VN Ren'Py Abandoned Sliced [v0.2.0-Part2] [Sventra]

[exxxe]

Thanks for the awesome feedback! Yeah I admit that forcing myself into the game most of the times isn't that nice to see, but I'm still gathering feedback on the whole thing trying to see where it works and where it doesn't. I'll improve for sure on that! Thanks again!

Nope thank you

and you are wrong it was not forceful because it was funny and somewhat fluid within ( can't explain it really just know it was really good )

i only mean that when the plot is critical or important keep the focus on the moment / the scene like for example the Sylvia scene where she prepares to and explains the incident to the MC in the room

that is literally the backbone of the game premise so the focus should have been exclusive to it so balance between these

however keep popping out after all now you are a part of the game

 

[Okamikari]

....
OK, it is hard to write this, as i am still rolling on the floor laughing, but that was GREAT.
I love the sense of humor( a scream of horror, because MC wastes water.... ) and the girls; 2B( she should have kept on the boots and stockings in the shower ) and one of my favourite WC characters( damn, i got no hj from Sylva...i mean Sylvia ).
Keep up your good work; i am looking forward, what happens next!

 

[slapsy]

Breaking the 4th wall, out of place trash talk - all things that usually mess up a game. But for whatever reason it works well for this one. The renders are nice, the story has potential, there seems to be replay value - I am really looking forward to see how this develops!

 

[dce8383]

4th wall? Ha! More like a 4th Japanese paper changing screen.

 

[rKnight]

Buddy! you're plenty of ideas... I'd never have thought about GLORY HOLE panties.

 

[Canto Forte]

What part of S.L.I.C.E.D did you not get, exactly???

The missing panties?
The bare bosom?
The base back?
The bare belly?
The going commando?
The bikes gang chains?
The biker chick outfit?
The clear markings of a mountain lion marking his dame / harem ???

 

[derede]

This was strange but not a bad way, love the strange humor too. I am more of an OC person but another good thing is putting parody of popular video game characters in the game, it gives taste of different fantasy style.
Good luck with next updates.

 

[Scorpead]

something wrong with the game? i'm stuck on a damm loop or something? after the shower, cum then video and it start with the shower again after 3times and different chooses sill nothing or is that the goke? and no more content?

 

[MajorDespair]

something wrong with the game? i'm stuck on a damm loop or something? after the shower, cum then video and it start with the shower again after times and different chooses sill nothing or is that the goke? and no more content?

same issue, stuck in loop.. is the shower all content that was added? or wha? if content does end there then at least put a eoc at end..

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

"please don't sue me" gets sued to death.

 

[Drendari]

Interesting concept. I feel the dialogue is tying to hard to be funny tho, which just makes it painfull.

 

[Sventra]

something wrong with the game? i'm stuck on a damm loop or something? after the shower, cum then video and it start with the shower again after 3times and different chooses sill nothing or is that the goke? and no more content?

Just fixed it, yeah I couldn't understand what was the issue but then noticed instead of "variable = 1", I did "variable == 1"... Ops
Should be fixed now, apply the patch and you're good to go, although there is no other content after that video

 

[Mormont]

I'm assuming the bug was Sliced and Diced but that's a lot better now no more loop the loop

 

[Sventra]

I'm assuming the bug was Sliced and Diced but that's a lot better now no more loop the loop

Yup, had to cut it in half!

 

[Okamikari]

I thought the loop was intentional.

 

[Sventra]

I thought the loop was intentional.

No it wasn't! At first I thought people were talking about the Yeet and Run route but I was SOOO WRONG!
Seems like I need to test the end screen too in the next update

 

[7Alex7]

fucking love the humor man. funniest dialogue i've seen in a while. keeping my eye on this joint

 

[loikl]

Bethesda lawyers like this...

Good game, I wait for more content

 

[tails]

" wake the fuck up, samurai.." bit killed me xD

 

[z3212]

This was hilarious

I pledged btw