VN Ren'Py Abandoned Small Problem [v0.1] [SPHstudio]

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Overview:
MC is a normal guy that has a small problem, during the course of the game you will try to help him to not get NTR ~Patreon​

Thread Updated: 2019-07-03
Release Date: 2019-07-03
Developer: SPHstudio

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Version: v0.1
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[ThorMcBalbo]

" help the MC to not get NTR " yeah.. not gonna happen

 

[Angmir]

Another NTR one.

I feel there is a surge of low quality NTR games lately. Cant tell yet if this one gona be bad or good.
A good tag is one thing a quality game another. You need to put in a lot of work to make a good quality game. Writing and Imagination are 2 most important things in NTR games !


I doubt there is anything worth playing in the game yet ?

Still I might take a look.

 

[PoyntFury]

HoneySelect models.

*YAWN*

Pass.

 

[FastBullet]

Please be good ntr, please be good ntr!

 

[Miðgarðsormr]

I wait half a year till we get some decent content. Also If the goal is to not get NTR it means its optional so YAY ^^

 

[Angmir]

DL

Quick look at the banner. Only about Half of models look nice.
Scale from 1 to 10
Left to Right

4/10 ; 8/10 ; 3/10 ; MC ; 6/10 ; 7/10 ; 5/10

 

[the donut hole]

" help the MC to not get NTR " yeah.. not gonna happen

LMAO

 

[Angmir]

After quick look through CGs.

Models are ok after all. Decent quality there.
But there seems to be just 1 scene with another male having any action with the girls so far.

Still I say looks far better quality wise than I initialy expected.
Question is can Author keep making this at decent pace, and if the writing/story progression will be any good...

I will play through it for a try later on.

 

[The Krypt Angel]

even with a description like that you just know some idiots gonna come here asking if the NTR is avoidable sooner or later

 

[Loqic]

I'll just add this on top of mediocre pile with the rest... ehh, let me grab a ladder real quick.

Anyway, discussion about NTR in 3, 2, 1...

 

[crescentlegion]

Welp the MC got small cock on top he got pre mature ejaculation. No way he is not gonna get ntr'd. Hopefully this game include some gangbang.

 

[zero217]

everything is the same "corruption"

 

[Angmir]

Welp the MC got small cock on top he got pre mature ejaculation. No way he is not gonna get ntr'd. Hopefully this game include some gangbang.

Now I wish it realy had non-ntr route ;] Want to see all NTR-haters play a "alpha route" with this "stud" as MC ;p

 

[Samken]

Another Game with Honey Select models, Played a little bit.

Basically, MC (Default name is Jeef) has a small prick, not only that he's a premature ejaculator. At the moment his main Rival is a black guy called Jamal, who already bangs the Physics Ed Teacher of the school he studies in. From there on you can already guess where this is going.

 

[Theboss3213]

Meh...another low quality generic western NTR. If you're an NTR fan i'd say try it out...but for me this game ain't worthy of being in my NTR library.

 

[HorizonD]

Uh... I feel almost sorry for the MC.
How can he improve that...?
Maybe Mom will teach him. ^^

Edit: To load a save takes some time, I'm not used to this.
Edit2: Be careful with Incest at Patreon, wherever the story goes.

 

[Angmir]

Ok played through this masterpiece ;]

Presentation:
Graphics - suprisingly good 7/10
Atention to detail - bad 3/10
Sex scenes - way too short 3/10

Story and Writng
Writing correctness - passable but almost no Capital letters sugest it is asian person autotranslating a lot - 5/10
Writing style (how enjoyable it is) - pretty bland, There is not enough text to make the scenes more interesting and longer - 4/10
Story - not a lot of it so far, but I it seems it will go into heavy humiliation territory very quickly, mom allready is making fun of him - It can very quickly turn into extreame cuckold scenario, and I preffer normal NTR. - 3/10
Scene writing - Scenes are extreamly short and unsattisfying, scene with Black dude and the PE Teacher was a throwaway - it just happened. Barely any buildup, no exposition, short uninteresting dialog, no internal thoghts - if all scenes will be made like that - it will be a waste of good renders. 3/10

Characters:
MC - no development no internal dialogues, bland 3/10
Mom - looks bit weird, weird personality, bully, dont like it 3/10
Older sister - Decent unique looks, nice body, a bit more interesting personality - good one 6/10
Little Sister - Nice model (but we seen a lot of it elsewhere), dont like the glasses, like almost all of them she got no time to show her character ! - 7/10
Girlfriend - I like her looks, nice body, tiny bit of character shown is ok - 5/10
Rest of Girls - some look interesting 5/10
Villain - He barely spoke a single line in the entire game. MC never mentioned him. He just appeared showed a massive dick came and left. I might be old fashioned but I would like to see more 4/10

Over all when I am reviewing this game I remembered a scene from Masterpiece movie "Idiocracy"

About the movie "Ass" and President Not Sure final speach

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"People wrote books and movies, movies that had stories, so you cared whose ass it was and why it was farting. "


This game is an Ass. But if it is gonna to be an ass - I would like to know who's asa it is and why it is farting.


Finaly Verdict - Hire a writer, and give more care to the world building, character development, and dialogs.

 

[TeamHentaiX]

i like it hehe

 

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Overview:
MC is a normal guy that has a small problem, during the course of the game you will try to help him to not get NTR ~Patreon​

Thread Updated: 2019-07-03
Release Date: 2019-07-03
Developer: SPHstudio

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Version: v0.1
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