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Then maybe this VN isn't for you since the whole premise is a revenge story......and the first entry in the Developer Notes states that it's an action packed VN.
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"Will you take the blame for me?"
Character is a dope and agrees.
I exited the game, and uninstalled.
Good luck!
Character is a dope and agrees.
I exited the game, and uninstalled.
Good luck!
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Overused joke, but I accept the complaint. Saying why you didn't enjoy something may be at least somewhat helpful. Or I may be a one off, and it should be ignored.
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The truth is that the game looks very good, the renders, the characters are 10 good, leaving aside Samanta's bitch who would practically send her to be lost to a forest , of course this at the moment and because of her shitty personality, For other hand the other girls are 10, especially the redhead (personally redheads are my weakness) she is in the top 1, that's where Doc is, who is a little younger than Mel, although it remains to be seen what she is like on a personal level, the hotdog girl (hehehe xD) and the police look good and the delinquent girl would be a little less, but like the Doc, it remains to be seen what they are like, The girl from the fast food restaurant, I hope she is also among the (LIs), because seeing her in her waitress outfit makes you want to spend everything on fast food (hahaha).
Now it's time to wait for the next update, because it has potential and I hope you don't pay for the game Mr. DEV, because I'm already anxiously waiting to see how we slowly and painfully get revenge on that treacherous bitch Scarlett
Now it's time to wait for the next update, because it has potential and I hope you don't pay for the game Mr. DEV, because I'm already anxiously waiting to see how we slowly and painfully get revenge on that treacherous bitch Scarlett
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QHD & 4K available for Patron!
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Sort of Justice has been approved for its release on Steam!
Go and Wishlist it NOW!!!
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Overall I enjoyed the game, I'm liking most of the characters and the story, except maybe a thing or two, like MC being a fucking idiot at the beginning 
The prison fighting pit is also a bit out there. Plus I wouldn't have minded if he had matured a bit looks-wise in prison, he spent 7 years fighting there but looks pretty much the same as when he went in.
Also good amount of content for a first release.
Also gimme more Ava!
The prison fighting pit is also a bit out there. Plus I wouldn't have minded if he had matured a bit looks-wise in prison, he spent 7 years fighting there but looks pretty much the same as when he went in. Also good amount of content for a first release.
Also gimme more Ava!
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Avaron1974 He wants more of you!Overall I enjoyed the game, I'm liking most of the characters and the story, except maybe a thing or two, like MC being a fucking idiot at the beginning
Also good amount of content for a first release.
Also gimme more Ava!
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Sort of Justice is now officially released on steam!
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Thanks for all of your support!
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Maybe the guy was someone who would do anything for a woman; there are many like that in real life, I don't think it's that absurd. The important thing is that he becomes a new man after prison, although he did agree to go get the weapons with the other woman (Malena).
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The work load for the next installment breezed past 10.000 words ... maybe renders will start to populate the game soon.
Heard a story about man eaters and how easy it is for them to be home wreckers: Alanis Morisette lost Ryan Reynolds to Scarlet Johannson who lost Ryan to Blake Lively - as famished as these girls are, it is on par to how thisrsty the guys who like to be picked are: Ben affleck flinged Jennifer Lopez then flinged Jennifer Gardener - Both Lopez and Affleck had a lot of kids with a bunch of spouses before they ended up flinging eachother again, marrying and now they are divorcing.
Arianna Grande broke relationships when she started flinging the guys who are singing, acting or dancing with or for her, simply having her way with them for a couple a months - her latest man eating antic had her fling her married co-star while being married herself - double dating the dunces who were none the wiser - until they started calling their spouses ”estranged” all of a sudden because their fling is more important than marriage or anything even resembling adult behavior in human society.
The man eater handler who found MC her perfect target just perpetuates the genre- MC did not even understand she was flinging the boss while treating him like dirt - she pulled his strings then dissapeared - while MC was still smitten with her - while she was dumping him again and again for years on end, keeping him in cold storage, able and willing to dump her whole responsability on him some day.
The colliseum used the fights for proffit and just like MMA events, they will clean and keep their fighters in good enough shape for the lime light, as a bad connecition or shoddy cameras will make it harder to enjoy a pay per view is the fighters are in bad shape. MC told us they were kept in shape and there was literally nothing he could have done, as his losses meants being knocked out and waking up in the clinic.
Just like in any hospital or home or living anywhere, keeping a clean body and in shape makes it easier to spot any anomaly or anything that could endanger the investment. Not to mention that, for a private prison complex, questionable marks on inmates would be just another reason for beaurocrats to deny their services in the future.
Prooving oneself in the early days of working in a new organisation is a tough job for anyone, more so for our ”wet behind the ears” hero.
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Weekly Update 27/08/2024
Progress:
I expect myself to finish writing in following week, hopefully.
This week's topic:
Alright, this week's topic is Sex in adult visual novel.
First of all, let's talk about in what ways does sex affect the story. In my eyes, sex does not only act as a visual pleasure, but also a way to develop the story. We can think about how sex between characters may affect their interaction and how it enables future events. Characters may become awkward, calm, affectionate, or distanced toward each other after sex. Depending on their emotions may lead to different development of events in the future.
So, sex develops the story, but when should we put sex? At what time is it appropriate to insert sex in the story line? Now, I've played quite a few of AVN to know that, sex with the wrong timing will ruin it. Sex with dumb reasons, sex too frequent, sex too early and sex that doesn't make sense. So often sex scenes happen because of these reasons, which generates negative effects on the story line.
Now, I understand sex can happen without a specific reason. It's fine. But, we have to be aware of the timing. Let's say, if we have reached a climax of the plot, naturally, we should be careful of putting unnecessary content during that. Unnecessary sex (sex that does not have any effect on the plot or characters), in my mind, should only be available as a "downtime" for the plot, where providing entertainment between story progression serves as a means to keep the audience engaged.
An example of legendary sex, is that sex with a specific character is perceived as almost like a reward. Some characters will decide to have sex with MC early on, or, some characters will only become more intimate after the MC has achieved the criteria. Which in turn, makes the sex more valuable. If the player can have sex every other event that happens in the story, why not just go watch porn? In a sense, I'm saying that, some sex should feel rewarding. Almost like a prize that you win after working for it so diligently.
Now, the main point. How will I time my sex in Sort of Justice? In conclusion, I will only insert sex that will benefit the story. I will not turn this into a mindless sex sim. No way. First of all, the plot doesn't allow the characters to have a lot of sex. Second, the frequency of sex varies between characters due to their personality. And third, I hate mindless sex. It ruins the story progression, it serves no purpose other than giving you eye candies, and if it is presented in a wrong way, it will completely betray the character's characterisation.
Progress:
- Writing - 13,000~ words
I expect myself to finish writing in following week, hopefully.
This week's topic:
Alright, this week's topic is Sex in adult visual novel.
First of all, let's talk about in what ways does sex affect the story. In my eyes, sex does not only act as a visual pleasure, but also a way to develop the story. We can think about how sex between characters may affect their interaction and how it enables future events. Characters may become awkward, calm, affectionate, or distanced toward each other after sex. Depending on their emotions may lead to different development of events in the future.
So, sex develops the story, but when should we put sex? At what time is it appropriate to insert sex in the story line? Now, I've played quite a few of AVN to know that, sex with the wrong timing will ruin it. Sex with dumb reasons, sex too frequent, sex too early and sex that doesn't make sense. So often sex scenes happen because of these reasons, which generates negative effects on the story line.
Now, I understand sex can happen without a specific reason. It's fine. But, we have to be aware of the timing. Let's say, if we have reached a climax of the plot, naturally, we should be careful of putting unnecessary content during that. Unnecessary sex (sex that does not have any effect on the plot or characters), in my mind, should only be available as a "downtime" for the plot, where providing entertainment between story progression serves as a means to keep the audience engaged.
An example of legendary sex, is that sex with a specific character is perceived as almost like a reward. Some characters will decide to have sex with MC early on, or, some characters will only become more intimate after the MC has achieved the criteria. Which in turn, makes the sex more valuable. If the player can have sex every other event that happens in the story, why not just go watch porn? In a sense, I'm saying that, some sex should feel rewarding. Almost like a prize that you win after working for it so diligently.
Now, the main point. How will I time my sex in Sort of Justice? In conclusion, I will only insert sex that will benefit the story. I will not turn this into a mindless sex sim. No way. First of all, the plot doesn't allow the characters to have a lot of sex. Second, the frequency of sex varies between characters due to their personality. And third, I hate mindless sex. It ruins the story progression, it serves no purpose other than giving you eye candies, and if it is presented in a wrong way, it will completely betray the character's characterisation.
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Well .. so far, MC was only allowed to proove himself - in the ring and in the blindfold seat - or haplessly blunder through one or two jobs that were both way over his aptitude level - to put it mildly.
MC is so far in the ”thug for hire for any job” category while he prooved inadequate at best, totally useless at least, to both babes he was supposed to provide back-up to: The first girl got herself alone while MC was cage fighting - useless as a bodyguard and totally unimpressive or valued to the thugs in the room who simply dispatched him away from his objective in no time - while during the shoot-out, MC did not devize or execute any plan to overcome his deep seeded trauma with guns.
In better games or movies, a decomissioned gun would have consequences - getting thrown or something at the assailants to protecxt the slinger - but in this, MC has none of the serious consequences the other unsuccessful thugs got - getting beaten up or killed for their failures - MC gets rewarded for it as a total plot twist.
What saves this game is the Guy Ritchie total nonesense of the situation, where the big boss is threatening his long time partners on account of a young clueless grunt who has not prooven himself to be in any way useful in the jobs he was given:
the only jobs he had to do were - to protect a couple of girls on two separate situations - what ended up happening was that each girl found herself alone and totally exposed to the goons MC was supposed to shield them from.
For normal people - who live in the overly sexualised world where Brad Pit, Leonardo di caprio or Ariana Grande only do sex for stress relieve - they are utter shit human beings when it comes to family or long term relationships, or any kind of relationship at all - sex is supposed to calm them down and provide the dopamine overdrive to make their lives better by feeding their overblown egos.
Such as it is, MC is a toned young buck with little to nothing to offer to the seasoned criminals with whom he is now treading water with - so he will just be the tool to scratch their mentor/cougar/boss/daddy boners when it comes to how much respect he can be given in his situation.
MC is so far in the ”thug for hire for any job” category while he prooved inadequate at best, totally useless at least, to both babes he was supposed to provide back-up to: The first girl got herself alone while MC was cage fighting - useless as a bodyguard and totally unimpressive or valued to the thugs in the room who simply dispatched him away from his objective in no time - while during the shoot-out, MC did not devize or execute any plan to overcome his deep seeded trauma with guns.
In better games or movies, a decomissioned gun would have consequences - getting thrown or something at the assailants to protecxt the slinger - but in this, MC has none of the serious consequences the other unsuccessful thugs got - getting beaten up or killed for their failures - MC gets rewarded for it as a total plot twist.
What saves this game is the Guy Ritchie total nonesense of the situation, where the big boss is threatening his long time partners on account of a young clueless grunt who has not prooven himself to be in any way useful in the jobs he was given:
the only jobs he had to do were - to protect a couple of girls on two separate situations - what ended up happening was that each girl found herself alone and totally exposed to the goons MC was supposed to shield them from.
For normal people - who live in the overly sexualised world where Brad Pit, Leonardo di caprio or Ariana Grande only do sex for stress relieve - they are utter shit human beings when it comes to family or long term relationships, or any kind of relationship at all - sex is supposed to calm them down and provide the dopamine overdrive to make their lives better by feeding their overblown egos.
Such as it is, MC is a toned young buck with little to nothing to offer to the seasoned criminals with whom he is now treading water with - so he will just be the tool to scratch their mentor/cougar/boss/daddy boners when it comes to how much respect he can be given in his situation.
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