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- Dec 4, 2016
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Nope, I think that'd be all
You can start farming some points now if you want but i wouldn't recommend it, tbh
- Dec 4, 2016
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right now only the maid cafe story is available, you get it only by going to the sinful valley district
Once you get to the point that that you can go there to only "work" you are pretty much done with the story content
Love the art style and the idea of awakening the lust/increasing corruption of the mom (and by extension I presume the rest of the family). Seems rather accelerated in the progress however at least currently. A lot of options are yet to be implemented it appears and corrected (some of the option descriptions says that it doesn't advance time but it does, morn->noon->etc). I'll definitely keep this on my watch list and see how it progresses a bit. I may be enticed to support this one. 
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Wait but take over is not even your game to begin with, am i wrong? It's this Marat dude who is the lead developer. So no wonder it's ok and still going with version 40. If it was you it would end up in the endless ramake loop. But then again idc if you milk you supporters or anything, i just told that guy to not hold any hopes for the game.
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How is not even my game, you literally just said "its this marat dude" while answering to MaraTDuoDev.
Also IDK what's the problem with take over; I have never remake take over, nor actually stopped adding content to it (right now it has over 5300 images), so I'm not sure what shit you are smoking, but quit for your mental sanity
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Oh, I remember playing the old version and even reviewing it.
Just played this new one, and while I really like the general idea of the game - the wife being corrupted (or I think a more correct tag would be "moral degeneration") and so on, I think everything is happening too quickly.
I mean I'd prefer some more story build-up and character development. Let's say, the wife got offered the job at the cafe. First, she just works as a manager and wears normal clothing. Then, for some reason, she is asked to help serve drinks and so on. After that, she is persuaded to change her attire for a little bit sexier one. Then after some time some even sexier clothing and only after that she begins wearing that slutty outfit. Finally, she is forced or persuaded or whatever to start servicing clients sexually. Probably not blowjobs right away, but, kissing or handjobs or whatever. And then it escalates until the moment where she starts doing that sexual stuff eagerly.
The same thing with the boss. I didn't like it that the wife almost immediately falls for him like some super big slut. It would be much more interesting if, let's say, she refused his advances in the beginning. But the boss coerces her at first for some small things (like groping), then some more serious stuff. And so on until she starts loving it.
I mean, in such corruption games the story is everything, especially when you use hand-drawn pictures, which it seems there are never enough.
The pictures are all right. Not masterpieces, but good enough to enjoy the game, if the story is good. But for now, it is not very enjoyable, at least for me.
Just played this new one, and while I really like the general idea of the game - the wife being corrupted (or I think a more correct tag would be "moral degeneration") and so on, I think everything is happening too quickly.
I mean I'd prefer some more story build-up and character development. Let's say, the wife got offered the job at the cafe. First, she just works as a manager and wears normal clothing. Then, for some reason, she is asked to help serve drinks and so on. After that, she is persuaded to change her attire for a little bit sexier one. Then after some time some even sexier clothing and only after that she begins wearing that slutty outfit. Finally, she is forced or persuaded or whatever to start servicing clients sexually. Probably not blowjobs right away, but, kissing or handjobs or whatever. And then it escalates until the moment where she starts doing that sexual stuff eagerly.
The same thing with the boss. I didn't like it that the wife almost immediately falls for him like some super big slut. It would be much more interesting if, let's say, she refused his advances in the beginning. But the boss coerces her at first for some small things (like groping), then some more serious stuff. And so on until she starts loving it.
I mean, in such corruption games the story is everything, especially when you use hand-drawn pictures, which it seems there are never enough.
The pictures are all right. Not masterpieces, but good enough to enjoy the game, if the story is good. But for now, it is not very enjoyable, at least for me.
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I played the first version and this latest version and I am sorry to say they latest version is just not very good. I realise art is a personal preference but the new art is just not very good in my opinion. Something is just off expecially with the mother character.
Secondly with in about 5 mintues the mother is basically slutting herself out to everyone around. No real build up, corruption or any real character change just one minute married with kids and the next sucking and fucking everyone in site. With some pacing things may improve but need some serious work.
The scenario is interesting but needs some serious plot work to save it from mediocrity when it had originially promised so much.
Secondly with in about 5 mintues the mother is basically slutting herself out to everyone around. No real build up, corruption or any real character change just one minute married with kids and the next sucking and fucking everyone in site. With some pacing things may improve but need some serious work.
The scenario is interesting but needs some serious plot work to save it from mediocrity when it had originially promised so much.
- Dec 4, 2016
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The story *is not about her corruption*, is about her corrupting others
Do male character in many other games have to go through a million experiences before they start corrupting women? lol Most of them just start with a guy bumping to some sort of device or gimick to mind control people and just start doing it
tbh idc if people don't get this, but it should be obvious. And even if not, its been explained a few times already
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Kind of hard to imagine that. I mean currently in the game, there is no sign that the MC can corrupt anyone or is interested in corrupting anyone or even that there are any characters that are supposed to be corrupted. She looks and acts and thinks like a good prudent wife who ended up in a hard financial situation. Then suddenly starts fucking everyone around her without any reason. It would be logical in that case to make the MC from the very beginning "a big bored slut wife who is always horny and super excited about that new law" or at first to develop a story where the MC first gets corrupted and only then starts corrupting people around her.
Even the description in the first post doesn't hint at all at your idea.
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what the fuck you mean "Hard to imagine" lmao I'm the writer and dev, I know where the story is going lmao
And the first post was done during the first release, not the newest one, so its outdated as its been mentioned multiple times. The game and the story overall was been remade since the early prototypes
And IDK I find your ideas trash tbh, but do your own game I guess, idc.
If its not clear, the story is about a successful woman that renounced/sacrificed the joys of her youth to be professionally successful and now is rediscovering what she has lost. If you bother to read her conversations with Lisa, or her thoughts for that matter, they (she and Lisa) have always been slutty, is just one of them embraced that side and the other didn't
Also you say this BS as if, for example, Acerola games don't have the mc enjoying being fucked by strangers by scene 3 or 4 from the start, lol
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What the fucking wrong with you? I haven't offended or even tried to offend you but your post is extremely rude.
I told how your story is perceived now. It is not coherent and totally unnatural and unbelievable. It is ridiculous even for a porno game. And I'm not the only one who says it. But you don't want to hear. You are "the writer and dev who knows where story is going". You know everything but somehow for a more than two years your game has gone nowhere and receives only negative feedback.
This is how you want the story to be, but it is not how it is actually now. It is read differently. For now the story is about a wife who "looks and acts and thinks like a good prudent wife who ended up in a hard financial situation. Then suddenly starts fucking everyone around her without any reason".
Now I read your earlier post and I see how you interacted with other people here. You are not only very rude to me, but others. Your problem is that you are not able to accept criticism. Somehow you perceive that people here want to hurt and offend you. Actually they are not. They want the game to be better. They see obvious weak points in your game. But instead of listening and thinking, you just offend them. With such an attitude it would be much harder for you to make a good game out of it and to be a successful developer.
It is your post. You can edit it whenever you want. What is the point of keeping it this way, when it has nothing to do with the current version of the game? You are just misleading people and then somehow is surprised that people don't understand your grandiose ideas. People who visit this thread for the first time read the first post and download the game expecting that the description in the first post has something to do with the actual game. Most people don't read the whole thread before posting a comment or making a review.
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So I came here to download the new version on my android. I initially didn't like the 1 protag idea and then thought I would tell you that maybe after this you could make other games using Ben, Josh and Terah as the main characters to detail there experience with the law. From this post though I am not sure I like where the game has gone. In the original Magda was a loyal wife who hated the law and didn't want the debauchery and was a prude who was going to be corrupted by her boss. From what I have read on here she is no longer rhos character and is meant to be a slutty disloyal woman who btw I dislike playing as unless I make them that way over time.
The game was a married man, an young boy who was relatively desperate for sex, A young prudish girl and her mother a prude loyal wife and it made sense. Is Terah also a slut now? Good luck dev but I am not sure I will play the new version as i don't think I like the story changes and when you said you were reworking the game I assumed you meant you were changing the art style, removing the scenes of other protagonists and possibly would add new scenes to cover the lost content as well as new scenes that would come about normally (An extra large update) while staying true to the original story but you seemingly haven't. Again though best of luck I hope this game grows a large following I'm just not sure the game is my cup of tea anymore.
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idk if was already solved, if yes sorry, this come from 0.5.
0.6 have various more, I haven't done much, just interacted with the son.
Btw 0.6 is not compatible with older saves due rewriting all structure logic so you have to start all over, for what i can see is a totally a different game incl. CG and the storyline. why a remake in a middle of working?
I leave here the 0.5 PC (sorry don't have the other versions), for what i can see is preferably instead of a sandbox game, it follow every family member and have its own path for each (and yes you can easily talk about corruption here)
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0.6 have various more, I haven't done much, just interacted with the son.
Btw 0.6 is not compatible with older saves due rewriting all structure logic so you have to start all over, for what i can see is a totally a different game incl. CG and the storyline. why a remake in a middle of working?
I leave here the 0.5 PC (sorry don't have the other versions), for what i can see is preferably instead of a sandbox game, it follow every family member and have its own path for each (and yes you can easily talk about corruption here)
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For the dev.
I think you should open a new thread with this one and left the 0.5 and previous as abandoned for obvious reasons, idk what mods will say.
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The very first versions were a prototype, just trying to have a feel of what the game could be. I didn't liked it, and then I put the thing on hold mostly due monetary reasons. I saved money for a while so I could afford new art and took the ideas I liked and ditched the ones I didn't or couldn't handle (its too much money for multiple protagonists)
In the end I decided to make a game more in style of the Acerola games (that you can find either here or in Steam)
This versions is 100% new so old saves shouldn't even appear, not like you should use them even if you could
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The story changed a lot, the game is now about the MC corrupting people / her household, but yeah I understand some people may not like the set up
Cheers for understanding. When it comes to female MC games I like to play the voice in the women's head. Whether they are a young virgin or a young taken woman to a lady of the older variety married or not I like to make them make the wrong choices but I also like them to start out as honest woman who would never dream of cheating and turning them in to bad girls. I usually also allow them to be taken advantage of by people and to fall victim to blackmail if in the game. It is less fun for me if she has already been through it but more so because I played the game when she was the kind of character I described. Again good luck dev and whether it is a spin off to this or a version where we play as Terah or Ben or just a straight up.new game you do in future I will keep my eye put for you as while I may not like the new game I liked the old one so I know you are capable of making a game I like.