So, I'm gonna give some feedback if
MrBaker is interested.
So, getting the obvious things out of the way first. As others have mentioned, some angles during the sex scenes are pretty pointless, as they don't show the "action". The Catalina sex scene is incredibly underwhelming because the main angle doesn't show anything. The car blowjob too. There was also this Anais scene in the prologue (even if the other angle was pretty good):
If you're gonna have angles like these, they need to be complementary, and not half the scene's presentation. Having those among 4-5 angles is fine. But when there's only 1 or 2 angles, they have to be better picked. If you ask me, having many angles is generally a great way to make the most of your scene without having to make a bunch of positions.
The other obvious point is the recycled renders. I personally dont mind it too much, but I can see why people would. It was impossible not to notice, and it gives away a feeling of a rushed product.
Speaking of rushed, I did feel like the story was moving a bit too fast. Characters were at one place, and all the sudden they were at another without a smooth transition. A lot of characters are getting introduced, but not properly developed. The sword girl, for instance, was introduced, the MC spent 2 weeks in a house with her, but they didn't even talk once? I think we can focus on developing the girls who are already there and slow down a bit on new ones.
As for technical problems, besides the car blowjob not popping up in the gallery, I've also seen the wrong name display in the text bubble:
I think there were some typos too, but I don't recall where.
That sums up my 2 cents. Not trying to be negative here, I still think this game is very promising, and I've been enjoying it so far. But nothing is perfect, so I'm just pointing out some things I feel could be improved upon. Best of luck dev, looking forward to the next release.
