VN Ren'Py Completed Sparkling Duplicity [Final] [Goosenards]

[Dessolos]

I really do not want to add more insult to injury but this is the worst ever ending I've ever seen to any AVN. I will not even play the excuse of writer's block because not even writer's block would produce that crappy ending of an AVN. He dealt with the build up good enough then poof....you're locked unto one particular root early on and hell breaks lose no matter what your other choices are. ALL endings are shitty, downright BS. I think the dev himself doubted himself. A complete waste of playing time.

yeah seriously like if I didn't like Blaire the ending would of been way worst of an disappointment for me. The only good thing is Blaire got a good ending but the rest felt like it was a big joke to him. I could of accept the Tina ending if there was a way to get a good ending for her as well.

 

[TsubameYui]

I actually enjoyed this game. It was a fun short story with a lot of laughs, and tons of amazing animations. As many have pointed out, the endings felt half-done, rushed, and generally fell far short of what they could have been. I did laugh my ass off at the Tina ending, especially because of the line from the other route about them naming a venereal disease after here in the future.

I do wish we'd had a Stephanie solo ending, and/or Blaire/Stephanie throuple happy ending, but dev seemed to have lost interest in this work. Could also have been intentionally trolling players, based on the line he threw in about how people didn't like the ending of his other game.

Still, despite the half-baked endings, the game was a fun romp, and only took up about an hour of my day. I'm overall happy I decided to give it a shot.

 

[mypossiblepast]

So Goosenards have some nice tools and skills, even mogging other devs with some cloth sim. The bare physics one thought is the shit, creating maybe the best jiggles in renpy history.

It's such a shame that the writer is not really a writer. After 4th erotic scene moment ago I wanted to critique them in here just now.
But now I read this thing:

This game is shit. So, two endings. The first ever decision in the game locks you into one of two routes. DEATH route or FAILURE OF POTENTIAL route. Your decisions dont matter, fuck the fatty and you get a fat scene and Steph scene.
DEATH - Accept Tina
You fuck Tina a bunch. You fucking die, well your dick does so its close enough. Of aids, herpes and shit they havent inveted yet.

FOP - Refuse Tina
You refused Tina, you got to have sex with Blair and Stephanie, a threesome even. Then Stephanie is freaked out by your crotch goblin marrying her mother and she vanishes. Blair gets pregnant.

Thats the game. Chaos has a bland ending from what I remember but this is just crap, made even worse because Chaos had the same damn ending and Goose clearly didn't learn a thing.

...and it totally makes sense.
The soulless, contentless, barebone animations with not even a hint of other dimension are probably the greatest predictor for the upcoming shitshow of a story.

And while I write passively aggressive for fun, I am genuinely sincerely recommending you - there is a lot of games under which I write the exact opposite of this post. I don't think you will, I know for sure I wouldn't be able to, but the most logical move for you would be to duo with some screenwriter-like counterpart of yours.

 

[adr5ian]

I played the final version. The cliffhanger ending of the Chapter 2 and the story until then promised a lot, promised one of the best games, so that's why the disappointment. The last update wasn't on par with the first two chapters, it was very short, rushed and shallow, neither the animations or the writing were on par with those of the first two chapters.
As for the endings, they weren't bad, just the same dark humor of the author that can be noticed in other moments of the game and just as absurd and disconnected from reality as the entire story. As a note, the developer mastered some scenes, like the bj, but the rest aren't on par. Anyway, it's just a twisted erotic fantasy with funny endings in the same style. Many wouldn't consider it funny, few enjoys this trolling style of humor, but I found the Tina ending as funny, only that that ending came way too soon and out of nowhere.
I think the developer should seriously think about another take and restart from the ending of Chapter 2. The premise for this game is too good to let it go to waste. I checked some of his other works and this one has the best premise by far and generally the first two chapters are his best work, so it would be a shame to let it go to waste like this, when he could have the father keep cucking his son and sleep with any new girlfriends his son has. I mean the game could go for a while just doing that and introducing new girls, but the story could go any other way, the possibilities are endless. Maybe with some help the developer can engage in projects with a larger scope. With the skills he already has it's a shame to keep doing these way too short games that end when they are in fact about to get truly interesting.

 

[akiostein]

just returned from the real world and this game is complete

 

[titouille313]

Well, i didn't know what i was expecting, got curious by the plot.
Despite the morally questionnable lore (it's only a game after all so why not...), I got really bluffed by the quality of the scenes and animations. Somehow made them almost feel real.
Really curious of what the dev will be working on next (Hopefully something a little more mature ..).

 

[Jamers]

yeah that's why i didn't entirely hate the Tina ending it was kind of fitting with the story if you go the path but wish there was a good ending variation.

Oh I agree, there could have been three or four more endings easily added but for what there was, it was the right flavor. Cheers

 

[GamerMcGameFace]

Super disappointed that Stephanie didn't get an ending, but Blaire was the best anyway.

 

[DarkXDaemon]

Ive found two endings first is where you gotta have your penis removed and second is where u end up with Blaire pregnant. Im wondering if ive missed any endings.