VN Ren'Py Abandoned Smartass [v0.06] [Zee95]

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Images: ~ 120
Text: About 700 lines
Start the game from the beginning.
Why am I releasing a rough version? In general it wouldn't be much different from the release version, I haven't sent the files to proofreader yet, I'll be unavailable for a couple of weeks, so I wouldn't have time to do the release, the edited version...
With the next release we'll fix some of the issues and inconsistencies... Enjoy...

 

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It's definitely a bold move having a unattractive looking main character, I'm not against the move I admire it actually. My wonder is will be be susceptible to insults and humiliation because of his looks? Will it be that kind of game?

 

[Larry2000]

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Screw the beautiful women in the center (and I'm sure we will) do you see the fucking cups on the left side? What the heck? That's really realistic. The only thing unrealistic is that woman's midsection

They look beautiful Zee95 perfect rating. Now if you'd only expanded her breasts by a factor of like, 3? Would be appreciated. If nothing else it'll get underneath Abhai's skin

 

[Abhai]

Yeah, i love my gals to be curvy, yet crunched just enough..wtf wanna huge plastic melons (sorry bimboE, my plastic love)....Thats being said, here is the crunched version of this fine game:

Smartass [v0.02] [Zee95] (609 MB rar pc source)
112 MB rar unofficial pc compressed (slightly reduced image/audio/video quality):

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done by Cruncher v0.4.1(BAS@f95zone)

 

[Eric_Draven]

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The difference between a teaser and the final version.

She got a great ass on her.

 

[Abhai]

It's definitely a bold move having a unattractive looking main character, I'm not against the move I admire it actually. My wonder is will be be susceptible to insults and humiliation because of his looks? Will it be that kind of game?

hopefully not.
and it is great to have normal mc, as there is more than enough those "attractive" ones, either shota mcs, or muscular superheroes...though from few games threads with similar discussions going on, this mc should become attractive just enough as soon as he cut his hair, gets contact lenses, and dom-fuck his landlady for the first time
yet even then there most probably will be complains "wtf, please, remove mcs horse dick (whole 8-9 inches), it is immersion breakable", "remove ntr, that dude from the next door has walked pass his sister, i cant stand it", "please give us prego" and so on

 

[Larry2000]

Yeah, i love my gals to be curvy, yet crunched just enough..wtf wanna huge plastic melons (sorry bimboE, my plastic love)....Thats being said, here is the crunched version of this fine game:

HEY! Who said anything about "plastic?" I'm only in it for the natural big breast look. I want gravity to affect them too you know. Physics goes a long way to make it look nice. I may like huge breasts, but smaller ones have their merits. Though, I am with you on the ass part. Not enough big asses I think. Favorite big ass that I can remember is the Mom from Man of the House. The bend over scenes leave me in flames

To me, the Bimbo look (aka literally plastic ass, plastic breasts and plastic lips) is my least favorite.

 

[Abhai]

HEY! Who said anything about "plastic?" I'm only in it for the natural big breast look. I want gravity to affect them too you know. Physics goes a long way to make it look nice. I may like huge breasts, but smaller ones have their merits. Though, I am with you on the ass part. Not enough big asses I think. Favorite big ass that I can remember is the Mom from Man of the House. The bend over scenes leave me in flames

To me, the Bimbo look (aka literally plastic ass, plastic breasts and plastic lips) is my least favorite.

a bit of cross-advertising - if you wanna some hot asses check away from home.
ladies/milfs there are top notch im(horny)o
and regarding natural big breasts affected by gravity....she is more than happy to hear that

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[Larry2000]

a bit of cross-advertising - if you wanna some hot asses check away from home.
ladies/milfs there are top notch im(horny)o
and regarding natural big breasts affected by gravity....she is more than happy to hear that

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OMG! Yeah, I remember AfH! They do have amazing scenes! The aunt just flaunting it in your face. That's what Sir-mix-alot was preaching to us about. He foretold this!

Also, I'd rather have an saggy old woman, then a BIMBO ass barbie doll!

 

[Abhai]

OMG! Yeah, I remember AfH! They do have amazing scenes! The aunt just flaunting it in your face. That's what Sir-mix-alot was preaching to us about. He foretold this!

Also, I'd rather have an saggy old woman, then a BIMBO ass barbie doll!

fully agree on the first part, while on the second one i have to admit that i would rather go for BABD if thats choice

 

[Larry2000]

fully agree on the first part, while on the second one i have to admit that i would rather go for BABD if thats choice

Wow, I've never seen someone betray their morals so completely. Abhai, what have you done?

 

[Abhai]

Wow, I've never seen someone betray their morals so completely. Abhai, what have you done?

well, not full betrayal, just a tiny one - bimbo-ass barbie doll clearly differs from bimbo boobs barbie doll

 

[Larry2000]

well, not full betrayal, just a tiny one - bimbo-ass barbie doll clearly differs from bimbo boobs barbie doll

touche. You got me. Still, I don't know what you'll be doing with the plastic on the front. I'm assuming your closing your eyes as you do the nasty?

 

[Bobby Boucher]

What’s the story about though?

 

[Demonic Presence]

What’s the story about though?

Inquiring minds would like know.

 

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Some bugs fixed...

 

[SecretSal]

Not too crazy about poverty porn and MCs hitting rock bottom to start off a story, but I liked The Way, so let's see if this picks up soon. The backstory was nice, just waiting for the present day one to be as interesting. MC seems fine to me, most of his unattractiveness comes down to an awkward personality and bad grooming, so a makeover is doable down the line, if it goes that way.

But I can't understand why you would go out of your way to make the game harder to play with transitions and text speed. The universal text speed variable (cps) is there for a reason. Overriding it and still leaving the text speed control option (which now has zero effect) makes no sense. I had to go into the script and delete all the 'slow cps' mentions in the character definitions before it was playable for me.

 

[Zee95]

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Future plans.
hello friends! well, the release happened. I really haven't seen much feedback on the game, but that's pretty normal for the first releases. What are the future plans? As I wrote earlier, I will be unavailable for a couple of weeks, I will be able to read your messages, maybe even reply, but I won't be able to work on the game. In two weeks work on the game will resume. At the same time I will be working on a short update (50-100 renders) for "The Way", it won't be a continuation of the main story, it will be a small addition to the beginning of the story. (The development of the relationship with Estelle). And I plan to have this update released by the end of May... In the future, I also plan to do short updates for "The Way". But the main effort now will be focused on the development of The Smartass...
Well, see you around...

 

[majdaddin]

The text_cps per Character is pretty damn annoying. Can't disable it in the Preferences, even though that's how it seems. Had to remove all `what_slow_cps` and `what_slow_cps_multiplier` from `script.rpy` =(

 

[majdaddin]

Bug on line:

kate "I don't want to go to bed in the same room with [p_name!] I'm a grown-up girl..."

where [p_name!] should probably be [p_name]!