WazawaiDa
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I can't really see what makes the 'jerk' MC scenes particularly better written, tbh. Most of them are just OOC moments where he either verbally abuses or assaults someone. Which, I guess, yeah, if you like that character type, you'll probably like these moments more than the 'normal' MC scenes. Personally, non-con stuff doesn't appeal to me at all, especially in an M/F context, so I don't really care for these scene variants.That Lenore bad ending was just much more well written than the standard path. I wish the main character was intelligent and willful so often in this game. Ranlilabz can write a very compelling anti-hero, but I can just FEEL the predisposition of the protagonist combined with the Patreon format getting heavily in the way of development to the point where it's now becoming a meta joke in the universe. When MC gets cruel the writing quality just skyrockets, it's happened with Rick recently and now Lenore. Compare the writing quality of the scenarios where the MC just becomes a monster with the expected path and you will see plot contrivance nearly disappears, the actions are sensible, the choice of language improves, the scene flows naturally, there is basically no aspect remaining where the path where we help Lenore is a better written scene than you're an asshole version of the scene. I beg everyone to compare the writing quality when the MC is a massive jerk to what you expect to see because it's getting strangely consistent how much better the writing stands when the MC is no longer 2 IQ points from legal retardation and instead is a flawed moral lose canon.
But even putting aside my personal distaste, I can't really understand your perspective where randomly assaulting someone would make the MC just 'flawed' or an 'anti-hero' (or 'sensible'). In the context of SpaceCorps, a (mostly) light-hearted sex comedy, it would be so out of place for the MC to start casually attacking other characters. It's not about patron interference, it's just not at all the story that the creator wants to tell.