My God this Dev's destroyed a masterpiece!!!
He's rendered it completely and utterly unendurable. Love the girls, love the little bits of sex, love the girls' dialogue, their interplay and their empathy with each other else, love the down-to-earth rationale for engagingin in what they're engaging. Everything's brilliant, except for the goddamn mc.
I simply cannot stomach reading one more mewling, completely unnecessarily guilt-ridden line issuing from out of this asshole mc's mouth. If this idiot had an ounce of the maturity, integrity, dignity and down-to-earth honesty that these young girls possess I'd still be happily enjoying this delightful tale.
I sure as hell am not now going to...and I sure as hell was about to...join his Patreon.
What a Grade A tragedy.