I played this a while ago, last year I believe, and distinctly remember the heavily tattooed curvy intro and the incredibly broken dialog.
I figured the Dev would get a better translator for English (Try Google Translate maybe or another just to cross reference if the phrase comes out as broken English?) or ask for some donated support for the first draft, but here we are having almost every sentence contain cring-worthy phrases and words (she is BUZZY for example)
I would edit it myself if I had the skills to do so since the renders on this project are absolutely brilliant.
The first curvy girl looks magical, not quite my body preference, but her personality shines when it comes to physical entertainment for the MC, its obvious to me that she has some strong feelings for him.
CLEARLY, the Devs background is Graphic Arts, and OH does it show!
They are so good that I suffer through the Frankenstein dialog choices.
I also expected this project to be far more advanced than it currently is in a year, though thankfully I didn't see an abandoned tag, which MANY good projects on here have been lost...like tears...in the rain.
So PLEASE get a dialog editor, use a good translator, and continue producing those updates to keep your fans excited while anticipating the next one!
Edit: I ran a different copy of this apparently, unpacked the 0.10 version, but ONLY had the broken English one and ONLY until the chaos after meeting Zoe.
SO I downloaded a fresh copy, added the walkthrough and BAM it's almost a whole new game...I still prefer the initial intro though...now I am going to miss her big ass when I first start the game lol.