name88 - King of Hearts

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Renders are of decent quality,model is OK,scenes are posed properly - visuals are OK
The writting is too vulgar,it`s like...Brazzers trying to be serious,I would suggest watching couple of erotic movies rather than porn,it might improve your overall writting.
Including 2 paths is a nice touch.
 

Sventra

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Renders are of decent quality,model is OK,scenes are posed properly - visuals are OK
The writting is too vulgar,it`s like...Brazzers trying to be serious,I would suggest watching couple of erotic movies rather than porn,it might improve your overall writting.
Including 2 paths is a nice touch.
Thanks, it means a lot to me!
About the writing, I wasn't really trying to go with a serious tone and wanted the game to have some laughing material, but I get that many of the banters aren't going to get picked up by someone who never played league of legends, watched a trick2g stream or one recent youtube drama, I'll try to improve on that too, which was exactly the point of this demo. Thanks again!
 

Avaron1974

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v0.0.0 wtf why can't devs number it 0.0.1 how hard is it to number it!!??
I can count on one hand how many devs give the slightest of shits about version numbers.

Considering none of them are actual devs just folks attempting to make a game you're lucky they number them at all.

I can also count on one hand how many people give a shit about the version numbers the devs give.
 

SevereSlimeShaker

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I can count on one hand how many devs give the slightest of shits about version numbers.
Which is a shame, because in my eyes, that makes them look incompetent. Using is kind of a must-have with many of these games in respect to save bug or save breaking issues that might occur. It will give me an idea if I should update my local copy or not, especially if some devs don't even add change-logs.
 

brittC25

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Any reason she has a dogs paw on her bikini bottoms back?, is that a sly homage to bestiality? if I`m wrong I`m wrong and good to be wrong, but I had to ask as curiosity killed the cat and all that lol
 

Sventra

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I can count on one hand how many devs give the slightest of shits about version numbers.

Considering none of them are actual devs just folks attempting to make a game you're lucky they number them at all.

I can also count on one hand how many people give a shit about the version numbers the devs give.
To be honest with you, I am actually a small dev of some shitty app you can find on the playstore if you look hard enough, but still, I didn't want to fool anyone with some game that lasts 10 minutes at most if you are a slow reader, that's why I versioned it 0.0.0, firstly because I didn't like how Demo sounded as I think it's still more than that, but not enough to be called a first and official version where I would have called it 0.1 (given 1.0 shall be the final one).
Second thing I though is that in most languages (Java and C are the ones I know and use) arrays starts at 0, so I wanted it to be like an array of versions 0.x.x until we reach 1.0.0, I know it sounds stupid but that's what I wanted to do with it, so I'd prefer if people would give feeback on how the game is instead of what's the version number, as stupid as it is
Which is a shame, because in my eyes, that makes them look incompetent. Using is kind of a must-have with many of these games in respect to save bug or save breaking issues that might occur. It will give me an idea if I should update my local copy or not, especially if some devs don't even add change-logs.
I understand your concern but you can rest assured that my change-logs will be redacted as best as my memory goes, so even if I change one bit of code, I'll write it down as I think everyone should be aware of what has changed and the usual "Bug-fixes and improvements" bothers me too
 
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Avaron1974

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that makes them look incompetent.
Of course they are incompetent, they aren't devs.

Most of them are doing this as a bit of fun in whatever spare time they have.

I mean, i'm learning to make games. When it comes time for me to launch one I know fuck all about version numbers nor do I care. They will get whatever I feel like at the time. If i'm drunk they might be called wibbleflobble1 and so on.

I'm not a dev, i'm a chef. I'm doing it for a giggle.

Same goes for most devs here. They have full time jobs, families and whatever else going on in their lives, numbering updates for something they are doing as a part time hobby is probably wayyyyyyyyy down on their list of priorities.
 

Aces_high69

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Of course they are incompetent, they aren't devs.

Most of them are doing this as a bit of fun in whatever spare time they have.

I mean, i'm learning to make games. When it comes time for me to launch one I know fuck all about version numbers nor do I care. They will get whatever I feel like at the time. If i'm drunk they might be called wibbleflobble1 and so on.

I'm not a dev, i'm a chef. I'm doing it for a giggle.

Same goes for most devs here. They have full time jobs, families and whatever else going on in their lives, numbering updates for something they are doing as a part time hobby is probably wayyyyyyyyy down on their list of priorities.
Well i can't wait to play wibbleflobble1 :p
 

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I wish the dev would just have waited one more month to release a game with some actual story.

This just leaves a bad taste in my mouth. Very little content, like the render quality but I don't find the girl's face or hair very appealing (the latter one isn't ugly or anything, but just so over-used by now). What I really didn't like was the way the dialogues and thoughts were written. It's just so over the top with the swearing and "G talk" that it kinda got old quickly.

I honestly don't get why people release "tech demos" or "concepts" when there's only 2 minutes of playable content. If you want us to care about the game, you gotta make a good first impression. There are 0.1 games out there that already have 30 minutes of good content, with their devs getting some deserved cash.
 

Sventra

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I wish the dev would just have waited one more month to release a game with some actual story.

This just leaves a bad taste in my mouth. Very little content, like the render quality but I don't find the girl's face or hair very appealing (the latter one isn't ugly or anything, but just so over-used by now). What I really didn't like was the way the dialogues and thoughts were written. It's just so over the top with the swearing and "G talk" that it kinda got old quickly.

I honestly don't get why people release "tech demos" or "concepts" when there's only 2 minutes of playable content. If you want us to care about the game, you gotta make a good first impression. There are 0.1 games out there that already have 30 minutes of good content, with their devs getting some deserved cash.
Good points, but the bro-talk and swearing is all part of the story I didn't put in this version (btw the "apologize" dialogue is part of those citations from stuff that happened in youtube drama and I wanted to put it in here just to make it feel more real.

I released it with that "few" content (it still has 2 routes which will be really important later on) because I wanted to see if I was heading in the right direction with it. I still want to make the game that I want to make, but my only judgment isn't the right one, so I wanted to share this little demo with the whole forum and see where I could improve and what I was doing right

Rest assured that each of the new versions won't be this short and will have a good amount of content in it

Edit: also, I didn't want to release it to cashgrab, the patreon it's there just for the sake of supporting what I will do anyway, even at 0$/month, it's what I'd like to make, also, I did this in 14 days~, one month will be enough for me to produce enough content for the new update to call it 0.1 for real
 
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batman666

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Sventra Hope my input helped a bit, even though I of course only speak for myself. I'll check out the next release, looking forward to more story!
 
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