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Almost didn't try this one because I saw the kinetic tag, as already mentioned you do get a couple of choices including not fucking the psycho that's killed like 7 dudes already. Going in I fully expected to be forced into doing just that but thankfully not.
Hopefully Claire comes along and offers us a better option than just being a career criminal/murderer while going after vengeance. The fight scene's were very well done and dev either has some knowledge or did some decent research for those, the best I have seen in a vn. (though punching tybolt in the face will forever be my personal favorite)
Thanks dev if you ever find yourself in here. gl.
Hopefully Claire comes along and offers us a better option than just being a career criminal/murderer while going after vengeance. The fight scene's were very well done and dev either has some knowledge or did some decent research for those, the best I have seen in a vn. (though punching tybolt in the face will forever be my personal favorite)
Thanks dev if you ever find yourself in here. gl.
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The "psycho" has a lot of charisma and I like her, unlike the white-haired girl, although it's true that her hunt was exaggerated, especially since the thugs didn't kill her chauffeur.
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Imagine for a second if you are conducting highly illegal activity against extremely dangerous people where your very life is on the line every second of the day.
Now imagine your boss brings in someone you have no clue about without vetting them or easing them in and telling you that your life is now in the hands of this complete stranger.
Now tell me how happy you would be!
- Dec 22, 2022
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Hey, the guy passed the boss's filter and that should be enough
.If you think about it coldly, you're right, Ava, but I was just comparing the initial charisma of both characters, maybe the fact that the redhead likes the MC so much at first glance makes her more likeable and fun.
Of course, this will change over time.
why should it change ? maybe for you first impression dont last but for me is the diference between a relationship and no-go,....problem here is bcs is a kinetic novel we cant choose what will happend so maybe you can have both red and white,and maybe i can send to the street each one of them bcs i didnt like any of the,....you can do your job and still be empathetic about it....the whitehair girl is an aa=hole and even i cant find a point till now to like her,...mc isnt the type to like this kind of ppl ....he will go for the white knight lady likeHey, the guy passed the boss's filter and that should be enough
If you think about it coldly, you're right, Ava, but I was just comparing the initial charisma of both characters, maybe the fact that the redhead likes the MC so much at first glance makes her more likeable and fun.
Of course, this will change over time.
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great start ngl..
can't say that about alot of new novels coming out!
Just hope it will be ACTUAL revenge because I can't count on my hands of VNs that do revenge right anyways...
Usually the MC just forgives and forgets when he injects her with the magic dick of forgiveness
can't say that about alot of new novels coming out!
Just hope it will be ACTUAL revenge because I can't count on my hands of VNs that do revenge right anyways...
Usually the MC just forgives and forgets when he injects her with the magic dick of forgiveness
This somehow reminds me of Mad World which is a good thing. Only difference is Mad World had supernatural fantasy.
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Just got done with this, and oh........ despite my reservations with this being a kinetic novel, I found it not too shabby.
Not too shabby at all.
Story feels like the dev put quite a bit of thought into the world building and connections between characters.
So far, Samantha (enforcer) interests me the most (yeah, she acts like a bitch, but more often than not I find such characters the most captivating and they tend to get a lot more growth than other LI archtypes).
Second would be Malena (supplier), with her laid back persona.
Ava was just okay. The sweet innocent archtype characters I tend to not get as engaged as others, but I guess we'll see.
Others like Madison (doc), ??? (neighbor), Claire (cop), they really weren't in it much so I guess I'll have to wait till the next chapter to get a better reading on them.
And I do hope we get to see more of Scarlett (betrayer) in the present day, given we haven't seen any such scenes yet.
So yeah. Will be keeping an eye on this one with future updates.
Not too shabby at all.
Story feels like the dev put quite a bit of thought into the world building and connections between characters.
So far, Samantha (enforcer) interests me the most (yeah, she acts like a bitch, but more often than not I find such characters the most captivating and they tend to get a lot more growth than other LI archtypes).
Second would be Malena (supplier), with her laid back persona.
Ava was just okay. The sweet innocent archtype characters I tend to not get as engaged as others, but I guess we'll see.
Others like Madison (doc), ??? (neighbor), Claire (cop), they really weren't in it much so I guess I'll have to wait till the next chapter to get a better reading on them.
And I do hope we get to see more of Scarlett (betrayer) in the present day, given we haven't seen any such scenes yet.
So yeah. Will be keeping an eye on this one with future updates.
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I have a feeling the boss is related to him somehow.Hey, the guy passed the boss's filter and that should be enough
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Maybe but my money is on the guy The Boss is talking to who's face we don't see.....
Mayhaps Uncle and Dad of the MC?
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Yeah it's kinda confusing when the game has different LIs while being a KN, and the "Romance" section in the developer notes doesn't help the confusion either. Adding some future tags will be nice.
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"Imagine rejecting a love interest multiple times, and even after that, they continue offering sex again and again. It just doesn't make sense"
I wish Eliza from nephilim would learn this. I am all for character development which may alter my opinion and having more than one on / off road, but some never take no for an answer because dev assumes everyone will pick yes and never bothers writing an alternative.
Thanks for the copy paste, sounds great too me as a story based player that hates being forced into relationships. I enjoyed the start and hopefully it will live up to my expectations which are quite high after playing the intro.
I wish Eliza from nephilim would learn this. I am all for character development which may alter my opinion and having more than one on / off road, but some never take no for an answer because dev assumes everyone will pick yes and never bothers writing an alternative.
Thanks for the copy paste, sounds great too me as a story based player that hates being forced into relationships. I enjoyed the start and hopefully it will live up to my expectations which are quite high after playing the intro.
"Also I'd say this is a VN where the story will outweigh the lewd content and I'm a sucker for a solid story. " -> This is definitivly something i could like. I've read the whole thing, i gotta say it's not bad. I still think the MC need more flavour, it's like he has no emotion or maybe he was break during the prison, i dunno. Also he need to connect, like most of the time people aren't really talking. In the meantime, it set up an ambiance, like people are serious when they are doing these kind of work, they aren't here for eating cupcake or whatever.
I like mystery but i wanna know what the MC is thinking, how he feel. Or maybe having more connection between some character, everyone seem so cold.(i know it's only the begining, things will evolve) Anyways, it's not a bad start for sure, let see how it goes : )
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If that happened it'd be difficult not to have tunnel vision thinking about revenge and yeah depending on how his incarceration was you could come out completely emotionless. Bad, bad combination.