Really like this, as current Trek is just woke garbage at this point, but I have to say that the transition from "Let me talk to Erok" to banging was so lightning fast that it felt jarring. Like, dude showed up, was conveniently gay so you could catch the metamorph pokemon and it's smooth as butter from there? I don't dislike that it was that easy, but it felt like the story flow was a bit rushed.
I guess I'm not sure if this is supposed to have actual lore and suspense and get the reader to take it seriously, or be purely a parody meme where I'm not supposed to think about the flow of the story in which things just happen. If it's supposed to be both, then I guess my only criticism is that the flow felt off at that point, but otherwise really digging it so far. Great job dev.