :p
You must be registered to see the links

View attachment 4285300
Click to expand...
My cards are getting declined on subscribestar... Cant be arsed anymore, tried to contact support 2x, idk what is the problem...

I think you could make an exception for Chritsmas just once this time, considering you are taking a holiday anyway. But that is just MHO. Anyway, good game :)
 
  • Like
  • Sad
Reactions: popang888, unknownroblot and Ruykiru
Ruykiru

Ruykiru

Developing: Sinful Summer
Game Developer
May 2, 2017
757
4,527
Scotty1212 said:
My cards are getting declined on subscribestar... Cant be arsed anymore, tried to contact support 2x, idk what is the problem...

I think you could make an exception for Chritsmas just once this time, considering you are taking a holiday anyway. But that is just MHO. Anyway, good game :)
Click to expand...
Sorry to hear that. Support is completely dead or something yeah, I've been trying to contact them for other issues for months.

I don't currently have any other alternative payment platforms.

And I've got different plans for a Christmas gift :p
 
Last edited:
  • Like
  • Heart
  • Hey there
Reactions: Mazurcraft, BulgariAMARA, rudy007 and 3 others
You must log in or register to reply here.
Top Bottom
4.50 star(s) 68 Votes