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I didn’t mean myself, but your point is right, that’s why I mentioned income in the next post
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Idk but like does it really matter? Banks offer cards you can charge with only a set amount of money if you are concerned about internet purchases. And if it's about privacy we are all being spied already anyway, unless they implement decentralised anonymous proof of personhood in the internet as a whole.
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This game is such great fun. Love the writing and the scenarios. Love the characters.
Most of all, I love Helga's amazing huge bush. In-character discussion about how hairy she is is a lot of fun and very sexy. It's sort of rare even in games with hairy girls, so I enjoy seeing it here.
Also really fun and exciting that Lyna is taking inspiration from trying to 'match' Helga's sexy and mature body by growing out her own bush after being totally shaved for 90% of the game. That's so rare in these games and very fun to see!
Most of all, I love Helga's amazing huge bush. In-character discussion about how hairy she is is a lot of fun and very sexy. It's sort of rare even in games with hairy girls, so I enjoy seeing it here.
Also really fun and exciting that Lyna is taking inspiration from trying to 'match' Helga's sexy and mature body by growing out her own bush after being totally shaved for 90% of the game. That's so rare in these games and very fun to see!
I still think you're one of the best writers for this genre on this platform, but I gotta say that the level of corruption coming from the sister got a bit too much for me this update. The sister is a horny beast and I've enjoyed that a lot throughout it unfolding, though it seems like that aspect of her peaked to a point where her morals towards her family are completely overthrown by lust and a need for control. What she wants, she gets and she doesn't really care how it's done, as long as it happens. I enjoy that type of personality in these stories when the girl can be described as something along the lines of a spoiled brat, but the sister in this story goes beyond that and starts leaning towards a sociopathic mind. I can imagine her character arc being the holy grail for corruption enjoyers, but it's all a bit more than what I'm looking for personally.
I didn't like that the sister chose to be the puppetmaster of the already unfolding relationship of her mother and her brother. It felt like she had to convince herself of having the upperhand, so she could avoid her feelings of jealousy and in turn replace that with lust & power. She understood there was no stopping what those 2 felt for eachother, so she could only let it be as long as it was under her watch so to say. I was really hoping the mother would go through her feelings of desire on her own terms, but with this behind the curtains power dynamic going on, I feel her processing of it is being orchestrated too much and too intense. It has brought her guilt to the point of getting blackout drunk, which results in some form of guided threesome with an undertone of rape. With this scene, this novel turned from exactly what I've been looking for, to exactly what I've been avoiding on this site. Since the conclusion of the last update I was already kinda expecting you to go for the style of corruption you implemented for the sister, but I was convinced things would be escalating just a bit later on in the story. My expectation for this update was the mother's limit to be reached and some drinks giving her the boost to pick up where 2.4's teasing ended. If you'd ended the massage with a m/s handjob scene, including the nosy sister peeking, I'd have been a VERY satisfied fan. The entire buildup of that scene seemed to be aiming at that, but it's almost as if while you were in the middle of making it you lost your shit and said: "fuck it... MORE!!!"
To end my review, let it be known that my takes on this aren't targeting your writing skills, it's purely from me being a bit more vanilla regarding corruption. I'm 100% sure you made a whole lot of people very happy/horny yesterday. I'll still be checking in for the future of this project, but I'm not expecting it to be THE project for me. Good luck on your progress and remember to keep having fun with it!
I didn't like that the sister chose to be the puppetmaster of the already unfolding relationship of her mother and her brother. It felt like she had to convince herself of having the upperhand, so she could avoid her feelings of jealousy and in turn replace that with lust & power. She understood there was no stopping what those 2 felt for eachother, so she could only let it be as long as it was under her watch so to say. I was really hoping the mother would go through her feelings of desire on her own terms, but with this behind the curtains power dynamic going on, I feel her processing of it is being orchestrated too much and too intense. It has brought her guilt to the point of getting blackout drunk, which results in some form of guided threesome with an undertone of rape. With this scene, this novel turned from exactly what I've been looking for, to exactly what I've been avoiding on this site. Since the conclusion of the last update I was already kinda expecting you to go for the style of corruption you implemented for the sister, but I was convinced things would be escalating just a bit later on in the story. My expectation for this update was the mother's limit to be reached and some drinks giving her the boost to pick up where 2.4's teasing ended. If you'd ended the massage with a m/s handjob scene, including the nosy sister peeking, I'd have been a VERY satisfied fan. The entire buildup of that scene seemed to be aiming at that, but it's almost as if while you were in the middle of making it you lost your shit and said: "fuck it... MORE!!!"
To end my review, let it be known that my takes on this aren't targeting your writing skills, it's purely from me being a bit more vanilla regarding corruption. I'm 100% sure you made a whole lot of people very happy/horny yesterday. I'll still be checking in for the future of this project, but I'm not expecting it to be THE project for me. Good luck on your progress and remember to keep having fun with it!
Sharp analysis my friend. You saw what no dick does to a reckless girl that didn't have time for boys and friends except her brother (developing a crush and an obsession for him) and then on top of that the poor childhood regarding the affection her super strict parents didn't give her plus the jealously. It's kind of a little revenge in a way but also she's just very quirky and a complex character. I'll make sure to have more conversations about it or possibly more flashbacks.
The power dynamics will get interesting in the family let me tell you.
Nah, that was my first thought but it was too boring and overdone. I want this to be slow burn but not that slow. I think the main build up part is mostly done.
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My man I've released 10 updates since February this year, meanwhile there's developers (especially in the incest genre) with thousand of subs milking and releasing 1 or 2 a year. And this
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Don't rush, amigo. The main thing is to keep up the good work, in half a year that's good progress!
Since when is "look at these other people, they're worse" a valid response to any criticism, ever? I also don't have an issue with the pace of updates, but rather the content of those updates.
What a good faith response. You want a single 'proper' sex scene, that must mean you want a 30 minute brain dead roleplay porno. That's exactly what I said.
I'll be a bit more straightforward then: the teasing would be tolerable if the game had interesting characters or interesting conflicts, but it doesn't. The characters are all pretty flat and unlikeable, and they loop through the same conflicts over and over. Those conflicts being exclusively sexual in nature. When there's nothing more to the plot than sexual tension, why is it surprising that I think it's moving slowly?
I can only read "this woman is so hot, but she's also my mother.... But she's so hot.... But she's also my mother..." so many times before my eyes glaze over.
Have you read the synopsis? I never claimed this was gonna be a story with a deep unravelling plot of mysteries or power fantasy where the journey is a struggle. This is an adult novel explicitly focused on overcoming the taboo of incest.
Most people here don't agree, so maybe it's just not for you? Luckily there's tons of choices out there for adult games. But if you want to play exclusively something incest related then good luck finding some with proper build up and attention given to the taboo itself.
That's an oversimplification that tells me you haven't read my novel at all. Which has some usual tropes but also some originality at least, evident by the all haters complaining about a very shy male or how quirky Lyna is.
I'll shut up since I've said my piece, just a few final things.
Is it a simplification? Sure. But not an oversimplification. It probably describes 80% of Erik and 50% of Helga.
It...sounds like you are somewhat agreeing with me? So again, when there's nothing more to the plot than sexual tension, why is it surprising if I think it's moving slowly?
Beware survivorship bias. I agree there's very little out there with an explicit focus on the taboo. I blame Patreon for that one.
Do you really believe I haven't read it? My favourite part was where Lyna was attacked by a tiger shark and Erik had to rescue her, dressed in an Orca costume. Then we find out Helga planned the whole thing.
Is it a simplification? Sure. But not an oversimplification. It probably describes 80% of Erik and 50% of Helga.
this game is just ... wow !! i love it, and i love the slow burn.
when you have so much great review, its mean you are in the right path, so keep it !
when you have so much great review, its mean you are in the right path, so keep it !
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Did you see the ratings?
Everyone have gave 5star, I think you're just spreading hate maybe?
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the hottest and sweetest game update for the entire game or something I really liked the update, it was a top update in the game, I'm really looking forward to it again ))