VN Ren'Py Completed SPACE PRISON [v1.00 FINAL] [Ubarefeet]

[UBAREFEET]

we all take the ball you put on the floor. the graphics don´t really good. the game is not bad. Go on and try to get better graphics.

Constructively. Unfortunately, I am not an artist as you can see, and I told you about my problem with them, well, in any case, I will definitely fix Anna. Do you know how frustrating it is when you are sent fan art that is 10,000 times better than your drawings ~~~ Thank, I will try to make my ball beautiful

 

[UBAREFEET]

I mean artists are not lazy because they dont want to work for free but I think that for now is better to practice your art and then post updates you dont need to edit the art in this demo if your skills are still the same, you are not going to get better overnight, so for now just pratice and post updates when you feel that you made some progress and in the future come back to the old versions and re do the art on those ones

Sounds like a plan, I guess I'll do it, man. In any case, I am very happy with all this criticism, your jokes about my drawing-honey for ears, however, I have not had so much fun for a long time, I already knew about the problem, but really, I try. The main problem is just the same in the characters.

 

[Blargher]

I'm honestly amused by the art. And I'd say its better than some of the generic ass models but yeah like everyone said. No one would wanna pay for a game with graphics like these. I'm gonna download and try the game out though, cause it sounds interesting none the less and I don't mind bad graphics if the game is worth while.

But yeah I'm guessing the weakest part is the graphics lol but you can always improve down the line.

 

[UBAREFEET]

I'm honestly amused by the art. And I'd say its better than some of the generic ass models but yeah like everyone said. No one would wanna pay for a game with graphics like these. I'm gonna download and try the game out though, cause it sounds interesting none the less and I don't mind bad graphics if the game is worth while.

But yeah I'm guessing the weakest part is the graphics lol but you can always improve down the line.

The plans have a very large number of branches, so... I will try to make the graphics better, but there will be a lot of characters in the game. So it means that the further the more and the better they will get. At least, I hope so...

 

[dende]

I surprisingly liked the little content, that was there but the art def. needs to improve a bit.
Hope to see more content in the future

 

[James Cook 1232]

needs better art, i like the idea tho, has potential

 

[EvilRade]

I'd say that graphic design is not bad, it's just different. And I like how different it is compared to hundreds of same-looking 3d-rendered games. Also, I like the setting and the idea of the game.

 

[UBAREFEET]

I'd say that graphic design is not bad, it's just different. And I like how different it is compared to hundreds of same-looking 3d-rendered games. Also, I like the setting and the idea of the game.

Thank you, people. it Is because of such as you that I have already started working on the update, while I assume that the game will be shared by day, as well as by updates.

 

[StFranzisk]

Drawn not very. But, a great selection of music and, um. sita ... I'm for the game! Cool. And it’s interesting to see the sequel

 

[aa14]

Love the concept of this game and looking forward to seeing where it goes.

 

[Fake Rabi ~]

Looks like some kid's scribbles... Let's see how far can this game go

 

[Namisyan]

Yikes

 

[chabam]

Constructively. Unfortunately, I am not an artist as you can see, and I told you about my problem with them, well, in any case, I will definitely fix Anna. Do you know how frustrating it is when you are sent fan art that is 10,000 times better than your drawings ~~~ Thank, I will try to make my ball beautiful

as long as the story and events are good that's all it matters right now, maybe in the future u can hire an artist or get better
ps loved chapter 1 keep up

 

[EvilRade]

as long as the story and events are good that's all it matters right now, maybe in the future u can hire an artist or get better
ps loved chapter 1 keep up

True. I'd be fine even if this game would be text only. The story and non-linear gameplay choice options is more important.

 

[Dark_Moustache]

I'm a simple man, I see futa, I click

 

[Fake Rabi ~]

I finish the game and kinda bit sad that it only has a little content since it's only a demo.. But it's kinda bit interesting even though the graphics looks like a drawing of a kid, but it will probably improve in due time. I made a fan art of this game but I can't upload it since i don't know how hope there's more in the future and GOOD LUCK!

 

[HogToot]

this be an oof

 

[Datfella369]

Love the concept, characters and scenes. However, art and sound design could definitely use some work. Writing could also be improved but i like what i see and wish you luck.

 

[allyva]

I saw a catgirl, so it's pretty good. With the pills my impression was that they'd force you have more of a spine ("give me all your pills and then die" -> "ok" -> *ded*), but with the dream and easy pill from the roommate, it looks more like you want to use the pills to force some humility on the player, with the player trying to retain enough spine to accomplish the hacker's goals.

It's a porn game so standards are low, but I think your art has charm. There's at least some 'animation'. There's a general lack of polish all around however, with bugged saves and repeated events. If the entire rest of your game is good enough, art complaints will solve themselves as you've already noticed, with people submitting replacement art.

Very interested in the catgirls. Catgirl Faction Supremacy questline?

 

[UBAREFEET]

I saw a catgirl, so it's pretty good. With the pills my impression was that they'd force you have more of a spine ("give me all your pills and then die" -> "ok" -> *ded*), but with the dream and easy pill from the roommate, it looks more like you want to use the pills to force some humility on the player, with the player trying to retain enough spine to accomplish the hacker's goals.

It's a porn game so standards are low, but I think your art has charm. There's at least some 'animation'. There's a general lack of polish all around however, with bugged saves and repeated events. If the entire rest of your game is good enough, art complaints will solve themselves as you've already noticed, with people submitting replacement art.

Very interested in the catgirls. Catgirl Faction Supremacy questline?

Good point. Well, first of all, I removed the possibility of returning, so you will have to save at every step, since there is no AutoSave either. This is my plan. At first I wanted to introduce randomness, but it is also solved by loading the game to the desired results. It's worth working on. About Neko... Well, first of all, this is only one of the races, although they will be present in the game, this does not mean that they have the main branch of the story, but they will. The script already has variable relationships with each character. Almost, some of them we won't see again. But there will be No one present for sure, since this is one of the gangs. By the way, thank you very much for your feedback.