VN Ren'Py Abandoned Smartass [v0.06] [Zee95]

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Wicked Garden

Wicked Garden

Osiris
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A slice of life game that's very relatable. Normally I pass on games with beta male - nerdy Mc's, but if this leads to something positive I'll stick around. The Mc working multiple jobs to support himself brought back some memories for me, he basically a guy that's just trying to get by. Shitty living situation, crappy job, a boss who's a cheap ass, bitchy landlord, who can't relate to that? But my hope is that our nerdy friend here grows a pair of balls and stop letting everyone walk all over him.

If this leads to someone like Paulina helping him wise up then I'm all for it. Because right now he's pathetic and bald(Not liking the haircut at all). Sharon is the resident bitch, gotta have one in every game, but that bitch happens to be a hot milf.
 
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Wicked Garden said:
A slice of life game that's very relatable. Normally I pass on games with beta male - nerdy Mc's, but if this leads to something positive I'll stick around. The Mc working multiple jobs to support himself brought back some memories for me, he basically a guy that's just trying to get by. Shitty living situation, crappy job, a boss who's a cheap ass, bitchy landlord, who can't relate to that? But my hope is that our nerdy friend here grows a pair of balls and stop letting everyone walk all over him.

If this leads to someone like Paulina helping him wise up then I'm all for it. Because right now he's pathetic and bald(Not liking the haircut at all). Sharon is the resident bitch, gotta have one in every game, but that bitch happens to be a hot milf.
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Now that's call wicked garden or you can say down in a hole
 
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Wicked Garden said:
A slice of life game that's very relatable. Normally I pass on games with beta male - nerdy Mc's, but if this leads to something positive I'll stick around. The Mc working multiple jobs to support himself brought back some memories for me, he basically a guy that's just trying to get by. Shitty living situation, crappy job, a boss who's a cheap ass, bitchy landlord, who can't relate to that? But my hope is that our nerdy friend here grows a pair of balls and stop letting everyone walk all over him.

If this leads to someone like Paulina helping him wise up then I'm all for it. Because right now he's pathetic and bald(Not liking the haircut at all). Sharon is the resident bitch, gotta have one in every game, but that bitch happens to be a hot milf.
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She fucked his hair up lol, I though she was gonna give him some cool makeover but oh well. I like the game myself maybe this beta will turn into a alpha, that would be nice to see.
 
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Hi guys! Feedback on the game is very important. And thanks to everyone who wrote a feedback.
I'll answer a couple of questions now:
About the car, (the red car), it's not a DAZ asset. About the text, I played it and it seemed quite readable to me. So I decided to keep it.
Regarding the backstory, don't rush, guys, I'm writing the script along with Nollan :D
 
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TheSidewinder said:
Except that if it's a short line of text (and you can't tell that it will be), which completes just as you click, you then go to the next text string, and have to go back if you didn't get it all.
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No problem if you click fast (double click). I have >99% success with this tactic.
 
Wicked Garden

Wicked Garden

Osiris
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Zee95 said:
Hi guys! Feedback on the game is very important. And thanks to everyone who wrote a feedback.
I'll answer a couple of questions now:
About the car, (the red car), it's not a DAZ asset. About the text, I played it and it seemed quite readable to me. So I decided to keep it.
Regarding the backstory, don't rush, guys, I'm writing the script along with Nollan :D
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I can see that you're slowly sending Mc through a transformation will that continue for the better?
 
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Smartass [v0.03] [Zee95] crunched

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Ragnar

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I played The Way so the point and click style is nothing new to me but here I think is a bit too much with no real pay off.
I prefer VNs but I play some free roam and sandboxes too. What I don't like is to roam around playing hide & seek with the girls or when you have to click every single room/object to see if that's the next trigger to get some new bits of story.
I think this could be better as a VN with less or zero free roam. Imo your strong point is writing so why make gameplay slow and complicated?
Renders are better and show what you learned with your previous game.
 
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