I haven't played previous versions, so I can't tell you if it's been improved or not. What I can tell you is the "english" isn't that bad most of the time. There's not a lot of lines of dialogue from which I can't figure out what the character is trying to say, but there were definitely more than a few of those. Generally, the dialogue comes across as either unnaturally dry, super awkward, unfathomably unrealistic, or cringe AF, but otherwise understandable. I'd say of the eastern European female-protagonist corruption games this one is in the top quartile for language use. That said, the plot is written like a misogynistic 14-year-old incel's wet dream.