VN Ren'Py Sophie [Ch. 1 v2.0 Fix] [SerahArt3D]

[Nova Minx]

Looks good so far. Some nice renders, scenes and camera angles. Like most games at f95, the quality and style of renders will change over time.

I prefer the story and characters moving forward rather than render changes. But this is also part of building your own game and story.

Waiting for more.


• I did notice the husband being called John by the co-worker, and yet he is labelled Jhon. This will need to be fixed.

 

[instaMagix]

Hotddamn dat as!when u see an ass like that,u gotta make love to it,worship it,stick a tongue in there,finger it and of course you gotta fuck it atleast 3x a day.so there will be anal?

edit: i played the chapter 1 and she's perfect
and then i played chapter 2 and wtf,you changed her?why change her face?the classic is already perfect.i got advice to you dev,don't listen to those assholes.just do ur thing,damn you ruined a good thing.

 

[parzialstark3223]

The Dev definitely knows how to keep the fans excited.... what a way to end the 2 episode

 

[Cheyrou]

Hot stuff but... Her face looks little bit weird

 

[Mugy's]

Le développeur sait vraiment comment garder les fans enthousiastes... quelle façon de terminer les 2 épisodes
[/CITATION]
ouais, il devrait refaire légèrement son visage, il ne colle pas avec les autres personnages, mais il devrait refaire tous les rendus où elle est là, ça serait nécessaire pour la cohérence ou continuer sans, à sa place je referai un redesign rapide vu qu'il n'y a que 2 chapitres, avant qu'il ne soit trop tard. En conclusion, le jeu n'est pas mauvais, et il serait encore meilleur avec quelques ajustements.

 

[JoeHiggins1949]

Will there ever be a point when there are decisions to be made, or will it continue to be one defined path?

 

[Davizera]

cheating > ntr. forget about ntr, just focus on cheating, teasing... keeping going, and add choices, paths!

 

[Sophiemlewis]

So guys, let me eliminate a good portion of people who like NTR. I put this tag, because for me (NTR) encompasses any type of betrayal, from cuck to corruption. The game is about corruption. I'll be adding Corruption in the next update, so it's much clearer.

 

[Mugy's]

Alors les gars, laissez-moi éliminer une bonne partie des gens qui aiment NTR. J'ai mis ce tag, car pour moi (NTR) englobe tout type de trahison, du cuck à la corruption. Le jeu parle de corruption. J'ajouterai la corruption dans la prochaine mise à jour, donc c'est beaucoup plus clair.
[/CITATION]
Si l'histoire raconte que le mari n'est pas conscient et ne sera jamais conscient de la trahison de sa femme, ce n'est pas du NTR. Du NTR à des degrés divers, du plus léger au plus sale.

 

[justjoe2k]

@Sophiemlewis I tried the game, I decided to back track in your old project of this game. Your models have got better. You did this on Blender? Wow. I see you keep rebooting the game. To get the model right. The story is good start of a plot. It looks like the game is a curruption thana NTR. Sure there might be it later on. I notice that it was the husband making the choices. So is he also get currupted? I know the main character is Sophie. I notice from your old OC she have sister name Clhoe. Sophiealso have a daughter. I don't know if this ia cancel when you reboot it. Looks interesting. I see a gym a woman name Nicole. Liza have a family and is the first scene of a sex scene. I wonder about the choices. Is it the husband along with his wife? I look at your other stuff animation of other well known charcters. That was you? Good animation. That means the animation sex scene is going to look great for this game. I notice you have another project a metroidvania type of game.

I'm mad that Brazil is blocking traffic for you, when it comes to Twitter. You have a lot of animation demo of Sophie on Twitter. Don't close your Twitter account. I don't think Twitter will be banned forever. Why? Politicians have ego, they like to be seen. One of the most places that do that is Twitter world wide. Here is hoping it comes back soon.

 

[Sembsdk]

Discord link?

 

[Sophiemlewis]

@Sophiemlewis I tried the game, I decided to back track in your old project of this game. Your models have got better. You did this on Blender? Wow. I see you keep rebooting the game. To get the model right. The story is good start of a plot. It looks like the game is a curruption thana NTR. Sure there might be it later on. I notice that it was the husband making the choices. So is he also get currupted? I know the main character is Sophie. I notice from your old OC she have sister name Clhoe. Sophiealso have a daughter. I don't know if this ia cancel when you reboot it. Looks interesting. I see a gym a woman name Nicole. Liza have a family and is the first scene of a sex scene. I wonder about the choices. Is it the husband along with his wife? I look at your other stuff animation of other well known charcters. That was you? Good animation. That means the animation sex scene is going to look great for this game. I notice you have another project a metroidvania type of game.

I'm mad that Brazil is blocking traffic for you, when it comes to Twitter. You have a lot of animation demo of Sophie on Twitter. Don't close your Twitter account. I don't think Twitter will be banned forever. Why? Politicians have ego, they like to be seen. One of the most places that do that is Twitter world wide. Here is hoping it comes back soon.

Thanks for the words. About Sophie, this is the new version, here she will not have the children of the first version. But yes, some characters from the first version will return. And I didn't close Twitter. I just can't change it at the moment.

 

[Niraeza]

If the protagonist is a woman then she is not ntr but netorase. Cause she's the cheater and they're not cheating on her. 'Cause she's the cheater and her boyfriend isn't him cheating

No, that's not netorase. Netorase is where the guy consents to his girl fucking other dudes. It's standard cuckoldry. Cheating is always without consent and therefore falls into "Netorare."

 

[incspector]

just a fix?

 

[BrambleBos]

Not much of a kinetic novel kinda guy but I'm gonna keep an eye on this one!

 

[Niraeza]

Not much of a kinetic novel kinda guy but I'm gonna keep an eye on this one!

There was a choice in this update which might signify more choices later, so it might not actually be kinetic. Though one of the two choices had no content in it yet, but down the line it should.

 

[Pdr602]

Liking the game overall however, I didn't like the move by the neighbor at the end of chapter 2. Too abrupt. Killed the build up for me.

 

[somepeoplearesheep]

smh spelling john wrong.

 

[Infosagar]

Liking the game overall however, I didn't like the move by the neighbor at the end of chapter 2. Too abrupt. Killed the build up for me.

Nah man, after Matt heard her lying to husband on phone, he went for opportunity as he knew she'll be least resistance while husband standing outside the door.
I will be eagerly waiting for version 3 update

 

[JoeHiggins1949]

smh spelling john wrong.

I thought the same, but it turns out Jhon is a legitimate variation on John. Some people are actually named that. Look it up.