VN Ren'Py Completed Sparkling Duplicity [Final] [Goosenards]

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Gicoo

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I'm surprised. I just expected them to be generic, vague, and open-ended, since the game didn't had the time to develop beyond the premise.

So what, did the father get arrested and the son somehow wins or what?
 
Xythurr

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Gicoo said:
I'm surprised. I just expected them to be generic, vague, and open-ended, since the game didn't had the time to develop beyond the premise.

So what, did the father get arrested and the son somehow wins or what?
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Nope it's far worse than that. I've been spoiled and all I can say is despite his clear talent I'm considering blacklisting this dev and never supporting him again.
Goose was even posting memes about himself not delivering good endings so I guess he thinks it's funny. He has also stated that he's more than happy to throw his characters to the crocodiles on a whim.
Bear that in mind going forward people.
 
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Xythurr said:
Nope it's far worse than that. I've been spoiled and all I can say is despite his clear talent I'm considering blacklisting this dev and never supporting him again.
Goose was even posting memes about himself not delivering good endings so I guess he thinks it's funny. he has also stated he's more than happy to throw his characters to the crocodiles on a whim.
Bear that in mind going forward people.
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Well, don't be shy, out with it. I don't care that much about the game that I must experience its terrible endings. Just use the spoiler flag if you worry about our precious feelings.
 
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Well, don't be shy, out with it. I don't care that much about the game that I must experience its terrible endings. Just use the spoiler flag if you worry about our precious feelings.
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OK. This is a direct quote from the guy who spoiled it for me. DO NOT LOOK IF YOU DON'T WANT TO KNOW THE ENDINGS! I don't want any bitching from retards.
EDIT: The update is already out for the paid supporters. They aren't happy either.
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Appreciate putting it behind spoilers while im not super invested I want to try to avoid them when it comes to an ending even if it will be disappointing
 
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Rational Chaos was ended somewhat abruptly as well. It's interesting to see some games being milked for years upon years, and some being abandoned without ever reaching the climax. Hope Goosenards finds something interesting enough to flesh out the characters and the stories in-depth :(.
 
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Completed version now available on itch here:
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I jest, but I'm a relatively green solo dev who does this in my spare time. I love sharing my stuff with you all, and I hope you'll stick with me as I grow as a developer, story-teller, artist, and a deviant. I truly appreciate all your support! Love you pervs! :lepew:
 
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I jest, but I'm a relatively green solo dev who does this in my spare time. I love sharing my stuff with you all, and I hope you'll stick with me as I grow as a developer, story-teller, artist, and a deviant. I truly appreciate all your support! Love you pervs! :lepew:
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If you just want to dump your stuff, then do your thing. If you want to raise and nurish an audience, you have to compromise.

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Goosenards said:
Completed version now available on itch here:
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For those complaining about the ending:
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I jest, but I'm a relatively green solo dev who does this in my spare time. I love sharing my stuff with you all, and I hope you'll stick with me as I grow as a developer, story-teller, artist, and a deviant. I truly appreciate all your support! Love you pervs! :lepew:
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...congratz....
 
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Goosenards said:
Completed version now available on itch here:
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I jest, but I'm a relatively green solo dev who does this in my spare time. I love sharing my stuff with you all, and I hope you'll stick with me as I grow as a developer, story-teller, artist, and a deviant. I truly appreciate all your support! Love you pervs! :lepew:
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Look, you should be honest with everyone. Disingenuousness is a very negative trait in any content creator trying to create a fan base for themselves. You actually wanted to put out the most scandalous endings and have a good laugh at people's reactions, didn't you?

Creating an intricate story full of twists, branching paths, clever dialogues... That's something that takes practice for a "green" developer to master.
But this is different. Those obscenely ridiculous endings have nothing to do with being a "green" developer. Any human being who's never written a book, a movie, or a game, could take a second to think about them and reach the conclusion that they're not something most people would like to see in a game, at least not without any chance to get a different outcome. I'm assuming you are a human being (my apologies if I'm wrong), so you could very well foresee how people would feel when they saw your endings.
 
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My previous comment was just based on Xythurrs Spoiler, but after playing this myself i just got one thing to say: How much can you hate your own work and your supporters for you to decide to put in not only one, but 2 trash endings? This is almost on par with the Monster College endings. Complete and utter trash. Never came around to test it after its Dev decided to rework some of those endings, but holy hell, this is just as bad as that.

If you don´t want your supporters to spit on your next project the moment you decide to post it, as i said before, maybe take the time and add at least one good ending to your previous game.

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