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lol what next chapter is the last sounds like a rushed game imo
Just short. It was never going to be more than 3 or 4 updates long when I started it.
Edit: There will be new projects, turn those frowns upside down!
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Chapter 2 already felt rushed to me. There seemed to be a nice slow burn romance going on with Blaire and then bam! Random sex scene on the couch. I was expecting the MC to wake up from his dream at any moment during that scene, but nope... it actually happened.
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This shouldn't be suprising to you. Goosenards has only made short novels, and a lot of them too.
Will this VN be updated in future? Or is it the last version to be published?
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Damn next chapter is the last one? Dev you have a goldmine in your hand here and you are ready to cut it lose 4 chapters in? It should have been 8 chapters at the least imo. Get to annoy your son some more. Cuck him some more.
3 chapters in*
I could prolong the story I guess, but I'd have to get weird with it. Like MC decides to transition and then steals his sons love away from the cheerleader who incidentally also undergoes a transition, but not to the opposite sex, no she has an operation to make herself into a football, which in turn makes the MC's son fall back in love with her. All while an asteroid made of irradiated space cheese threatens to turn Earth into some sort of toxic Hors d'oeuvre. Which could be cool, but I'll probably just stick with ending it at chapter 3.
Instead of all of that the chapters could have been about you cucking the son in multiple places even he is nearby. That would have been fun. A drunk passed out son in nearby room while you screw his girl or his best friend. Or you go to a school party/prom and fuck his girl or best friend while he is wondering where she is. There is sooo many scenarios you could have done. You did not even scratch surface level of what you could have done imo but its your decision and your game.3 chapters in*
I could prolong the story I guess, but I'd have to get weird with it. Like MC decides to transition and then steals his sons love away from the cheerleader who incidentally also undergoes a transition, but not to the opposite sex, no she has an operation to make herself into a football, which in turn makes the MC's son fall back in love with her. All while an asteroid made of irradiated space cheese threatens to turn Earth into some sort of toxic Hors d'oeuvre. Which could be cool, but I'll probably just stick with ending it at chapter 3.
agree with other comments here. the son is such a little asshole to his dad, he deserves to have his dad stealing his girls away. also as soon as the kid turns 18 i would have kicked him out and let him fend for himself. also, make sure he loses his scholarship. not blackmail the principal to help him keep it. that's just my opinion on where this game could go if the dev continued working on it past a 3rd chapter. but in that case, i look forward to playing the final chapter and see how it ends.
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Started off strong and then turned into a snowball rolling down a steep hill. Even the animation quality, which was top notch for the first couple scenes, seemed rushed for the last chapter that was released. Though, in fairness, even rushed the animation was better than a lot of animations you see on new games.
- Jun 8, 2017
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idk looks like creator is in a experimentation phase which is better in the long run, to be fair this doesn't mean they can't come back to their creations. It seems short but for future creations I think what they're doing is smart. Test things figure out what people want and then create something better. Bros a scientist lmfao. I'm ngl I'd do the same just like knowing what hits and doesn't.
Sooooo all being said when will we get another chapter Dev ??? any time on the horizon ?? FYI best head job animation I have seen in any game thus far. I really want to see him pin the pizza delivery girl to the floor. Oh she is a hunny just thinking about groping her tits makes me weak at the knees
played the other game "All the wrong things" and that looks good with smooth animations as well, was wondering why it isnt posted on f95?