VN Ren'Py Abandoned Slip Over Time [v0.10] [Deltadidirac]

[Deleted member 15555]

have you seen the end page message? if yes it's all for this re-edition; if you have not seen that page, you have missed one step (probably the bath).

you need to remove all "under construction" because is annoying as fuck, you need to add a way for us to know what to do and where to go to see events etc otherwise this game is frustrating and unplayable, even more if the player dont like free roam much.

 

[HorizonD]

The art style is defiantly unique and good too.

 

[Dag Robertson]

The art style is defiantly unique and good too.

I'm happy and glad you liked it
really thanks

 

[Dag Robertson]

you need to remove all "under construction" because is annoying as fuck, you need to add a way for us to know what to do and where to go to see events etc otherwise this game is frustrating and unplayable, even more if the player dont like free roam much.

All this is correct , but I several wrote in some others posts that to do all this it need time and next updates, anyway all your suggest are just prepared , programmed and in code writing... (I have only now a programmer tha can do this, and our free collaboration start only this last month)

 

[HorizonD]

If game has no incest then game is bullshit. I only play incest and blackmail games.

So far there is only the introduction but I guess there will be some interaction with MC's stepfamily in the future. ^^

 

[ron teague]

i think more wast of time is closer

 

[darkwolf0x]

Someone is ending up their own grandpa by the end of this I bet lol

 

[ILCjr]

Might come back at a later version. I like the concept.

 

[PeggyBlackett]

Sorry I can't understand what you mean?

It looks like there are maggots eating her cheek.

EDIT to add:

This is what we're talking about

 

[PeggyBlackett]

seeing form this point of view.... you could have reason.... wrong color and low definition of the lineart, but it's a good observation, I can work on it....

thanks

What's it supposed to be?

 

[Dag Robertson]

What's it supposed to be?

an hair clips rubber band

 

[Farnuge]

an hair clips rubber band

looks like a hair scrunchy she is holding in her mouth. gonna put her hair in pony tail

 

[abcd65926]

Main character looks like a serial killer

 

[vultron]

Not really a bad thing but that intro was kinda trippy. lol

 

[Dag Robertson]

Not really a bad thing but that intro was kinda trippy. lol

Hi
I wanted this; I have create something different , new, and that might give a visual impact and a particular atmosphere.
The game may like it or not, but I wanted give immediately to the player the sensation that this project will be different; I hope I succeeded.

see you

 

[Dag Robertson]

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[jczs97]

After the jerk in the bathroom, he smells the rbeakfast but cant progress at all? What should i do?

 

[Dag Robertson]

After the jerk in the bathroom, he smells the rbeakfast but cant progress at all? What should i do?

Hi,
It's all for this update, (I know that is a short intro of the game, but I wanted exit with the new art-style and choreography to feel the public reactions...)
Anyway soon will be another update (I think not much more 1 month).

see you

 

[HorizonD]

Holy shit. You are a great artist. Can't wait to see it in game.

 

[Dag Robertson]

Holy shit. You are a great artist. Can't wait to see it in game.

I'm really happy to read this, but , belive me, there are more than one much better and talentuos artists than me....

Anyway thanks