VN Ren'Py Abandoned Sinners [v0.1-hotfix] [PigheadGames]

[ciderapple]

He said fck the foreplay basically.

foreplay is for pussies

 

[BassToq]

interesting

 

[NikoHello]

Not bad for early development. The dialogue feels a little inorganic (And it was brought up before, but the diner scene feels like a forced way to introduce the waitress). For the most part the cgs are acceptable (obligatory comment on the absolute WEAPON our boy is packing). I felt slightly put off to Ava being... too smiley. It makes me feel like she's being sneaky, which if that's what you're going for, then well done.

Edit: Forgot to mention this, but please please PLEASE change that song. If I have to hear the same song the whole time in the early builds, don't make it the Kickstarter Ukelele song! Anything but that!

Anyway, good start. Looking forward to seeing how it goes.

 

[DPcraft]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/chapter_1.rpy", line 1181, in script
    jump act_2cd_first_meeting
ScriptError: could not find label 'act_2cd_first_meeting'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/chapter_1.rpy", line 1181, in script
    jump act_2cd_first_meeting
  File "renpy/ast.py", line 1757, in execute
    rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
  File "renpy/script.py", line 918, in lookup
    raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'act_2cd_first_meeting'.

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.9.2142
Sinners 0.1-hotfix
Tue Nov  2 20:34:50 2021

 

[PigheadGames]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/chapter_1.rpy", line 1181, in script
    jump act_2cd_first_meeting
ScriptError: could not find label 'act_2cd_first_meeting'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/chapter_1.rpy", line 1181, in script
    jump act_2cd_first_meeting
  File "renpy/ast.py", line 1757, in execute
    rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
  File "renpy/script.py", line 918, in lookup
    raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'act_2cd_first_meeting'.

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.9.2142
Sinners 0.1-hotfix
Tue Nov  2 20:34:50 2021

Hmmm, I think I introduce a new bug in the new hotfix. I've uploaded the fixed version to Patreon and will update the links for other services tomorrow.

 

[Spfjolietjake]

Decent start. Look forward to seeing more. I like the different ways the LIs are brought in. The spanking scene was a nice start. Best of luck

 

[soccerstud516]

I take it this is probably Dead at this point. Sad. I liked the premise

 

[Jimskeleton]

Disappointing to see this as abandoned, the start was fairly promising.