Seriosly man. You are developer of this right ?
Why did you put Giant Squirrel here as the NTRing character ;] ? Do you plan on adding some visuals later to the scenes or something to actualy show how it works ? ;] Becose right now with just text this scenes are pretty bland. I cant tell if a Squirell is getting a blowjob or a normal dude ;]
Not that I have anything against some funny bestiality NTR - I would love that actualy - it would make the game stand out. But so far with little text and no visuals I cant get that feel out of it.
In fact here is how it can get even better - add a 3rd Little Sister Heroine, and increase the number of weird animalish followers that go with your group, that will also NTR the main hero as you go.
A tentacle squidlike monster.
A band of smaller Squirells - underlings of big Squirell guy(half meter tall each one)
Giant Minature Space Hamster Boo ;] etc.
Not too many but - 2 or 3 extra followers that also go after your girls would be cool.
But first of all you need some visuals to the sex scenes if possible. If it is going to be text only - at least make some nude standing sprites, and make the scenes more text heavy.
Cheers.
