VN Ren'Py Abandoned Sliced [v0.2.0-Part2] [Sventra]

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Mister_M

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Well, I don't want to criticise the game, but I found the new update to be not that great. While I appreciate your sense of humour I'd have to agree with previous comments that it was overdone.

As far as the sex scene is concerned is... well... underwhelming to me. But I became interested in the game mainly because of the femdom content, so that's maybe just me.

That being said, I'm still interested and looking forward to the next update. Hopefully it'll find a great balance between jokes, sex and story progression. I certainly hope so (and for the promised feet content ;) )
 
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The scene from the accident ... what was worth watching:
Sventra said:
Unfortunately I was going for the more cinematic approach, not having too many dialogues with the same screen showing and things escalated quickly. I had to cut off a lot of stuff for this version and I wasted a lot of time playing games and other stuff. I'll try to do better in the next updates (although I'm still not sure on if I should have more story or more lewds inside one single release)
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Dev said: "I had to cut off a lot of stuff for this version and I wasted a lot of time":unsure:

o_O you call this time wasted:eek:!?!:
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Put those scenes back in the game! Stat!
 
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assman1337 said:
What games do you like ?
More story for sure and a bit of lewds
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Lately I've been playing a lot of Rainbow Six

LGM said:
Well... It looks nice?
That's the only good thing I can say about it, though. The occasional subtle fourth wall break is fine, but demolishing the thing every few minutes is just... ugh.
That's twenty minutes I won't get back...
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I'll make it up with better updates in the future!

Mister_M said:
Well, I don't want to criticise the game, but I found the new update to be not that great. While I appreciate your sense of humour I'd have to agree with previous comments that it was overdone.

As far as the sex scene is concerned is... well... underwhelming to me. But I became interested mainly because of the femdom content, so that's maybe just me.

That being said, I'm still interested and looking forward to the next update. Hopefully it'll find a great balance between jokes, sex and story progression. I certainly hope so (and for the promised feet content ;) )
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Please do criticize the game! I need it because I'm still unsure on how to move forward given it's the first game I make.
I need to decide on what content to put as I don't want it to be a feet-fest (nah that's a lie. I want it to be a feet-fest but I also want to have other stuff in it :ROFLMAO:)
 
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Canto Forte said:
The scene from the accident ... what was worth watching:


Dev said: "I had to cut off a lot of stuff for this version and I wasted a lot of time":unsure:

o_O you call this time wasted:eek:!?!:
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Put those scenes back in the game! Stat!
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Sorry but I don't think I've understood your message :oops:
What I meant by time wasted was me playing games instead of rendering stuff
 
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Since the ''Not delaying the update leaving the incident scene to the imagination" won

Leaving the accident to the imagination ... not cool cutting those two scenes of before and after the imagination;)
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Hey everyone, I made a poll on my patreon and I'd like your opinions on it, basically I'd like to know if I should render the incident scene or not, it's pretty complex so it will take a lot of my time and will probably end up delaying the update, what do you guys think of it? You can
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Her are the scenes ... so we can all envoy some ... gaming imagination;)

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Happy Imagine Gaming!
 
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Sventra said:
I don't want it to be a feet-fest
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Sure thing, I wouldn't like it too (but I could live with it just fine ;) ) as I am curious how this whole sub/dom reliationships will progress, so there is a lot of room for a lot of kinks, to which I am looking forward. It could be really interesting mix of fantasy, BDSM and your sense of humour. For now the biggest problem I believe is the huge amount of jokes in comparison to the rest of the content.
 
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Renders are of consistent quality,that`s good (y)
It`s a rather small update,keep in mind there`s tons of games of this type out there,if you want to gain patreons,you have to treat this seriously and stand out.

I`m still not a fan of the writting,the characters still don`t sound like real people.It`s fine to put a parody of Sylvanas in your game but she sounds like a teenage,modern boy,usage of old english would be a much better fit.(watch some game of thrones)
Calling MC an sjw is ok but he has to act like an sjw first,in this situation the word "cunt" would be a better choice.

Easter eggs - are generally ok but everytime you use an easter egg you are breaking the immersion,in other words you are taking me out of the world you are building.There`s too many of them,they are too frequent,even for a parody.

My 2 cents,hope it`s not too harsh.
 
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name88 said:
Renders are of consistent quality,that`s good (y)
It`s a rather small update,keep in mind there`s tons of games of this type out there,if you want to gain patreons,you have to treat this seriously and stand out.

I`m still not a fan of the writting,the characters still don`t sound like real people.It`s fine to put a parody of Sylvanas in your game but she sounds like a teenage,modern boy,usage of old english would be a much better fit.(watch some game of thrones)
Calling MC an sjw is ok but he has to act like an sjw first,in this situation the word "cunt" would be a better choice.

Easter eggs - are generally ok but everytime you use an easter egg you are breaking the immersion,in other words you are taking me out of the world you are building.There`s too many of them,they are too frequent,even for a parody.

My 2 cents,hope it`s not too harsh.
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Hi and thanks for comment. I don't aim in having a lot of patreons or such, I do this as of a hobby and you can see by the patreon tiers and rewards that I don't want to make a game just for the sake of getting dollars, I'm just making the best product I can with my skills and if it sells it's better for everyone

Yeah the writing is not my best skill and it shows, I need to improve on that but I don't want it to be using old English as I though of having them 2 (Vanessa and Sylvia) raised in the same environment as of MC, so kids talk, social media and such, hence the bro talk, swears and so on.
The Sylvanas parody is just there to accentuate how her father had a role for her in his scheme I will later explain, whilst Vanessa is (for now) just a regular nympho aimed at servicing her father in everything. It's just a spaghetti explanation but in story focused updates I will explain everything in detail (or at least, I'll try)
Yeah the sjw thing was a stretch

About the easter eggs, I shouldn't have said I added those because they are easter eggs and they are not what you think, it's not the Press F to pay respect, Alexa or anything else. I don't want to say what they are because they are easter eggs and should be found casually while playing the game searching for details

Don't worry about being harsh, I like reading every comment even if they are harsh because I care about the information, not how it's given (except if the comment is only: It's shit)
 
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Sventra said:
Lately I've been playing a lot of Rainbow Six


I'll make it up with better updates in the future!


Please do criticize the game! I need it because I'm still unsure on how to move forward given it's the first game I make.
I need to decide on what content to put as I don't want it to be a feet-fest (nah that's a lie. I want it to be a feet-fest but I also want to have other stuff in it :ROFLMAO:)
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Please do make it a feet-fest :love:
 
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Hahahahahahahahahaha I'd like to do that too, but that won't be a game everyone could enjoy but feet lovers. Instead I want to make it feet focused but also have something for those that don't like them as much
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Yeaaaaah... Not that you care but feet are a no-no for me. They just stink you know. And they have nails. Ew
 
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