- Jul 11, 2020
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Agreed.While the art is still among the highest rated, this game would benefit a lot from a complete rewrite in both dialogue and by adding some extra small additions to the cell content. Just to make it more believable that the heroines have sex with Luthor. I thought that the original idea was that they did it of their own free will after Lex manipulates them.
The one thats fleshed out the most in that regard is Batgirl in my opinion. Lex manipulates her slowly with the fake Nightwing and makes her believe that she's sacrificing her own body so other heroines do not have to. Sadly she's one of the few who behavior is somewhat believable.
Miss Martian is also fleshed out, and I might give Vixen a pass in that she accepts her situation and makes the most of it.
The other ones...:
Huntress: "I'm bored, lets fuck."
Black Canary: "If I do it with him he will release me for sure."
Stargirl: "He's so weird, oops it seems we're having sex, no how did that happen."
Zatanna: "I can't escape, so I better sleep with Luthor."
Supergirl: Luthor just commands her to do what he tells her to do, not really a challenge.
Hawkgirl: Again, Luthor just commands her, not really a challenge.
Wonder Woman: Luthor just commands her with the lasso, not really a challenge.
The fact that English obviously isn't his first language is a mark against the game too. There's typos and poor grammar everywhere, plus he repeats some phrases so often it gets annoying. I hope he spends time cleaning up the script at some point, or hiring a native speaker to do it for him
It's not a major problem though. I'm here for the art more than anything