Unity Something Unlimited [v2.4.7] [Gunsmoke Games]

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HentaiKami

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I can kind of understand the logic of "i'm bored" for having sex. I think quite a lot of people would be desperate for some kind of stimulation if they were locked in a single room without any real stimuli in there to pass the time after a while. After some time the mental fatigue from being bored and not being able to find any stimuli would start to make anyone go nuts.
Sure the hell of being in the cell is only temporary at a time, but based on writing it seems like that part of their mind doesn't remember the things they do during waking hours. So to them it's basically all they know.
 
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1138op

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HentaiKami said:
I can kind of understand the logic of "i'm bored" for having sex. I think quite a lot of people would be desperate for some kind of stimulation if they were locked in a single room without any real stimuli in there to pass the time after a while. After some time the mental fatigue from being bored and not being able to find any stimuli would start to make anyone go nuts.
Sure the hell of being in the cell is only temporary at a time, but based on writing it seems like that part of their mind doesn't remember the things they do during waking hours. So to them it's basically all they know.
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Not really sure it works that way at the moment.
Black Canary says something like: "thats wy I've been feeling so drained lately.' As far as I understand, when in the cell they remember everything, but when outside the cells they don't remember their cell-time. As for the bored part, I try to imagine how the characters would react so long as it stay somewhat believable. Thats why I think Batgirl's cell content is worked out really well compared to the rest of the girls. It takes a lot of visits before she does something of her own free will, and even then she hesitates at first before a comment from Lex tips the scales. Compare her to the recent Zatanna content and it a stark contrast.
 
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1138op said:
Not really sure it works that way at the moment.
Black Canary says something like: "thats wy I've been feeling so drained lately.' As far as I understand, when in the cell they remember everything, but when outside the cells they don't remember their cell-time. As for the bored part, I try to imagine how the characters would react so long as it stay somewhat believable. Thats why I think Batgirl's cell content is worked out really well compared to the rest of the girls. It takes a lot of visits before she does something of her own free will, and even then she hesitates at first before a comment from Lex tips the scales. Compare her to the recent Zatanna content and it a stark contrast.
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I'm with HentaiKami on this. Lex mentions that its like partitioning the mind. The waking self doesn't know whats going on with the one in the cell and vice versa. So all they know is that they've been kept in the cell the whole time. Although, I'm sure he could merge the memories as he was able to combine the two Audrys in the Kaznia event.

I don't think Black Canary was talking about being tired in her day life and instead was just talking about how she fells at that time in the cell. She said that because none of them are actually getting any real sleep. Their minds are running as if they're awake the whole time.
 
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1138op said:
While the art is still among the highest rated, this game would benefit a lot from a complete rewrite in both dialogue and by adding some extra small additions to the cell content. Just to make it more believable that the heroines have sex with Luthor. I thought that the original idea was that they did it of their own free will after Lex manipulates them.

The one thats fleshed out the most in that regard is Batgirl in my opinion. Lex manipulates her slowly with the fake Nightwing and makes her believe that she's sacrificing her own body so other heroines do not have to. Sadly she's one of the few who behavior is somewhat believable.
Miss Martian is also fleshed out, and I might give Vixen a pass in that she accepts her situation and makes the most of it.
The other ones...:

Huntress: "I'm bored, lets fuck."
Black Canary: "If I do it with him he will release me for sure."
Stargirl: "He's so weird, oops it seems we're having sex, no how did that happen."
Zatanna: "I can't escape, so I better sleep with Luthor."
Supergirl: Luthor just commands her to do what he tells her to do, not really a challenge.
Hawkgirl: Again, Luthor just commands her, not really a challenge.
Wonder Woman: Luthor just commands her with the lasso, not really a challenge.
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Agreed.
The fact that English obviously isn't his first language is a mark against the game too. There's typos and poor grammar everywhere, plus he repeats some phrases so often it gets annoying. I hope he spends time cleaning up the script at some point, or hiring a native speaker to do it for him
It's not a major problem though. I'm here for the art more than anything
 
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1138op

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jlucci217 said:
I'm with HentaiKami on this. Lex mentions that its like partitioning the mind. The waking self doesn't know whats going on with the one in the cell and vice versa. So all they know is that they've been kept in the cell the whole time. Although, I'm sure he could merge the memories as he was able to combine the two Audrys in the Kaznia event.

I don't think Black Canary was talking about being tired in her day life and instead was just talking about how she fells at that time in the cell. She said that because none of them are actually getting any real sleep. Their minds are running as if they're awake the whole time.
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Ah, I might have missed that one. With which girl does he say that?
That's what makes the way the save system works so frustrating. No way to hop back to redo a scene.

But it doesn't take away the fact that this game could be more than it is right now.
I again make the comparison with Seeds of Chaos. A boatload of good art there, and the dialogue and story is worked out good as well.
 
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With April now in full swing, the next SU update is soon approaching and with it comes seeing two sets of Bonds grow around Lex. See how Cheshire and Artemis grow to maintain their unique relationships with Lex all the while having to once again compete against the other. Bare witness to not only the Bonds between Artemis * Cheshire... But the bonds between another pair as well.
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Please please please be Galatea and Supergirl.
 
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1138op said:
Ah, I might have missed that one. With which girl does he say that?
That's what makes the way the save system works so frustrating. No way to hop back to redo a scene.
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Unfortunately, I don't remember the scene. I'm with ya on the save system. I'd have to start over to figure out which scene it was.
 
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UnsavouryPursuits said:
Agreed.
The fact that English obviously isn't his first language is a mark against the game too. There's typos and poor grammar everywhere, plus he repeats some phrases so often it gets annoying. I hope he spends time cleaning up the script at some point, or hiring a native speaker to do it for him
It's not a major problem though. I'm here for the art more than anything
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I'm pretty sure English is his first language though ?
 
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