VN Ren'Py SnowStorm [v0.10 WW] [GleenX Studio]

[xXxNeospiritxXx]

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small advice, those mc thoughts are really annoying, let the player decide what kind of girl/woman he finds attractive, because for people like me for example that don't agree with him, losing the connection to the mc. same with so clumsy comments like "i joined the white wolves bc they have the prettiest girls" and you did it multiple times like with every girl even the barmaid, when i would let the mc decide he would play pokemon and catch them all, but you don't have a Harem tag so i assume that i can go a monogamous way.

except that i really enjoy the game so far, so don't take it personal, i know it's nitpicking but those lines making me always smh^^

 

[GleenXstudio]

FYI, GleenXstudio, at the campfire (after the MC wakes up with the captive daughter in bed), Yrsa should say, "Oh... Right... But the deer is almost cooked." As it's spelled now, someone or something precious is being cooked, rather than the animal that jumps through the forest and fields. You spell it correctly later, so I'm sure this is just a typo.

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Indeed.
At first, getting +1 at the campfire wasn't planned for Yrsa. I added those points later, but forgot to update the condition for dexterity bonus during the fight. It should be == 2 or >=1, or included only in the stealth approach. I will correct that for the next update. Thanks

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

same with so clumsy comments like "i joined the white wolves bc they have the prettiest girls" and you did it multiple times like with every girl even the barmaid, when i would let the mc decide he would play pokemon and catch them all, but you don't have a Harem tag so i assume that i can go a monogamous way.

I have no idea how this even remotely implies a harem. What, you can't be monogamous but find other people attractive? That's ridiculous. Just because the MC appreciates beauty doesn't mean he has to jump everything with a pulse. This does not have a harem, nor did the previous game. That is not a thing in this series, at least to this point. I assume it will never be a thing in the Erastorm games, but obviously I can't read the dev's mind for future plans.

 

[GleenXstudio]

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small advice, those mc thoughts are really annoying, let the player decide what kind of girl/woman he finds attractive,

I get what you say, but the example you put on spoiler is a fact. Not exactly an opinion on her attractiveness...
If you find her body normal, that's another story, we do not live in the same world then

I can agree a bit more on the other example with white wolves girls, which is a bit forceful eventhough I think 90% would agree with that comment (which only happens if you joined WW btw), but for those who choose WW because they like Torsten or Capitalism (why not), I can understand it could be innapropriate .

Jokes aside, I can agree with the general idea, but I probably did worse than the two examples you pointed out .
However, moving to the other extreme (ie removing all thoughts from MC) will bring other issues and other kind of complaints. So, it's always a matter of balance and compromise which will never be perfect as everyone has a different perception.

I like to say that my games are passionately imperfect , so nipticking things are probably unavoidable and those will be of different nature for everyone, so instead I try to make the strong points overcome the little issues one can find.
That said, if some weak points are easy to solve/improve, of course I don't prevent myself to do it when possible, that's why I like to read and analyze feedback, but perception feedbacks (like yours) are always tricky to judge as they're very personal most of the time. Needs a lot of them to get a conclusion.

Oh and last, I don't really get the comment on harem/monogamous either. Thank god It's not forbidden to think that girl A or B is attractive even if you are married to girl C or we would be all in prison or divorced by now.

 

[Groundlbr]

The developer's English is still a little wonky, but it's definitely improved over the previous game. Outside of that I really enjoyed the update.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Oh and last, I don't really get the comment on harem/monogamous either. Thank god It's not forbidden to think that girl A or B is attractive even if you are married to girl C or we would be all in prison or divorced by now.

Tell all my exes that....

 

[xXxNeospiritxXx]

I like to say that my games are passionately imperfect , so nipticking things are probably unavoidable and those will be of different nature for everyone, so instead I try to make the strong points overcome the little issues one can find.
That said, if some weak points are easy to solve/improve, of course I don't prevent myself to do it when possible, that's why I like to read and analyze feedback, but perception feedbacks (like yours) are always tricky to judge as they're very personal most of the time. Needs a lot of them to get a conclusion.

Oh and last, I don't really get the comment on harem/monogamous either. Thank god It's not forbidden to think that girl A or B is attractive even if you are married to girl C or we would be all in prison or divorced by now.

agree, that it is my own personal taste, so i give you that. nonetheless you project YOUR opinion into that of the players. all i'm saying is that i would keep it neutral. and sure it is not forbidden to find someone attractive even if you are married or something else, but the vibes i get from the mc is that he would go for everyone, no matter the players prefferences.

again, my personal taste if you take it serious or not is your thing (your game etc). just giving you feedback, instead of writing a review immediately. *cheers

 

[HentaiGamerN00b]

agree, that it is my own personal taste, so i give you that. nonetheless you project YOUR opinion into that of the players. all i'm saying is that i would keep it neutral. and sure it is not forbidden to find someone attractive even if you are married or something else, but the vibes i get from the mc is that he would go for everyone, no matter the players prefferences.

again, my personal taste if you take it serious or not is your thing (your game etc). just giving you feedback, instead of writing a review immediately. *cheers

While i was liking your other post with spoiler, in this, let me share to you my thoughts of what MC is... He's a fucking wanker, he just see a woman and he just want to breed her... But being a man with that kind of thoughts doesn't mean he's a raper or potential raper. As WW path this becomes much evident if the player since the Episode 1 choose a girl and maintain firm on the decision to be loyal to the chosen ending of that episode, you can make clear if you love someone else and maintain distance.

 

[Daastaan007]

Yeah, I understand. I find it hard sometimes myself. I wouldn't expect any of the series to change, though. If there's been no harem by now, I'd guess there won't ever be one in the future. I have many playthroughs of games like this specifically for this reason. At least then I get to see much more of the content.

I left playing both

But these are great games.

 

[ono97]

Keep getting errors when extracting the MEGA version, anyone else? Game wont launch because of it.

 

[NyVar]

Is there a new writer? Or a new proofreader? The English is getting worse.
Nothing major, unless its just me. Spelling is good, but the wording has gotten worse i think.

 

[TajaRrR]

Quick question guys, is it necessary to play SandStorm to understand everything that's happening here or is it just recommended and not MUST DO?

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Quick question guys, is it necessary to play SandStorm to understand everything that's happening here or is it just recommended and not MUST DO?

Recommended, definitely not required. There will be references to the past game and the MC's experiences there, but there's enough of an explanation here that you shouldn't get lost or anything. Presumably there will also be additional explanation over time of some of the overarching plot points throughout the series, so you'll be clued into what might be happening in this game as well.

 

[DaimonFey]

Quick question guys, is it necessary to play SandStorm to understand everything that's happening here or is it just recommended and not MUST DO?

It's not required but recommended to play SandStorm. Either way you should try SandStorm because it's a very good game.

 

[Beast161616]

That cover art in the description is really omeyzin

 

[Deleted member 1837757]

Well this is an interesting one nontheless i hope it will have much more content in the future sandstorm was fine but this is even better reading was was okey i am looking foward to see more in the future.

 

[Jinzai35]

beautiful render

 

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[LinchCAP]

Please, let there be a harem of blondes, that's the only thing I ask for in this life.