I agree on a handjob m/s scene being a bit overdone as the first base for what comes after, but I think I've just never seen it done properly with writing and setting of your standard. The first times crossing the line are always the most enjoyable scenes to me. Guess I got a bit too excited thinking it was gonna go exactly how I wanted it to go. Might just have to get into development and create things to my own liking lol.Sharp analysis my friend. You saw what no dick does to a reckless girl that didn't have time for boys and friends except her brother (developing a crush and an obsession for him) and then on top of that the poor childhood regarding the affection her super strict parents didn't give her plus the jealously. It's kind of a little revenge in a way but also she's just very quirky and a complex character. I'll make sure to have more conversations about it or possibly more flashbacks.
The power dynamics will get interesting in the family let me tell you.
Nah, that was my first thought but it was too boring and overdone. I want this to be slow burn but not that slow. I think the main build up part is mostly done.
I'm 100% certain you'll come up with some crazy plays on their personalities. Definitely still interested in seeing how it'll all work out. I was wondering if you had any plans on more characters getting relevant roles? There was some history with the aunt. Any chances of her being present beyond flashbacks?