Definitely agree with this. Even if you don't have everything worked out in detail, some sort of plan and idea of where you want to take the story is probably a good thing.
Thanks, and I can definitely appreciate the sentiment. If it counts for anything, I have a vague idea of how it will end, I just don't know how long it will take to get there. Maybe 3 "episodes", maybe 10. I guess a more accurate statement than me saying "Let's see where it goes" would be, "Let's see where this journey takes us". (Ooh! And that parallels the storyline...I'm so goddamn poetic!I think the comparisons to Melody are a little closer than Jaws to Finding Nemo, but I can see it's a different take on the older road dog musician mentors and hooks up with the aspiring young artist. Maybe a closer comparison would be Jaws to Shark Tale?
*Jonesy* I hope you figure out where the story is ending soon, otherwise the comparison could be more in line with Jaws to Jaws: The Revenge.
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Hey! Thanks so much for playing Siren Song. I'm glad you're liking it so far. I have to say, I really appreciate the feedback and FWIW, I totally get the gripe about the MC's thoughts, however, in the past I have had people either not get my humor, hints, puns, etc, so I put the thoughts in there as a way to make sure everyone knows what going on in the story (especially for people reading translated versions). I may have overcorrected - I have a way of doing that sometimes, so to anyone else reading this, let me know if I did! Again, thanks for the feedback, and please if you have anymore, I'd love to hear it!
If you mean the girl in the front, you kind of can, she is just the girl from the clothes shop in his other game but with different coloured hair.
Yep. That's Tara. She and her twin sister are both cuties. They'll be regular recurring characters, so you'll get to see plenty of them.
I'm actually working on chapter 2 right now. If you follow me on itch.io, I try to send out a progress report every Thursday.
