VN Ren'Py Sky Division [v0.15] [MariusAxe]

[nackedsnake]

It's sad some dev think they can just Add Muscle to Traps and suddenly they are not Traps anymore.
Traps are traps because all of the Feminised Expression / Interaction / Gesture / Posture, not just a femboy face.
Y Press is the prime example: No matter how much muscle it piles on, all of their males are oozed with feminine.

I get the dev is not good at art and is using AI.
Here's a simple question: Is this a game about Traps?
If so then I wish you good luck, but maybe try to use something more aligned with the contents.
If You try to appeal to those attractive to Trap and those attractive to Bara, You'll end Up appeal to no one.

 

[Lucky_I]

Not crazy about the change, very much not a fan of ai and the old art style had a lot of charm. But it atleast looks better than most of the other ai games(like WAY better imo) and the story was solid last I read, so benefit of the doubt, I'll wait and see what the dev keeps cooking

 

[Black_Phoenix]

If you creat a vote ,Compare the old art and the AI CG ,I think more than 70~80% players may like the old version.

 

[Taerith]

There is a lack of a combination of feminine and masculine traits on male characters both in games and art, it's something that's rare to come by but I treasure every good piece I find. So when it comes to appeal there is an audience for it definetly, how big is it? No idea but that should never be a deciding factor if you're not making a product meant to generate revenue

So the only real complaint that really matters here is use of AI, and yeah not a fan

 

[Little.J]

Thank you for your feedback. I'm sorry that you didn't like the change. I hope you find what you're looking for in other games. Thank you very much for sticking with me up to this point.

I still like the story tho, keep it up I feel like I read a good BL novel

 

[camper674]

As I read all the stuff here, I realize that's why there were inconsistencies in his outfit, well, no matter. Here's my few cents:

-when I first meet the cat, he has a standard human pistol, later I get his N7 mass effect looking gun.
- he calls himself a human once
- the gun always misses (Renpy random was not good on me, but i still wanted to complain)
- when we get to the water for the second time together, he stands guard with a rifle of all the things that he pulled out of his randomly big ass
Don't get me wrong, I like the story, the art, the premise, but shit like this makes me stop in the track and re-read it, to see if he really somehow managed to combine spear and pistol into a rifle. I wouldn't give this much weight, if he didn't mention me having his rifle in the cave again.

-small inconsistencies can be ignored like going to sleep while saying "Me neither...zzz" to absolutely no question asked.
- the "at the beginning they thought it was a controlled pandemic" only to repeat the same sentence four slides later.
- the funny inconsistency of having a large catboy laying wounded in the cave, so when I set up the fireplace, I set it right under him (first few days, once he started opening his eyes, he opted not to lay in fire anymore apparently)
- I got the shits from the meat again... only to realize that the shits were never mentioned before and apparently from the later conversation, i was supposed to get them from fruits, which i never picked (cause I manipulated the random chance to always hit the hunted animal... What? I got frustrated to no end with fallo every fucking day)
- some stylistical mistakes with "could" where "would" would be better.
- Cak is sometimes Kak... or maybe its the other way around?
- the funny part about the blowjob where I force my cock in his mouth only to go "Not so rough Dax!" is peak comedy

i forgot where i was going with this list.
Eh, who cares, good game, I'll edit the list with more fun stuff as I find it, and properly mark them.

edit:
- The cat was so worried about my headache that he stood in the fire again, but he gotta be pretty resistant, because during our talk, he was sitting approximately 5 centimeters away from the fire anyway. To make this funnier, when I have the dream about being late and scolded, Dax wakes me up, but before he speaks he scoots his sitting ass right through the fire.
- Did he break his foot so hard that he started having a portrait?
- also, that dick is on fire

edit 2: there is an instance where you left "her-HIS" in the text

 

[SimonTheGothicWolf]

Why use AI when you actually have drawing skills lmao. Like, it's ok if you're not good at art at all, but they clearly can draw pretty well

 

[Little.J]

I'm sorry to hear that, but I'm not good at drawing (I've said it from the beginning). Thank you for sticking with me through the previous updates, and I hope you find what you're looking for in games from other developers. Thank you very much.

but ur Art is cute tho xd

 

[diz4884]

Any chance someone can link me the version before the art change.

 

[Zulfiqar]

If he's going to be that muscular why not give him a giant dick, like honestly bottoming for a femboy with a powerful yet feminine physique and a dick twice your size is a story that's totally unexplored (It will stay unexplored because the idea is too gay for anyone but me, I'm the gayest ever and it's not even close )

Memes aside I would recommend polling the audience here if you're second guessing the art change, there's a vocal minority that despise AI art and see it as an existential threat to human expression or something and they literally cannot stop talking so sitting here in the trenches with them will earn you nothing but a need to see a therapist.

 

[kodey and 302 others]

Enjoyed the game more with the old art but the story is solid. Just an advice, if you plan to make this a gay game your new AI art is kinda okay, but for people like me who like trap a little but not full gay, your AI art is too masculine to pass as a femboy. I would recommend you input some feminine inputs on the AI if that's the way you plan to go. Could'nt finish with the new art because i don't see a trap anymore, just a dude. Anyway that's just my opinion, will check again in the future and give it a try

 

[ᴏᴄᴛᴏ]

Is this AI-generated?

 

[Puralto]

I did not mind the old art, but it was evident that the dev struggled to create erotic art, The switch to AI is reasonable, but I would like a little bit more consistency, for example the hip size ranges from thick (in preview 2,4) to pro bodybuilder in previews 8,12,13.

 

[HG]

The new ai art style is fine and totally serviceable especially put against all the other ai stuff out there.

What irks me is the fact that a young fledgling artist got so discouraged by this new technology that instead of trying to hone his skill he resorted to generated visual stuff via AI. I feel like this is going to happen more often in the future. Think about it. You have a passion for drawing and then some dumb ass just prompt a couple of words I to the machine and produces something far better than you at your current level.

Sad development. I cry a single tear for the unknown artist of tomorrow.

 

[Puralto]

The new ai art style is fine and totally serviceable especially put against all the other ai stuff out there.

What irks me is the fact that a young fledgling artist got so discouraged by this new technology that instead of trying to hone his skill he resorted to generated visual stuff via AI. I feel like this is going to happen more often in the future. Think about it. You have a passion for drawing and then some dumb ass just prompt a couple of words I to the machine and produces something far better than you at your current level.

Sad development. I cry a single tear for the unknown artist of tomorrow.

The dev was not just an artist though, and being a solo dev requires knowledge in a lot of vastly different sectors, it is very hard for a person to master a single field let alone a dozen of them.

I understand your point, but tools like AI can allow small devs to create games that they otherwise would never be able to do. So its a net positive in my book.

 

[bat2897]

NOOOOOOOOOOO! Dax was so much cuter back then. The relationship development with the simple art made this game have such charm but this new art is just nowhere near as cute and impactful...

Also due to my abilities of being able to see the future I'll add the dev's future comment in advance

" Thank you for your feedback. I'm sorry that you didn't like the change. I hope you find what you're looking for in other games. Thank you very much for sticking with me up to this point. "

 

[Hogetara]

Bring back the old one

 

[arkasic]

ruined.

 

[LeperDrag]

So I guessed I'll be the contrarian and say that who cares if the dev decided to use AI for his OWN game? Like yeah he can draw, but I will say he definently needs improvement when it comes to character design especially around the chest area. A problem i had was that I couldn't distinguish between a normal chest and just plain boobs. Like it was really hard to the point I just thought the cat guy( forgot his name) was just a shemale. I will say to the dev to try and ignore the AI hate, but to use AI to improve your art skills and not to rely to heavily on it

 

[Karasiel]

A game where the trap can be on top ? I see you do in the extremly rare.

Can someone send the old version before AI ? Kinda curious on how it looked like.