- Jun 12, 2020
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It's not a case of understanding the character or not, it's the repetition in what he keeps saying and his internal monologue that's getting a bit much.
Since Becca has started the whole flirt thing a few updates ago and even before then with his thoughts on Abs, every single internal monologue and thought process has been the same thing over and over and over and over again.
I like the characters and everything else but i've had to skip so much mundane "no I can't do that" and "she is crazy, that will never happen".
They can have him take many more updates for something to happen but the dialogue needs to switch up.
The MC either needs to start moving forward or shift focus to something else for a while like Abs and he biological dad. This whole internal struggle he's got needs to take a break for the sake of people reading, it won't be long until those that aren't bothered by it start getting bored of it.
I'm not wanting him to dive cock first into all the girls I just want the dialogue to switch up and focus on other things. We know he's struggling, we don't need to constantly read about it.
Any man would? Really? Do you really think all men have the same brain? The way each person thinks is different from the next. If you stopped thinking about HOW YOU WOULD react to such situation try to figure the character that the DEVELOPER CREATED!!! Not every man's brain works as you think. That's actually stereotyping all men. LOLI get it that the MC has a conscience but this inner monologue and him trying to suppress his urges/feelings is beyond annoying at this point, i feel like after all that he's been through, any man would just give in and go full caveman brain on the girls. Of course he knows it is wrong but he is feeling this way already, now he is just lying to himself to try not to act on his thoughts. Right now i'm just waiting for the moment he embraces his feelings and just go for it, it better be sooner rather than later haha.
I played every update so far, so yeah I'm pretty sure.Are you sure??
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I played v0.10. What's added in v0.10.1 compared to v0.10 ?
But you are forgetting how much of a Hypocrite Lilly is. Who is the actuall perv in the game the MC who is fighting it every step of the way even though Becca is shoving it down his throat or Lilly who has sex with her own sister for years?Lilith is the type of girl that needs to push and push and push just to see if you'll stay where you are. And MC has. He's not going anywhere. She gets that now and her walls are going to fall very quickly. "Dad isn't going anywhere so it's safe to love him." She sees his reluctance to go along with Becca's plans, and that makes him even safer. He's NOT a perv. He's just in love with her.
You didn't understand my comment at all.I understand your point, but it seems people expect major growth in his character. His internal struggle is a part of the story. He is slowly being "corrupted," slowly accepting what HE WANTS. His internal struggle has to do with HIS CHARACTER. So yeah it does have to do with understanding or not understanding the character. People (including me) want more growth from the character, but the developer wants it to be a slow process. Unless the devloper changes his/her mind then we just gotta accept the slow character development on his part
You really don't understand the issue people have.People really do not understand the characters.
No I do understand your point, BUT YOU ARGUMENT IS A COMPLAINT ON HIS CHARACTER. The repetitive nature of his thoughts is APART OF HIS CHARACTER.YES, it is annoying, BUT THAT HIS CHARACTER!!!You didn't understand my comment at all.
I'm not bothered about the slow build, they can wait 40 more updates before having sex I don't care.
It's not just me either, other people are bored of his repetitive internal monologues. THAT is all we are talking about. He repeats the same shit over and over and over and over for the past 5 or so updates it's getting boring to read.
The dev needs to switch up the dialogue, have an update or 2 focus on another part of the story because I can't stand another update of "this is so wrong", "I can't do that", "she must be insane, that would never happen" .... it's constant, it's repetitive and it's getting too much.
The slow build is fine but i'm bored of reading his internal dilemma because it doesn't change.
The dialogue and monologues can't keep covering the same ground update after update.
Have an update focus on Abigail's real dad, have a sisters outing, have the MC take Mei out for the day something, damn near anything to stop that mind numbing repetitive monologue for at least 1 update.
No, it's a complaint on the dialogue.No I do understand your point, BUT YOU ARGUMENT IS A COMPLAINT ON HIS CHARACTER. The repetitive nature of his thoughts is APART OF HIS CHARACTER.YES, it is annoying, BUT THAT HIS CHARACTER!!!
Can I get a mega download link, please?
There's one back a few pages.Can somebody make a MEGA, please?
(Ok probably not)
No its pointless to talk to you. "complaint on the dialogue" is a complaint on a characters thoughts. Which is a complaint on the character. Aparently you think his thought no matter have repetitive do not reflect him and HIS STRUGGLE. This is why i don't like talking to people about things. They get stuck on there on opinions and never understand what i am actually typing. I do even know how many times i have to type to and explain the same thing just a bit differently until people understand what I am actually typing and quit telling I don't get what hey are saying when I typed their complaint in my reply. Sorry rambling. just tired of the same old.No, it's a complaint on the dialogue.
I don't want his character to change I want a change in the dialogue.
I give up, pointless talking to you, you don't get it at all.
Really not getting it are you....No I do understand your point, BUT YOU ARGUMENT IS A COMPLAINT ON HIS CHARACTER. The repetitive nature of his thoughts is APART OF HIS CHARACTER.YES, it is annoying, BUT THAT HIS CHARACTER!!!
This.No, it's a complaint on the dialogue.
I don't want his character to change I want a change in the dialogue.
I give up, pointless talking to you, you don't get it at all.
STILL not getting it ARE YOU (sorry...I know you have a faulty caps lock button...just wanted to make you feel more at home).No its pointless to talk to you. "complaint on the dialogue" is a complaint on a characters thoughts. Which is a complaint on the character. Aparently you think his thought no matter have repetitive do not reflect him and HIS STRUGGLE. This is why i don't like talking to people about things. They get stuck on there on opinions and never understand what i am actually typing. I do even know how many times i have to type to and explain the same thing just a bit differently until people understand what I am actually typing and quit telling I don't get what hey are saying when I typed their complaint in my reply. Sorry rambling. just tired of the same old.
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Google Drive Full Version let me know if this link is working
Well, if a character that is meant to be sympathized with (and he obviously is - the whole story is about making you feel for this poor man) only annoys you and sounds cringy af each time he opens his mouth, it is a badly written character.No I do understand your point, BUT YOU ARGUMENT IS A COMPLAINT ON HIS CHARACTER. The repetitive nature of his thoughts is APART OF HIS CHARACTER.YES, it is annoying, BUT THAT HIS CHARACTER!!!
Its you who dont understand bro, you're so funny lol , Avaron1974 say is clear ,No its pointless to talk to you. "complaint on the dialogue" is a complaint on a characters thoughts. Which is a complaint on the character. Aparently you think his thought no matter have repetitive do not reflect him and HIS STRUGGLE. This is why i don't like talking to people about things. They get stuck on there on opinions and never understand what i am actually typing. I do even know how many times i have to type to and explain the same thing just a bit differently until people understand what I am actually typing and quit telling I don't get what hey are saying when I typed their complaint in my reply. Sorry rambling. just tired of the same old.