- Aug 22, 2018
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First he didn't want to lose his daughters, now his reasons just don't make any sense.You are expecting too much of this game and developer. He has a very specific story he is going to tell and nothing is going to change that. Frank will always be nervous and pathetic, why would you expect him to change after 12 updates? What would make you think that he is going to be any different at some point in the future? Supposedly Frank wants to do the right thing but if the player does the right thing it's a game over. Of course that's different from how the game began, in the beginning if you did the perverted thing then it was game over, regardless Frank hasn't changed at all - he's still a "helpless" man who can't say no to any of his "daughters" for fear that they will leave. He will fuck them all because he's so afraid they will leave even though it is "absolutely wrong" to sexually desire them. Except for the side fuck with Beth this is a rather linear story, it could have been done as a kinetic novel. It might have been better as a kinetic novel.
Now it's all "if they tell Shannon my life is over" because a grown man having relations with legal age women is somehow wrong in this world.
Yes they are his ex wife's daughters, no that isn't illegal in any country that I know of.
The worst thing she could possibly do is say really mean words to him so a typical day in Shannon land.
And therein lies my problem now. I was accepting of people saying they enjoyed him being flaky and showing restraint etc, etc, excuses blahhhh....
Except now he's throat fucked one of them, creampied another and sleeping naked with the last one...
It no longer makes any sense ... like at all.
It's weird, it's almost like the dev has no plans at all for the MC. All the girls have gone through some sort of growth, Lilith quite drastically so, but the MC hasn't changed since 0.1 and shows no sign of it.
I won't tell people what they can and can't enjoy but as far as the main character goes it's now entered terrible writing territory.
The other characters and the story itself has left him behind. He's now holding the game back.
I did the one thing I hate doing in story based VN's this update and I skipped nearly everything with Lil after her scenes. I couldn't take his whining anymore.
Obviously it has it's fans, some people enjoy it but it started ruining the story for me. It's hard to enjoy the good characters and what's going on when I can't stand any line the main character says.
This is the first time i've ever encountered an MC that just hasn't progressed since a launch. Even if it hadn't happened before, and honestly it should have started with all that's gone on with Becks, then this update should have been a massive kick start to it but he was straight back to being an annoying cunt.
I don't get how a game can have so many great characters but the main one, the one that should be holding the game up, is one of the worst written characters i've seen in a VN. It's like 2 different people are writing it, one for the MC and one for everyone else because they don't match up.