If you are talking about the image of Miryam that arranges the hair present in the OP , it's one of the animation and images present in the introduction video (the start).
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Sorry I can't understand what you mean?Whats wrong with the girl face in picture 3 on the main page?
I know it's frustrating, but it the firs half part of the re-edition..., finishing this re-edition with the next update, all will be more fast and complete.
For better understand, if you want, you can read this post ,
and some open posts in my Patreon page to understand better all the background facts.
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I really appreciate your comment, overall about art, I'm doing hard research and study for it... to better improve more and more.That's some nice art, I wish I could draw like this... damn.
For the story, it looks interesting. I'm curious where this will go. Keep it up.
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The Artwork is quite nice actually and the story intro is intriguing for whats about to come.
I like where this is going, but:
That being said, I wish you best with this project, I will be checking it out. (In about a half a year or so, when there is something to check )
I like where this is going, but:
- Well, there is nothing to play so far.
- The intro is interesting for sure, but:
- It is way too long for my taste. It must have taken some chunk of dev time that could been used somewhero elso.
- The pinkhaired character got superimposed her rectum ring from one scene to her face in another scene. Not sure if this bug is specific for me, but it sure was funny at least
- "Ch1 v01.0" - I sure dont unserstand that versioning system. If you are going for interactive, as it seems you are, it wont be really about Chapters. As in Visual Novels you do not have usually that freedom of movement like your game has. At least it seems it will. VN is just sceen, sceen, sceen, Yes/No -> Sceen, sceen. v01.0 i could translate to v1.0 so that is "done" ?
That being said, I wish you best with this project, I will be checking it out. (In about a half a year or so, when there is something to check
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Really, really glad.... thanksThat intro alone was worth it
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all your criticisms are correct; the biggest mistake was this ... the basis of the project has not changed and not even the history and future developments, all the difficulties and delays have been my fault and my search for the artistic style I wanted to create .... here the reason for the "re-editing" and the confusion over the number of versions ... (chapter 1 refers to everything that needs to happen in this chapter, the game is divided into four main chapters); if you feel like it, at the bottom of my Patreon page, there is a brief time-line of chapter 1, it checks how many things still need to be done.The Artwork is quite nice actually and the story intro is intriguing for whats about to come.
I like where this is going, but:
Anyhow I wish you would have waited way more before releasing this. As I could describe it only as "Intro" or more precisely as a "teaser." You can only get 1 first impression out.
- Well, there is nothing to play so far.
- The intro is interesting for sure, but:
- It is way too long for my taste. It must have taken some chunk of dev time that could been used somewhero elso.
- The pinkhaired character got superimposed her rectum ring from one scene to her face in another scene. Not sure if this bug is specific for me, but it sure was funny at least
- "Ch1 v01.0" - I sure dont unserstand that versioning system. If you are going for interactive, as it seems you are, it wont be really about Chapters. As in Visual Novels you do not have usually that freedom of movement like your game has. At least it seems it will. VN is just sceen, sceen, sceen, Yes/No -> Sceen, sceen. v01.0 i could translate to v1.0 so that is "done" ?
That being said, I wish you best with this project, I will be checking it out. (In about a half a year or so, when there is something to check
however, we are only at the beginning, all the interactions, chosen routes, etc ... are a little further on with story. The arrival of two volunteer collaborators in the last few months, however, has made an enormous contribution both in terms of quality and in terms of time, so forgive me if I say so, but I really hope I won't have to wait you a year for some contents. ..
Thanks for your comments.
She is holding a hair scrunch in the corner of her mouth while she gathers her hair to tie it into a pony tail.Whats wrong with the girl face in picture 3 on the main page?
Downloaded from here, and from Patreon open page, and everything is under construction, no one in the kitchen nothing that can be done, maybe the version or maybe I'm doing something wrong...
have you seen the end page message? if yes it's all for this re-edition; if you have not seen that page, you have missed one step (probably the bath).
Wake up, go to pee, smell of breakfast, and thats it, kitchen empty and clicking everywhere clickable on everyroom either enter/leave or is under construction...
Maybe that phantom breakfast is part of the masterplan of some ghost race that plans to end the humanity giving them the sensation of fresh made breakfast and then letting them down and die in depression for not being able to get it?
Hey guys, how about we give the dev some time to orientate the audience with the game ?
he's doing this for the first time, doesn't he deserve a bit of a leeway ?
i know there ain't much content, but lets give him a chance instead of criticizing him without reprieve.
deltadidirac keep up the good work, i advise you to take out monthly content updates on this promising game.
i would advise some sexy tease and some lewd content in the next few updates to keep things going !
he's doing this for the first time, doesn't he deserve a bit of a leeway ?
i know there ain't much content, but lets give him a chance instead of criticizing him without reprieve.
deltadidirac keep up the good work, i advise you to take out monthly content updates on this promising game.
i would advise some sexy tease and some lewd content in the next few updates to keep things going !
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I don't know what the Dev has in mind with his story but we know almost nothing about the Mom and Sisters, how they interact with the MC.
Oh, one thing would be nice, that you can name the MC yourself. I myself find MC's name weird. ^^
One thing I know for sure, drawing those scenes will be one hell of work, I think.
Oh, one thing would be nice, that you can name the MC yourself. I myself find MC's name weird. ^^
One thing I know for sure, drawing those scenes will be one hell of work, I think.
Really a hell no... ,
it was my choose to use this art-style, more long than other drawing technic yes...., much more because one scene is, for the 85% of times, a single draw
Why I decided to use this "suicide" style?....
First of all, to create adifferent 2D erotic adult game and because I like much more the draw respect the 3d render (personal taste), second because this technic allow me to be free to choice different prospective, lights, close up, and so on, so to following better the dialogues and the story behind; in short, I'm building a game that have all the freedom of a 3D game about the characters and backgrounds prospective, but doing all it with the drawings...
If the game will obtain his little audiance, in future I have just in mind to search at least one or two more artists; but this is too early for now.
About the freedom to choose the MC name, pbrobably I will do, before I can not do it for several reasons, but now with "Shie", the new programmer that start to work with me in this last month, this option will be possible.
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